07-22-2018, 07:39 PM | #1 |
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Aero vs trap. - AERO WINS
The Summer Classic ‘18 The Premier Text Battling Tournament @Aero @trap. Rules Due Dates:
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07-22-2018, 08:43 PM | #2 |
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Verses are due quick lol.
Trap you don’t stand a chance. 10-12
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07-22-2018, 10:18 PM | #3 |
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word. going 12.
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07-26-2018, 10:37 PM | #4 |
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Aero & Trap go to a popular nightclub downtown L.A. Aero is motioned over by a group of girls.*
Dime Piece: “Hey sweet thang you looking good tonight” Aero: “Thanks love. You know women call me Shemar” Dime Piece: “Oh yea why is that?” Aero: “Because they want Moore of me. Haha I’m just being silly. Can I grab you a drink?” Dime Piece: “Yes, I’ll have a Long Island. Get my girls a drink too? It’s 8 of us.” Aero: “Hell nah. Offer rescinded bitch!” *Aero walks back fuming over to where Trap was standing* Trap: “What’s wrong man?” Yooo this hoe got me fucked up! Wanted me to drop some cash He replied “she got me fucked up too! Last week her brothers stomped my ass” I shook my head, I be in the gym, can’t act tough when you look shook When I was curling up to 60lbs Trap was curling up to a good book Trap you a bitch, I don’t know you never show you no honor Fitting name, Trap is what ya mom did to pops when she poked a hole in the condom I’m kinky, Make ALL ya folks crack a whip on me then I’m giving them Dick Surprise birthday party, come home to see all ya friends and fam with a switch Gun play, make you look like Urkel when you dance Let off a few shells, LOL shitty situation there’s a turtle in ya pants
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07-27-2018, 12:03 AM | #5 |
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yo, you see him tryna challenge my name and character?
i'm about to turn this from summer classic to the st valentines day massacre i'll start dropping corpses like that thug capone did while aero'll bring a box of chocolates and a dozen roses this battle is a flawless victory i'm a mob boss, and the hits orchestrated like the new york symphony in the club you lame and straight fag i whistle and wave my hand and ya bitch comes to me like a taxi cab you a mad goofy bastid, are you talking or you rappin? hush def said it best "never underestimate the classics.."
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07-27-2018, 06:27 AM | #6 |
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Yooo this hoe got me fucked up! Wanted me to drop some cash
He replied “she got me fucked up too! Last week her brothers stomped my ass” lol if it weren’t for the intro this wouldn’t have any impact but overall it’s funny I shook my head, I be in the gym, can’t act tough when you look shook When I was curling up to 60lbs Trap was curling up to a good book lol what? Trap you a bitch, I don’t know you never show you no honor Fitting name, Trap is what ya mom did to pops when she poked a hole in the condom didnt rhyme but decent I’m kinky, Make ALL ya folks crack a whip on me then I’m giving them Dick Surprise birthday party, come home to see all ya friends and fam with a switch ... Gun play, make you look like Urkel when you dance Let off a few shells, LOL shitty situation there’s a turtle in ya pants lmao dead Vs yo, you see him tryna challenge my name and character? i'm about to turn this from summer classic to the st valentines day massacre nah you’d have needed tie ins for that reference to work i'll start dropping corpses like that thug capone did while aero'll bring a box of chocolates and a dozen roses pshh ok I see where this is going. this battle is a flawless victory i'm a mob boss, and the hits orchestrated like the new york symphony not bad here, pretty cool in the club you lame and straight fag i whistle and wave my hand and ya bitch comes to me like a taxi cab lol corny, but decent you a mad goofy bastid, are you talking or you rappin? hush def said it best "never underestimate the classics.. you threw away the win with this one smh Trap coulda easily won this with that shit aero dropped, because trap had a cool like with the mob boss shit. But 2 bars were straight stupid filler...aero had an opener and closer that were enough to win it. Bad battle. Vote Aero |
07-27-2018, 08:28 AM | #7 |
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I dunno.. Aero kind of lost this for himself to me. Condom line didn’t really work since she would have TRAPPED him, not TRAP him. Maybe it’s just me but I didn’t like it. Curling a book line was better than the trap one. Fam with a switch was a decent idea just had no sting to the punch and lost some effect that way. Closer was kinda funny but corny too. Def not Aero at his witty best.
Traps opener didn’t really work, needed more for me, the box of chocolates kind of followed on from that but I didn’t feel it landed too great. I was glad when you switched to a more Adonis style because you got better with New York Symphony which was cool and the taxi cab line was alright too. The closer was just straight, maybe styling a bit on him for underestimating you but I agree with Zelph that that made this closer than it needed to be. Im gonna edge it to trap, largely because of those four out of his last six lines. Aero got caught sleeping here IMO.
