S&F Match: King Ra. vs. Buddha - KING RA. WINS 5-1

King Ra. · 11-28-2013, 09:02 PM

Rules:

16 lines
House rules apply
due date: Friday, December 6th, midnight Pacific.
check in, post 2 links.

@Buddha

King Ra. · 11-28-2013, 09:03 PM

Check. I made it due for next week Friday, midnight Pacific. Hope that's plenty of time for you. I will probably post beforehand.

Zen · 11-28-2013, 09:32 PM

I'll probably post before. Links will go here.

Zen · 12-07-2013, 06:17 PM

Smokin' narcotics; dopest personage laid in focused sonnets.
The holiest of prophets is back in the rafters
Strapped with action packed moments of logic
To crash in to you faggots through a dose of the rawest.
I crawl through the ropes. Exhausted, just blowing steam.
Accosted. The boss of the new regime.
Lost in a dream of emotional bondage clawin through the screen.
The moments upon us. I've risen. God of this.
The wizard's hot you trick. You're not. You miss.
Got the shotty in the whip still smokin from when it popped on you bitch.
I'm better than you. Whole nutha level of real illin' that's still killin'
you faggots with real skill and its a fact you lack the passion to deal with it.
I've mastered this craft. You haven't. You're still distant.
I spit missiles at you with six pistols blastin' til the chills enter.
Fuck I'm in a bad mood. Luck's laughin at you.
I'm the original pinnacle that's got you real bitter.
Visceral when skills delivered. I'm cold.
Winter ripped through this verse delivered to you in spurts.
This songs a masterpiece with the strongest of gravity.
Center of the universe.

King Ra. · 12-08-2013, 11:47 AM

I'm hot & you were never warm, SOCOM within a Desert Storm,
with a desert armed & you're the ass the bullets is pinnin' on.
Get Left4Dead on Silent Hill. Fuck a zombie apocalypse cuz when I pop the clips,
it's sure to raise more Hell than where Satan dwells without a pot to piss.... in.
Just imagine the shit, urine. Fuck peace! Your swag is laughable,
I bring terror to any Sabbatical & crack a skull hoisting a frozen cantaloupe.
Goddamn I'm dope! "The Great White Disaster" my dark fable, when spit'n darts fatal,
swim in these waters & you're sure to see more Jaws than Sharknado!
Penetrate any woman's pussy, breach the walls with my Trojan Horse,
I'm the iceberg that deterred the course of the Titanic showin' no remorse.
It sunk of course.... Get my drift? Spazz every time I begin to kick knowledge,
you're just a snake in the grass bitches callin' out louder than when HE dies in Metal Gear Solid.
Like Broly, I'm brolic. Mass & ripped. Apologies I have to FLIP-
you're a deceased Jesus of Nazareth consumed by the darkness of Daedalus' labyrinth.
Flows? Concepts? I've mastered it. Consider this match as your coffin,
fuck bringing a White House Down....

.... Ra.'s the only GOD standing after Olympus Has Fallen.

King Ra. · 12-09-2013, 06:38 PM

Got you tonight homie.

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=31000
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?p=224911#post224911

Bender · 12-24-2013, 12:37 PM

So I read this battle twice and really tried to find a punch...I couldn't find one. Both of you guys sound like you have a decent flow and this style might work in person but in a text battle there was nothing there. You guys both kind of just talked about how great you were without throwing any punches at your opponent. Although I was not satisfied with either verse I have to base my decision on the better verse,

Vote-King Ra.

Allen Knight · 12-24-2013, 12:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jimmy

So I read this battle twice and really tried to find a punch...I couldn't find one. Both of you guys sound like you have a decent flow and this style might work in person but in a text battle there was nothing there. You guys both kind of just talked about how great you were without throwing any punches at your opponent. Although I was not satisfied with either verse I have to base my decision on the better verse,

Vote-King Ra.

Its a swag an flow battle the point.is to brag about urself lmaooo

Bender · 12-24-2013, 12:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Allen Knight

Its a swag an flow battle the point.is to brag about urself lmaooo

Hmmm never heard of it, I guess that I look like a dipshit then....

In that case King Ra's last line killed it, I actually did like it but didn't understand why they were talking about themselves. I read through them both again and King Ra still gets the vote.

