Week 1: oats vs. Rawn MD \\ oats wins via no-show

Certain · 02-22-2014, 03:10 PM

Season 3

The Basics | Read the full rules here.

Verses are due Thursday at 11:59 p.m. PT.

Deadline extensions of 24 hours are available on request and cannot be denied.

Votes are due Sunday at 11:59 p.m. PT.

Verses may not exceed 48 lines (or 650 words if formatted in a paragraph style) unless agreed upon by the opponent.

Voting on three battles is required. If you win and don't vote, you will receive a loss instead. If you lose and don't vote, you will receive a one-week suspension. Please post links to your three votes in this thread.

Topic

"Brave New World"

Good luck, @oats and @Rawn MD.

oats · 02-22-2014, 07:03 PM

Yo

Rawn MD · 02-22-2014, 09:22 PM

what up big man; goin swing them doors of perception wide open here.

oats · 02-27-2014, 12:57 PM

Probably gonna need that extension.

oats · 03-01-2014, 12:13 AM

ugh just can't seem to get this done, but for the sake of dropping something on time:

you were.
bigger than physics, chemistry, even simple anatomy
the way you met me, released me from umbilical gravity
your hands embedded me, a bed for me, metaphysical air to breathe
no oxytocin/labored closeness - you were just there for me
you punished me, lectured me, managed the stress
gave me everything you had and then, handled the rest
tangible steps that I stumbled on and stained with my blood
angered you none - concerned only to never leave family bereft
ahead of your time. whenever I was an unfathomable mess
my punishment for trouble was backgammon or chess
that was lesson - think ahead, consider the consequences
prolong attention, pursue the most honest exit

02-22-2014, 03:10 PM	#1
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899402	Week 1: oats vs. Rawn MD \\ oats wins via no-show Season 3 The Basics \| Read the full rules here. Verses are due Thursday at 11:59 p.m. PT. Deadline extensions of 24 hours are available on request and cannot be denied. Votes are due Sunday at 11:59 p.m. PT. Verses may not exceed 48 lines (or 650 words if formatted in a paragraph style) unless agreed upon by the opponent. Voting on three battles is required. If you win and don't vote, you will receive a loss instead. If you lose and don't vote, you will receive a one-week suspension. Please post links to your three votes in this thread. Topic "Brave New World" Good luck, @oats and @Rawn MD. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

02-22-2014, 07:03 PM	#2
oats Steel Cut Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,073 Battle Record: 19-10 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night LXXXIV - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 79005425	Yo __________________ You should be water

02-22-2014, 09:22 PM	#3
Rawn MD Get MacDon Join Date: Dec 1969 Posts: 2,168 Battle Record: 3-7 Accomplishments - OM HOF Rep Power: 0	what up big man; goin swing them doors of perception wide open here. __________________ FFC>FCC A. bove T. he R. est

02-27-2014, 12:57 PM	#4
oats Steel Cut Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,073 Battle Record: 19-10 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night LXXXIV - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 79005425	Probably gonna need that extension. __________________ You should be water

03-01-2014, 12:13 AM	#5
oats Steel Cut Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,073 Battle Record: 19-10 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night LXXXIV - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 79005425	ugh just can't seem to get this done, but for the sake of dropping something on time: you were. bigger than physics, chemistry, even simple anatomy the way you met me, released me from umbilical gravity your hands embedded me, a bed for me, metaphysical air to breathe no oxytocin/labored closeness - you were just there for me you punished me, lectured me, managed the stress gave me everything you had and then, handled the rest tangible steps that I stumbled on and stained with my blood angered you none - concerned only to never leave family bereft ahead of your time. whenever I was an unfathomable mess my punishment for trouble was backgammon or chess that was lesson - think ahead, consider the consequences prolong attention, pursue the most honest exit __________________ You should be water