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07-27-2018, 09:09 AM | #8 |
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Man this ain’t close trap sucks
Vote aero do I have to explain really? |
07-27-2018, 09:15 AM | #9 | |
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Vote aero. Dunno how trap threw this I recall him being better. Regardless this was weak ass battle an Aero dude.. please go back to the sort otf fire you would drop in the Lyrical Olympics. Missed that shit. Loved that style you had. |
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the only bar I liked in the entire battle was traps ny symphony bar. if aero even tried at all he would've won? v trap |
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07-27-2018, 01:30 PM | #11 |
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Yooo this hoe got me fucked up! Wanted me to drop some cash
He replied “she got me fucked up too! Last week her brothers stomped my ass” LOL, Aero what is you talking bout bro I shook my head, I be in the gym, can’t act tough when you look shook When I was curling up to 60lbs Trap was curling up to a good book Lmao, this is funny here Trap you a bitch, I don’t know you never show you no honor Fitting name, Trap is what ya mom did to pops when she poked a hole in the condom Aero on some comedy shit, this was coo no hard hitting jab with it or anything I’m kinky, Make ALL ya folks crack a whip on me then I’m giving them Dick Surprise birthday party, come home to see all ya friends and fam with a switch I like this here Gun play, make you look like Urkel when you dance Let off a few shells, LOL shitty situation there’s a turtle in ya pants Lmao nahhhh Aero! -------------- yo, you see him tryna challenge my name and character? i'm about to turn this from summer classic to the st valentines day massacre Light, but coo opener i'll start dropping corpses like that thug capone did while aero'll bring a box of chocolates and a dozen roses Huh? this battle is a flawless victory i'm a mob boss, and the hits orchestrated like the new york symphony This was ok here in the club you lame and straight fag i whistle and wave my hand and ya bitch comes to me like a taxi cab This is played here you a mad goofy bastid, are you talking or you rappin? hush def said it best "never underestimate the classics.." This closer is ok! Lol I honestly don't know what hell Aero was doing, but his verse was funny as fuck to me personally. Trap verse was ok but he didn't really have no hard hitting jabs or good punches with critical execution. Aero didn't neither, but the comedy in his verse def made up for it. I got Aero here V-Aero
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07-27-2018, 01:39 PM | #12 |
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v/ trap for taking it seriously at least
both fucking sucked though aero this is why you're only a thread maker with top ten list and argument baits no skill or humor in narration |
07-27-2018, 03:44 PM | #13 |
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This was wack to the fullest. How you write a line about cracking whips on you, don’t you presume to be black? From now on you can’t direct any racial shit towards chil Phil. This whole verse is a spoof. Trap Wasn’t trap considered top tier battlers back in the day? Anyway this was a decent verse with a lot of rust showing. The NY line is clearly the LOTB. Honestly it’s enough to take the win. This nigga said I’m kinky let y’all crack a whip on me what in the holy fuck. Trap |
07-27-2018, 03:58 PM | #14 |
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I usually think you're funny but the opening approach was blahhh to me tbh
Yooo this hoe got me fucked up! Wanted me to drop some cash He replied “she got me fucked up too! Last week her brothers stomped my ass” nah, filler as this wasn't even chuckle worthy I shook my head, I be in the gym, can’t act tough when you look shook When I was curling up to 60lbs Trap was curling up to a good book lol, smooth.. this was cool Trap you a bitch, I don’t know you never show you no honor Fitting name, Trap is what ya mom did to pops when she poked a hole in the condom multi a reachhh.. kinda funny punchline, bit light tho I’m kinky, Make ALL ya folks crack a whip on me then I’m giving them Dick Surprise birthday party, come home to see all ya friends and fam with a switch I kindve liked the concept here with the surprise party angle but MY GOD that setup makes this the gayest fucking bar of all time Gun play, make you look like Urkel when you dance Let off a few shells, LOL shitty situation there’s a turtle in ya pants hahaha, corny but lol Vs yo, you see him tryna challenge my name and character? i'm about to turn this from summer classic to the st valentines day massacre mehh, ezboardish i'll start dropping corpses like that thug capone did while aero'll bring a box of chocolates and a dozen roses nah, not feelin this battle is a flawless victory i'm a mob boss, and the hits orchestrated like the new york symphony dece in the club you lame and straight fag i whistle and wave my hand and ya bitch comes to me like a taxi cab lol, solid metaand swag this was good you a mad goofy bastid, are you talking or you rappin? hush def said it best "never underestimate the classics.. nah, poor finish Dunno trap, the taxi cab line was cool but that was about all I was feelin... Aero saying he is gunna fuck Trap's dad should automatically make him lose tbh... but he had a couple cool ideas and took this Vote - Aero |
07-27-2018, 09:23 PM | #15 |
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Not going to break it down because fuck you, idc.
I didn't like much of this battle but Aero's curl up with a book was by far lotb, and actually one of my favourite of this round...the rest was corny and sucked. Trap didn't really have anything good, his shit was very basic. Vote Aero.
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07-27-2018, 09:32 PM | #16 |
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i honestly just keyed something up last minute bc when i went to post, all aero had was like 4 bars up to the line "trap you a bitch" lol, and nothing past that so i was like okay cool he's not trying. then i wake up the next day and the other 6 bars are in there lol.
we were both lazy as fuck here. thanks for the pity votes y'all. if this ends up tied give it to aero. pce.
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07-27-2018, 09:44 PM | #17 |
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Trap had some good bars( like 2 ) but overall Aero was better
V-Aero (its close tho) |
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