I decided to record again

Izzy Reef · 01-24-2016, 05:45 PM

https://soundcloud.com/swish0z/overt...d-by-tom-misch

^ pretty much the outcome

uh-oh · 01-24-2016, 07:34 PM

This was cool bro i dig it. Couldve left the fresh prince quotes out tho. But yea this was cool man. Keep banging shit out

Certain · 01-24-2016, 07:48 PM

The production quality could use a lot of work — particularly the mix — and you're a bit languorous and loquacious. But the skills are there, and the lyrics are strong.

Witty · 01-24-2016, 08:09 PM

Loquacious.

Good job.

Greed · 01-24-2016, 08:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Certain

The production quality could use a lot of work — particularly the mix — and you're a bit languorous and loquacious. But the skills are there, and the lyrics are strong.

Nigga u languorous using words like loquacious.

Certain · 01-24-2016, 08:45 PM

That would have made sense if you flipped them.

Greed · 01-25-2016, 12:58 AM

Eh, close.

The Dead Poet · 01-25-2016, 09:51 AM

Sounded cool to me. A lot more polished than what I heard from a few of the dudes that record around these parts.

01-24-2016, 05:45 PM	#1
Izzy Reef Member Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 67 Rep Power: 3469329	I decided to record again https://soundcloud.com/swish0z/overt...d-by-tom-misch ^ pretty much the outcome __________________ Working On A Mixtape

01-24-2016, 07:48 PM	#3
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899402	The production quality could use a lot of work — particularly the mix — and you're a bit languorous and loquacious. But the skills are there, and the lyrics are strong. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

01-24-2016, 08:09 PM	#4
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,794 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 82986458	Loquacious. Good job. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

01-24-2016, 08:45 PM	#6
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899402	That would have made sense if you flipped them. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

01-25-2016, 09:51 AM	#8
The Dead Poet Senior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 1,138 Rep Power: 22468536	Sounded cool to me. A lot more polished than what I heard from a few of the dudes that record around these parts. __________________ https://soundcloud.com/rafael-jesus-martinez

01-24-2016, 07:34 PM	#2
uh-oh DA GOD Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Canton Ohio Posts: 12,362 Battle Record: 1-0 Champed - Beat Battle II - Beat Battle V - Beat Bags Rep Power: 84181417	This was cool bro i dig it. Couldve left the fresh prince quotes out tho. But yea this was cool man. Keep banging shit out

01-25-2016, 12:58 AM	#7
Greed Raw Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,727 Battle Record: 21-40 Rep Power: 29975684	Eh, close.