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WEEK 2: Wanderer 0-1 VS Universe 0-1 WANDERER WINS
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10-09-2020, 03:15 PM
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Hey, Wand.
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10-09-2020, 03:51 PM
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The sky is his limit, I'll polish Wand off quick with a high end finish His punches backfire or hit nothing but air, 9/11 jumpers final decisions You going nowhere fast like treadmills, how does Bomb Bard's dirt taste? Ain't hard to see Wander in Shambles, that's how Spree caught up in the first place A failure of Titanic proportions mate, least your crew cut fits now I guess everything had to be ship shape before he went down... How's white bread the toast of the town with a Harry Potter wand? You that awkward slob at Comic-con no one really wants to comment on So keep wandering around, Davey Crockett - This vagrant's begging for wallets Seems like you preaching to a choir... any loose change in our pockets Looking like Mark Ruffalo's hangry cousin, you rip off shirts to be a man But I can see the bitch in you when you take the tank top off, Elisa Lam You a pre-pubescent non-lethal weapon, I bet that heater's bustin' Least it’s somethin', cuz this jerk off never creates anything of substance He must be a jack of all trades but a Master of none Don't gotta padaWan verse once begun... That shit was nerfed from the jump. Done.
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10-11-2020, 05:09 PM
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No idea who u are but that verse last week was a bore
& coz u didn’t wow Firsthand my initial punch will drop ur jaw Checked ur open mics. That shit’s only impressing gay boys Entitled that thread ‘Still Birth’ cos what u Deliver never makes noise Yeh I’m calling u out & if u talk back to me I’ll stomp that Then ur only Cagey response’ll be boken ribs reacting to the contact All eyes on my physique. Ain’t a girl I can’t get a glint from Chicks only studying universe cos u got em considering other planets to live on Stick to open mic. Faggot writing shit & calls it art Ur a bitch so imm’a pull the hairpins til ur entire wig falls apart Shouldn’t be allowed to vote. U got nothing don’t pretend u best How can u Pick Holes in my lines when u’ve never even made a dent in text Just laughable bars so keep up the fun. I’ll win.. u’ll forgive me that son water under the bridge come natural cos u likely a troll & prob sleep under one Cross me i give the green light.. believe my soldiers are mean I pay real money for a players head u can call it Fifa ultimate team |
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10-11-2020, 09:38 PM
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Elisa Lam was dopeeeee Vs Drop jaw Stillborn Planets bar was fucking lotb Both you guys getting better Wanderer your first half was some good shit. Planet bar is witty as fuck and worded real well. Fell off after that, but it was enough. Vote - wanderer
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10-12-2020, 12:31 AM
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No idea who u are but that verse last week was a bore
& coz u didn’t wow Firsthand my initial punch will drop ur jaw Checked ur open mics. That shit’s only impressing gay boys Entitled that thread ‘Still Birth’ cos what u Deliver never makes noise All eyes on my physique. Ain’t a girl I can’t get a glint from Chicks only studying universe cos u got em considering other planets to live on Shouldn’t be allowed to vote. U got nothing don’t pretend u best How can u Pick Holes in my lines when u’ve never even made a dent in text please Vs The sky is his limit, I'll polish Wand off quick with a high end finish His punches backfire or hit nothing but air, 9/11 jumpers final decisions Looking like Mark Ruffalo's hangry cousin, you rip off shirts to be a man But I can see the bitch in you when you take the tank top off, Elisa Lam You a pre-pubescent non-lethal weapon, I bet that heater's bustin' Least it’s somethin', cuz this jerk off never creates anything of substance this battle was cool, wand just went a little harder imo v/wand
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10-12-2020, 01:49 AM
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University won for sure
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10-12-2020, 08:39 PM
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Uni
Backfires was good, could've ben great Acquire loose change was well done, old wp tho Tank top off was dope, possibly lotb Padawan had potential but nah, nerfed angle was weak Wand Firsthand was decent Still birth was good Studying universe was dope, tied for lotb Close, had to come back to it... Came down to acquire vs. Firsthand Creative edge to Wand Mvgt Wanderer
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10-14-2020, 04:51 PM
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This was another entertaining battle. Not quite as good as the Blue/Dave battle, but very close and each came with some entertaining and witty concepts. Conceptually, I think Universe had slightly more complex/witty ideas (9/11 jumpers, ship shape, and a choir were highpoints), and Wanderer had more direct/easier to follow punches (planets and under the bridge were the ones I thought did the most damage)..
This is hard to vote on, but.. I think Universe edged it out barely. Good read, guys. Cheers.
