QwarterZ Qwarterly #4

Mr. J · 06-30-2015, 04:23 PM

It's like I have this on lock with a homing beacon
and as of late, movement seemed only recent..
watchful eyes got me lurking, exposing secrets
Pandora's box opened with a holy sequence
blade quarter of the way in as Shinobi creeps in
with their chest out now, like they holding weed in
I control the outcome as I masterfully mold a defense
the earth is fractured as the eroding seeps in
a bed arose, I'm on my sadistic, lonely freak shit
all up in mother earth while the bones get sea sick
euphoria, hallucinations, YOU GOTTA SMOKE A BOWL TO SEE THIS
(shit) if the method was read correctly, you'd see how high
get haunted by your actions with your seat down like...
Jennifer Aniston, breaking character, better antonyms
I'm better off with a better analysis...
the highest bidder, with the sense of a capitalist
with each nail getting deep enough to upset your manicurist
the wrong country leaves a beheaded evangelist
so I just set the stage, left the plot in a bloodied manuscript....

Witty · 06-30-2015, 08:23 PM

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blade quarter of the way in as Shinobi creeps in
with their chest out now, like they holding weed in
I control the outcome as I masterfully mold a defense
the earth is fractured as the eroding seeps in
a bed arose, I'm on my sadistic, lonely freak shit
all up in mother earth while the bones get sea sick
euphoria, hallucinations, YOU GOTTA SMOKE A BOWL TO SEE THIS

This whole section was flames my friend, rhymes were executed perfectly and your concepts were really impressive, that holy sequence/shinobi creeps in couplet was super super nice, all of it was really. Usually your rhymes can be a little off, but you showed with this piece you are capable of keeping them tight when you feel like it. Enjoying your recent spree, keep 'em coming!

El Muffin · 07-01-2015, 02:25 AM

You gotta smoke a bowl to see this

I feel tge same bro

This was ridiculous

Mr. J · 07-01-2015, 12:40 PM

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Originally Posted by Muff

You gotta smoke a bowl to see this

I feel tge same bro

This was ridiculous

If the method was read correctly........you'd see how high....

this has been my favorite series by far..haha

06-30-2015, 04:23 PM	#1
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,025 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349678	QwarterZ Qwarterly #4 It's like I have this on lock with a homing beacon and as of late, movement seemed only recent.. watchful eyes got me lurking, exposing secrets Pandora's box opened with a holy sequence blade quarter of the way in as Shinobi creeps in with their chest out now, like they holding weed in I control the outcome as I masterfully mold a defense the earth is fractured as the eroding seeps in a bed arose, I'm on my sadistic, lonely freak shit all up in mother earth while the bones get sea sick euphoria, hallucinations, YOU GOTTA SMOKE A BOWL TO SEE THIS (shit) if the method was read correctly, you'd see how high get haunted by your actions with your seat down like... Jennifer Aniston, breaking character, better antonyms I'm better off with a better analysis... the highest bidder, with the sense of a capitalist with each nail getting deep enough to upset your manicurist the wrong country leaves a beheaded evangelist so I just set the stage, left the plot in a bloodied manuscript.... __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

07-01-2015, 02:25 AM	#3
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,693 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230531	You gotta smoke a bowl to see this I feel tge same bro This was ridiculous __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople