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Mr. J · 06-26-2015, 01:48 AM

The satellite dish emits hope on a candlelit wish..
I'm frantic, demanded a kick with a non canceling clip
unedited, a sedative seducing the rage, managing it
threatened with a sentence, isn't that tragically sick
what a twisted dimension, a sense of perfection...
this is where insanity lives, the passionate dig as if..
unwrapping a gift, this is where love & vanity kiss
lusting over inanimate shit, the map to sadness & risk
a maze! how elaborate it gets as it shatters when hit
with just enough room where only disaster can sit
matter is split, & janitors give their answers to quit
the same feeling that 'on a silver platter' depicts...
head shots come quicker than the camera can flick
if your manners are shit you'll end up how Saturn is...
I'm erratic, I'm quick, Doc Holiday on a cancerous trip
swifter than a Samurais tip, with a hand on the hip
a standoff with tits but I'm like Gandalf with this
you have the courage I'll need to read that and shit
let's see what you got....Operate an Opera like phantoms exist
you thought my depp was blind and I just randomly miss?
get under the canopy kids and pose like a family pic...
beneath it all where does humanity exist?

ribbit · 07-02-2015, 07:38 AM

Nteresting...lots of ideas floating around good use of your concepts like the family pic line and the operate opera dope stuff kid

06-26-2015, 01:48 AM	#1
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,025 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349678	QwarterZ Qwarterly The satellite dish emits hope on a candlelit wish.. I'm frantic, demanded a kick with a non canceling clip unedited, a sedative seducing the rage, managing it threatened with a sentence, isn't that tragically sick what a twisted dimension, a sense of perfection... this is where insanity lives, the passionate dig as if.. unwrapping a gift, this is where love & vanity kiss lusting over inanimate shit, the map to sadness & risk a maze! how elaborate it gets as it shatters when hit with just enough room where only disaster can sit matter is split, & janitors give their answers to quit the same feeling that 'on a silver platter' depicts... head shots come quicker than the camera can flick if your manners are shit you'll end up how Saturn is... I'm erratic, I'm quick, Doc Holiday on a cancerous trip swifter than a Samurais tip, with a hand on the hip a standoff with tits but I'm like Gandalf with this you have the courage I'll need to read that and shit let's see what you got....Operate an Opera like phantoms exist you thought my depp was blind and I just randomly miss? get under the canopy kids and pose like a family pic... beneath it all where does humanity exist? __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you Last edited by Mr. J; 06-29-2015 at 03:31 AM.

07-02-2015, 07:38 AM	#2
ribbit The deputy of nc Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: The Rodent Kingdom Posts: 514 Battle Record: 1-10 Rep Power: 7784050	Nteresting...lots of ideas floating around good use of your concepts like the family pic line and the operate opera dope stuff kid __________________ Get lost