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10-14-2020, 11:10 PM
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Elisa lam was mean as fuck god damn
Sadly, I wasn’t feeling much else from universe Wand had still birth, Studying universe (lmao) and pick holes V/wAnd
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10-15-2020, 02:45 AM
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The sky is his limit, I'll polish Wand off quick with a high end finish
His punches backfire or hit nothing but air, 9/11 jumpers final decisions Cool You going nowhere fast like treadmills, how does Bomb Bard's dirt taste? Ain't hard to see Wander in Shambles, that's how Spree caught up in the first place Not sure on this one A failure of Titanic proportions mate, least your crew cut fits now I guess everything had to be ship shape before he went down... Feel like there was more to this concept maybe. It’s ok How's white bread the toast of the town with a Harry Potter wand? You that awkward slob at Comic-con no one really wants to comment on Nice flow here So keep wandering around, Davey Crockett - This vagrant's begging for wallets Seems like you preaching to a choir... any loose change in our pockets Cool Looking like Mark Ruffalo's hangry cousin, you rip off shirts to be a man But I can see the bitch in you when you take the tank top off, Elisa Lam damn You a pre-pubescent non-lethal weapon, I bet that heater's bustin' Least it’s somethin', cuz this jerk off never creates anything of substance Cool He must be a jack of all trades but a Master of none Don't gotta padaWan verse once begun... That shit was nerfed from the jump. padawan verse doesn’t really work both ways but I see what you did No idea who u are but that verse last week was a bore & coz u didn’t wow Firsthand my initial punch will drop ur jaw You bastard I was gonna use this concept this week til I peeped this battle early. Nice Checked ur open mics. That shit’s only impressing gay boys Entitled that thread ‘Still Birth’ cos what u Deliver never makes noise Cold af Yeh I’m calling u out & if u talk back to me I’ll stomp that Then ur only Cagey response’ll be boken ribs reacting to the contact Cool, I think cagey response coulda been brought in better like “if he gives a cagey response it’s because..” All eyes on my physique. Ain’t a girl I can’t get a glint from Chicks only studying universe cos u got em considering other planets to live on Fire Stick to open mic. Faggot writing shit & calls it art Ur a bitch so imm’a pull the hairpins til ur entire wig falls apart Nice Shouldn’t be allowed to vote. U got nothing don’t pretend u best How can u Pick Holes in my lines when u’ve never even made a dent in text Bit light Just laughable bars so keep up the fun. I’ll win.. u’ll forgive me that son water under the bridge come natural cos u likely a troll & prob sleep under one Troll kinda played and wording a bit janky Cross me i give the green light.. believe my soldiers are mean I pay real money for a players head u can call it Fifa ultimate team Cool braggish bar Universe has some cool ideas and writes well but I think he needs to rejig his style so each couplet is focussed on ending with the joke of that makes sense. Maybe I’m being narrow minded as that’s what everyone does but it just hits harder for me. Wand had a bunch of cool stuff and did enough for the W. Good battle though. Vote - wand
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A failure of Titanic proportions mate, least your crew cut fits now I guess everything had to be ship shape before he went down... So keep wandering around, Davey Crockett - This vagrant's begging for wallets Seems like you preaching to a choir... any loose change in our pockets Looking like Mark Ruffalo's hangry cousin, you rip off shirts to be a man But I can see the bitch in you when you take the tank top off, Elisa Lam Cool verse, big switch up from last week, was expecting more of the same and was pleasantly surprised. I dug the setup/punch link to the titanic line, loose change was dope, Elisa Lam was fire. Wand - No idea who u are but that verse last week was a bore & coz u didn’t wow Firsthand my initial punch will drop ur jaw All eyes on my physique. Ain’t a girl I can’t get a glint from Chicks only studying universe cos u got em considering other planets to live on Just laughable bars so keep up the fun. I’ll win.. u’ll forgive me that son water under the bridge come natural cos u likely a troll & prob sleep under one Dope verse Wand, even the stuff I didnt quote wasn't bad, just a bit light. Studying Universe was dooooope. I think Wand edged it, tied on quotables, but I'm giving the nod to the Universe nameplay over the Elisa Lam bar. Solid battle, fellas. V - Wand
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10-15-2020, 03:30 PM
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The sky is his limit, I'll polish Wand off quick with a high end finish