Ryan 12 · 01-11-2014, 07:48 PM

The moments upon us. I've risen. God of this.
The wizard's hot you trick. You're not. You miss.
Got the shotty in the whip still smokin from when it popped on you bitch.
^^you miss/you bitch - very basic rhymes

vs

Like Broly, I'm brolic. Mass & ripped. Apologies I have to FLIP-
you're a deceased Jesus of Nazareth consumed by the darkness of Daedalus' labyrinth.
Flows? Concepts? I've mastered it. Consider this match as your coffin,
fuck bringing a White House Down....
.... Ra.'s the only GOD standing after Olympus Has Fallen.

this was a cool battle. i think zenland rushed his verse cuz i read better from him he had very simple stuff, nothing metaphorical or in depth. his flow was off too cuz of the multiple periods all over the place. Ra had more vocab and imagery.

vote - king Ra

MayDayMozart · 01-28-2014, 02:56 AM

Well...I'm just a noob...
This baattle was beyond my horizons to judge . But it was awesome...a true neck to neck fight...
The concepts and punches-unique....I.appreciate both of ur efforts guys

Frank · 02-19-2014, 11:26 AM

Vote - zenland

Overall cleaner swagg

Sharp · 02-19-2014, 04:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Frank

Vote - zenland

Overall cleaner swagg

Can you explain a lil more?

Just Write · 02-23-2014, 09:44 PM

My dudes, dope battle guys. It was pretty close, zenland you absolutely killed it through the first half and then idk, the rest just didnt do it for me. King ra i dug the video game and movie references through out and the the sharknado like was corny as fuck lol. But overall i think i felt ra's more so he gets my vote

Answer · 02-24-2014, 08:53 PM

I've never heard of a swag and flow battle lol

I felt like Zen was just going on 20 tangents and using arbitrary multis. It seems like something I would expect to see somebody freestyle. Just because you're bragging about yourself doesn't mean you can't incorporate some elements of wordplay...or at least some imagery or metaphors or aspects of humor.

Like Eminem saying some shit like

"The one man on the planet that'll drive off of the Grand Canyon
Hop out of a Grand Am and land in it handstanding
Any man planning to battle will get snatched outta his clothes
So fast it'll look like an invisible man standing"

but I didn't really see anything in Zen's verse that I'd consider quoteworthy

Ra, some of your verse almost comes off as if you're dissing opponent - but I understand that even in braggadocio rhymes, peple tend to use proverbial "You's". Aside from that, your verse was solid - I didn't really see anything that made me go "Oh snap" but the video game references were cool & there were was no shortage of metaphors or wordplay.

Solid job on both sides

MVGT - King Ra

Paradigm · 03-10-2014, 09:24 PM

Buddha had no metas or creativity in his bars just a bunch of empty flow with no substence... king ra had the basics down and easily takes this

Vote - King Ra.

RTF: http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=57076

Certain · 03-10-2014, 10:27 PM

Finally this battle comes to an end. @King Ra. gets the win.

11-28-2013, 09:02 PM	#1
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932960	S&F Match: King Ra. vs. Buddha - KING RA. WINS 5-1 Rules: 16 lines House rules apply due date: Friday, December 6th, midnight Pacific. check in, post 2 links. @Buddha __________________ Vetwork, bitches.

11-28-2013, 09:03 PM	#2
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932960	Check. I made it due for next week Friday, midnight Pacific. Hope that's plenty of time for you. I will probably post beforehand. __________________ Vetwork, bitches.

12-08-2013, 11:47 AM	#5
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932960	I'm hot & you were never warm, SOCOM within a Desert Storm, with a desert armed & you're the ass the bullets is pinnin' on. Get Left4Dead on Silent Hill. Fuck a zombie apocalypse cuz when I pop the clips, it's sure to raise more Hell than where Satan dwells without a pot to piss.... in. Just imagine the shit, urine. Fuck peace! Your swag is laughable, I bring terror to any Sabbatical & crack a skull hoisting a frozen cantaloupe. Goddamn I'm dope! "The Great White Disaster" my dark fable, when spit'n darts fatal, swim in these waters & you're sure to see more Jaws than Sharknado! Penetrate any woman's pussy, breach the walls with my Trojan Horse, I'm the iceberg that deterred the course of the Titanic showin' no remorse. It sunk of course.... Get my drift? Spazz every time I begin to kick knowledge, you're just a snake in the grass bitches callin' out louder than when HE dies in Metal Gear Solid. Like Broly, I'm brolic. Mass & ripped. Apologies I have to FLIP- you're a deceased Jesus of Nazareth consumed by the darkness of Daedalus' labyrinth. Flows? Concepts? I've mastered it. Consider this match as your coffin, fuck bringing a White House Down.... .... Ra.'s the only GOD standing after Olympus Has Fallen. __________________ Vetwork, bitches.

12-09-2013, 06:38 PM	#6
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932960	Got you tonight homie. http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=31000 http://netcees.co/showthread.php?p=224911#post224911 __________________ Vetwork, bitches. Last edited by King Ra.; 12-09-2013 at 10:41 PM.

01-28-2014, 02:56 AM	#11
MayDayMozart Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2014 Posts: 2 Rep Power: 0	Well...I'm just a noob... This baattle was beyond my horizons to judge . But it was awesome...a true neck to neck fight... The concepts and punches-unique....I.appreciate both of ur efforts guys __________________ *Real Eyes Realise Real Lies*

11-28-2013, 09:32 PM	#3
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,104 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079719	I'll probably post before. Links will go here.

12-07-2013, 06:17 PM	#4
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,104 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079719	Smokin' narcotics; dopest personage laid in focused sonnets. The holiest of prophets is back in the rafters Strapped with action packed moments of logic To crash in to you faggots through a dose of the rawest. I crawl through the ropes. Exhausted, just blowing steam. Accosted. The boss of the new regime. Lost in a dream of emotional bondage clawin through the screen. The moments upon us. I've risen. God of this. The wizard's hot you trick. You're not. You miss. Got the shotty in the whip still smokin from when it popped on you bitch. I'm better than you. Whole nutha level of real illin' that's still killin' you faggots with real skill and its a fact you lack the passion to deal with it. I've mastered this craft. You haven't. You're still distant. I spit missiles at you with six pistols blastin' til the chills enter. Fuck I'm in a bad mood. Luck's laughin at you. I'm the original pinnacle that's got you real bitter. Visceral when skills delivered. I'm cold. Winter ripped through this verse delivered to you in spurts. This songs a masterpiece with the strongest of gravity. Center of the universe.

12-24-2013, 12:37 PM	#7
Bender Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2013 Location: Upstate NY Posts: 264 Battle Record: 11-5 Rep Power: 146916	So I read this battle twice and really tried to find a punch...I couldn't find one. Both of you guys sound like you have a decent flow and this style might work in person but in a text battle there was nothing there. You guys both kind of just talked about how great you were without throwing any punches at your opponent. Although I was not satisfied with either verse I have to base my decision on the better verse, Vote-King Ra.

01-11-2014, 07:48 PM	#10
Ryan 12 Worst of the worst Join Date: Nov 2013 Posts: 1,014 Battle Record: 6-1 Rep Power: 7023	The moments upon us. I've risen. God of this. The wizard's hot you trick. You're not. You miss. Got the shotty in the whip still smokin from when it popped on you bitch. ^^you miss/you bitch - very basic rhymes vs Like Broly, I'm brolic. Mass & ripped. Apologies I have to FLIP- you're a deceased Jesus of Nazareth consumed by the darkness of Daedalus' labyrinth. Flows? Concepts? I've mastered it. Consider this match as your coffin, fuck bringing a White House Down.... .... Ra.'s the only GOD standing after Olympus Has Fallen. this was a cool battle. i think zenland rushed his verse cuz i read better from him he had very simple stuff, nothing metaphorical or in depth. his flow was off too cuz of the multiple periods all over the place. Ra had more vocab and imagery. vote - king Ra

02-19-2014, 11:26 AM	#12
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853343	Vote - zenland Overall cleaner swagg __________________ *VETWORK*

02-23-2014, 09:44 PM	#14
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997613	My dudes, dope battle guys. It was pretty close, zenland you absolutely killed it through the first half and then idk, the rest just didnt do it for me. King ra i dug the video game and movie references through out and the the sharknado like was corny as fuck lol. But overall i think i felt ra's more so he gets my vote __________________

02-24-2014, 08:53 PM	#15
Answer He / Him / His Join Date: Oct 2013 Posts: 1,675 Battle Record: 20-1 Champed - Summer Classic IX - Netcees Battle League - Fight night 15 Rep Power: 12534702	I've never heard of a swag and flow battle lol I felt like Zen was just going on 20 tangents and using arbitrary multis. It seems like something I would expect to see somebody freestyle. Just because you're bragging about yourself doesn't mean you can't incorporate some elements of wordplay...or at least some imagery or metaphors or aspects of humor. Like Eminem saying some shit like "The one man on the planet that'll drive off of the Grand Canyon Hop out of a Grand Am and land in it handstanding Any man planning to battle will get snatched outta his clothes So fast it'll look like an invisible man standing" but I didn't really see anything in Zen's verse that I'd consider quoteworthy Ra, some of your verse almost comes off as if you're dissing opponent - but I understand that even in braggadocio rhymes, peple tend to use proverbial "You's". Aside from that, your verse was solid - I didn't really see anything that made me go "Oh snap" but the video game references were cool & there were was no shortage of metaphors or wordplay. Solid job on both sides MVGT - King Ra

03-10-2014, 09:24 PM	#16
Paradigm ___________ Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: California Posts: 1,989 Battle Record: 4-4 Champed - The Ultimate Textcee - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11033508	Buddha had no metas or creativity in his bars just a bunch of empty flow with no substence... king ra had the basics down and easily takes this Vote - King Ra. RTF: http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=57076

03-10-2014, 10:27 PM	#17
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899402	Finally this battle comes to an end. @King Ra. gets the win. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.