02-20-2023, 09:24 PM | #1 | |||||
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"Roses" - Club Remix - Dope Girl (no-show verse) feat. Pharaohs Army
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,'Y'she Got tha diamond ring! All the fine things; she ask-me "daddy: 'watya' !buy me?!" yo 'n she say- Quote:
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like she read my thoughts On the streets?I wanna be-a-boss -SETTLE DOWN w/ ICE-queen. don't b mad@me, ice queen her Flow's Flawless, we Drop Club Hits - from 'Norleans',ta Boston... ...all-she-want some Roses~ Last edited by Pharaohs Army; 02-20-2023 at 09:43 PM. |
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02-21-2023, 01:13 AM | #2 |
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fuckin' RAWWWW Lol.
So bendable that flow here... @Dope girl's most technically sound piece by far...every word here of hers was used, and that closing "Hook" couplet is her 3rd and 4th line. the "phatty" couplet in the next stanza is just fire from a technical standpoint. She used "cause" perfectly. NOT "because, bcuz, cuz",,, just the proper cause for the bar. EXCELLENT, my ice queen. Last edited by Pharaohs Army; 02-21-2023 at 01:15 AM. |
02-21-2023, 04:07 PM | #3 |
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Thanks
This is off the hook |
02-21-2023, 06:13 PM | #4 |
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I kinda "know what you're doing" hun.
At this point in the game. It's called inflection. Your whole verse is able to be delivered in many different ways. @Everyone notice: -the extra rhyme of "roses" 3 lines BELOW "lonely", allows for a "flow style #2" for sure...in other words alternative deliveries -the phatty line i referenced before, notice the beautiful "want"/"got" internal rhyme, -and of course, the actual closer...the final 3 lines can be said medium(normal), OR FAST & SICK/syncopated I'm the one he wanna know. He dig my flow, He said it's flawless. Indeed, DG..Let's gooooo...draw out that flawwless, for norleans to boston lol You focused on technical /flow and it showed this week- I've never seen your verse so tight, pardon the word. |
02-21-2023, 08:03 PM | #5 |
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Thanks for the feedbacks <3
you are a good writer too |
02-21-2023, 10:23 PM | #6 |
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No prob. All I really need to hear feedback wise. Simply put. I should of course “relax” now, but I’ve committed to so much feedback or vote that I might have to wait till Sunday to return to hibernation. and end the vortex.
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And Up, for her brand new one.
Get it? for-her-brand- worst wordplay. 3/5 EDIT: Quote:
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04-16-2023, 06:32 PM | #9 |
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Audio Take (Unpolished)
https://soundcloud.com/user-33750237...-for-dope-girl
Here hun @Dope girl Not sure if I am going to mix this... If my friend does it later this month I will post the new/polished but... ?NETCEES HAS TO SEE THIS RIGHT? Hope you like it. Great verse DG. ~PA |
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