His punches backfire or hit nothing but air, 9/11 jumpers final decisions okk You going nowhere fast like treadmills, how does Bomb Bard's dirt taste? Ain't hard to see Wander in Shambles, that's how Spree caught up in the first place ehh A failure of Titanic proportions mate, least your crew cut fits now I guess everything had to be ship shape before he went down... titanic played How's white bread the toast of the town with a Harry Potter wand? You that awkward slob at Comic-con no one really wants to comment on not hard hitting So keep wandering around, Davey Crockett - This vagrant's begging for wallets Seems like you preaching to a choir... any loose change in our pockets cool Looking like Mark Ruffalo's hangry cousin, you rip off shirts to be a man But I can see the bitch in you when you take the tank top off, Elisa Lam fire You a pre-pubescent non-lethal weapon, I bet that heater's bustin' Least it’s somethin', cuz this jerk off never creates anything of substance nop He must be a jack of all trades but a Master of none Don't gotta padaWan verse once begun... That shit was nerfed from the jump. dont get this vs. No idea who u are but that verse last week was a bore & coz u didn’t wow Firsthand my initial punch will drop ur jaw cool Checked ur open mics. That shit’s only impressing gay boys Entitled that thread ‘Still Birth’ cos what u Deliver never makes noise ehh Yeh I’m calling u out & if u talk back to me I’ll stomp that Then ur only Cagey response’ll be boken ribs reacting to the contact not getting this All eyes on my physique. Ain’t a girl I can’t get a glint from Chicks only studying universe cos u got em considering other planets to live on lolll Stick to open mic. Faggot writing shit & calls it art Ur a bitch so imm’a pull the hairpins til ur entire wig falls apart ehh Shouldn’t be allowed to vote. U got nothing don’t pretend u best How can u Pick Holes in my lines when u’ve never even made a dent in text cool Just laughable bars so keep up the fun. I’ll win.. u’ll forgive me that son water under the bridge come natural cos u likely a troll & prob sleep under one nope Cross me i give the green light.. believe my soldiers are mean I pay real money for a players head u can call it Fifa ultimate team cool close battle.. too long tbh if both came 10 this could have been more toughh. universe came dope and wanderer too but wanderer has the experience factor, which gave him the edge here for a more consistent verse. good stuff but my v/ goes for wanderer |
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Universe that opener was really good
You have a ton of potential Wanderer just had the edge of a veteran here Good battle That fifa bar was insane tbh
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The sky is his limit, I'll polish Wand off quick with a high end finish
His punches backfire or hit nothing but air, 9/11 jumpers final decisions okay cool concept, solid open You going nowhere fast like treadmills, how does Bomb Bard's dirt taste? Ain't hard to see Wander in Shambles, that's how Spree caught up in the first place sorry bro im missing it A failure of Titanic proportions mate, least your crew cut fits now I guess everything had to be ship shape before he went down... yeah this is cool to me... original concept delivered with swag How's white bread the toast of the town with a Harry Potter wand? You that awkward slob at Comic-con no one really wants to comment on haha this bar was very different stylistically from the nbl norm.. i dig it tho flow was impeccible and it was funny to me So keep wandering around, Davey Crockett - This vagrant's begging for wallets Seems like you preaching to a choir... any loose change in our pockets old wordplay but the flip is coolish, like the misdirection Looking like Mark Ruffalo's hangry cousin, you rip off shirts to be a man But I can see the bitch in you when you take the tank top off, Elisa Lam jesus christ.. this is fire. at first i didnt like the pause right to the name drop at the end but nah it works great You a pre-pubescent non-lethal weapon, I bet that heater's bustin' Least it’s somethin', cuz this jerk off never creates anything of substance cool wording , this was ight He must be a jack of all trades but a Master of none Don't gotta padaWan verse once begun... That shit was nerfed from the jump. this one is too rough around the edges for me No idea who u are but that verse last week was a bore & coz u didn’t wow Firsthand my initial punch will drop ur jaw ill give the multi a pass due to accent.. cool concept Checked ur open mics. That shit’s only impressing gay boys Entitled that thread ‘Still Birth’ cos what u Deliver never makes noise nice, this is cool Yeh I’m calling u out & if u talk back to me I’ll stomp that Then ur only Cagey response’ll be boken ribs reacting to the contact maybe couldve been tweeked a bit but cool original concept here All eyes on my physique. Ain’t a girl I can’t get a glint from Chicks only studying universe cos u got em considering other planets to live on i dont get all the hype for this bar personally... seems pretty basic and obvious to me tbh...okay nameplay Stick to open mic. Faggot writing shit & calls it art Ur a bitch so imm’a pull the hairpins til ur entire wig falls apart niice, cool gun bar Shouldn’t be allowed to vote. U got nothing don’t pretend u best How can u Pick Holes in my lines when u’ve never even made a dent in text ehhh Just laughable bars so keep up the fun. I’ll win.. u’ll forgive me that son water under the bridge come natural cos u likely a troll & prob sleep under one water under the bridge / troll concepts are played as an idiom and the wording feels off... this is a miss for me Cross me i give the green light.. believe my soldiers are mean I pay real money for a players head u can call it Fifa ultimate team nice pretty cool concept and "i got shooters" gun bar Cool battle guys. Elisa Lam was very dope....I want to vote Uni cause i dug his unique approach and thought he had some really cool concepts....but so did Wand, and i do think he was a bit more consistent.. both had a couple whiffs tho... close call but yeah im going Wand....props fellas Vote Wanderer |
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