Week 2: Wordz Ahgod (0-0) vs. MV The Demon (0-0) - WORDZ AHGOD WINS VIA NS

Zuo · 04-24-2023, 02:02 AM

Rules

You know the drill.

Due Dates:
Verses this week are due Thursday and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:
Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

@MV The Demon @Pepino @Wordz AhGod

Pepino · 04-24-2023, 01:49 PM

sure thing

Wordz AhGod · 04-24-2023, 04:45 PM

Looks like I’m replacing Zuo here. 10 is good.

Zuo · 04-24-2023, 04:45 PM

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Originally Posted by Pepino

sure thing

@Wordz AhGod is going to be taking my place in this battle

Wordz AhGod · 04-24-2023, 10:41 PM

I'm not here to mince words, just here to make this bitch lose
you won't need a replacement.. my uppercuts will raise his kids too.
I'll see em' at the office, make em sleep when I empty the tank
he'll hear a "CLAP CLAP".. n get lifted out his seat like he's expecting a prank.
I'm here out of boredom, he thinks he'll get clout n some glory
signed up to get molested n victimized, those initials became his origin story.
I mush rappers on tracks, anything from this bum is forced
Getting too old to run circles. I'll cut off ur legs n let the blood run its course.
MV got me acting like an old-school villain, s'why he's knowing he's dead
I be like "why aorta".. then I squeeze and stop the oxygen going to his head.
My aim is well known.. your lying if you say your floss higher
God'll bury you head first, arms out.. the execution'll be a crossfire.
we have shit in common tho, we both fuck ur girl but I give her pleasure
says she likes urs cos the big ones hurt..
..now ur in the bathroom taking desperate measures.

sorry, went 14.

Wordz AhGod · 04-27-2023, 09:44 PM

no ext. show up on time or sign out bruh.

Zuo · 04-28-2023, 07:42 AM

Words Ahgod Wins via NS, OPEN FOR FEED

Pepino · 04-28-2023, 08:26 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Wordz AhGod

no ext. show up on time or sign out bruh.

eat my dick

Pharaohs Army · 04-28-2023, 08:45 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Wordz AhGod

I'm not here to mince words, just here to make this bitch lose
you won't need a replacement.. my uppercuts will raise his kids too.
Let's all notice that "mince words" is a near vowel/syllable match w/ "bitch lose" & "kids too"...Still trying to figure out the uppercuts wordplay but it Sounds cool?
I'll see em' at the office, make em sleep when I empty the tank
he'll hear a "CLAP CLAP".. n get lifted out his seat like he's expecting a prank
pretty cool phonetically, and, while the closing simile seems to "take a little sting" out of the initial onomonopia of gunfire, it's not a bad play; just perhaps a little stretched out on the thought process. I donno? Don't love but don't hate either
I'm here out of boredom, he thinks he'll get clout n some glory
signed up to get molested n victimized, those initials became his origin story.
Youch. I think this is real strong...can relate to the opening phrase, decent 4 syll rhyme (altho it's not supercomplex)...That's ok, it hits and could hurt.
I mush rappers on tracks, anything from this bum is forced
Getting too old to run circles. I'll cut off ur legs n let the blood run its course.
Decent violence flip...would have loved a little fancy 'internal' with "mush rappers on tracks?" Just asking.
MV got me acting like an old-school villain, s'why he's knowing he's dead
I be like "why aorta".. then I squeeze and stop the oxygen going to his head.
At this point I'll let other voters and the rest of the site decide if this is a good wordplay or kinda corny and flat...Personally I'm in the middle
My aim is well known.. your lying if you say your floss higher
God'll bury you head first, arms out.. the execution'll be a crossfire.
Sounds good and another violence wordplay flip. I mean that's kinda what battles are so I got no problem seeing another one here.
we have shit in common tho, we both fuck ur girl but I give her pleasure
LOTB for me. Only half a bar I don't need to see a lame rhyme-finish payoff...This is harsh and effective...I'm sure this concept has been used in history but Wordz worded it here then followed by continuing the pleasure/size joke:
says she likes urs cos the big ones hurt..
..now ur in the bathroom taking desperate measures.

sorry, went 14.

Solid stuff man. Apparently you still got it.
A few FIRE in there as well...though I believe if you keep honing you could punch out even better...might have been 1 or 2 in there that were avg/meh.
Just a personal note, I always grant the 24 hr ext...PPl have families, kids, jobs, yeah it's only 14 lines but you know? Having a battle is better than NOT having a batttle. For the culture. Still your choice, Wordz on exceptions. But I'd argue my side.
Regarding your 2011 Track w/ Celph...epic/legendary, man. Too bad it was 12 years ago and now you hate on my epic Wise cover (which I doubt any textcee could match)...

Anyway, hope you get a full battle if you're in next week (3).
~

Diablo · 04-28-2023, 08:45 AM

Opener was fire here I thought, great idea conceptually and worded tough. I didn’t get the prank one so I apologise if I missed something there but I’m going to gloss over that one. Origin story was worded really well I thought, blood run it’s course was another fire concept to me. Why aorta was real nice too, fresh as fuck to me as I’ve never seen that done before prior to this, love that creativity though for real. Shame you got noshowed here and some of those concepts went to waste because you turned up for this one. Wordz is nice with it, no doubt, looks like he’s a problem.

Wordz AhGod · 04-28-2023, 02:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Diablo

Opener was fire here I thought, great idea conceptually and worded tough. I didn’t get the prank one so I apologise if I missed something there but I’m going to gloss over that one. Origin story was worded really well I thought, blood run it’s course was another fire concept to me. Why aorta was real nice too, fresh as fuck to me as I’ve never seen that done before prior to this, love that creativity though for real. Shame you got noshowed here and some of those concepts went to waste because you turned up for this one. Wordz is nice with it, no doubt, looks like he’s a problem.

Appreciate it, the clap clap line was in reference to a prank people play on dudes at the office when they fall asleep. People clap and they jump up to clap too. The “molested and victimized” line was a play on his original name “MV”. Hope that clarifies some stuff.

Master Rock · 04-28-2023, 03:36 PM

This line alone floored me..."Getting too old to run circles. I'll cut off ur legs n let the blood run its course." Fire for days!!!

Barcotic · 04-28-2023, 03:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Wordz AhGod

I mush rappers on tracks, anything from this bum is forced
Getting too old to run circles. I'll cut off ur legs n let the blood run its course.

This is fucking gold
Like really good

Stay doing that

Not a bad flip on the old uppercut concept as well. You made it appealing again
Good shit. Shitty you were no showed
Im expecting the same :(

Ryno · 04-28-2023, 10:02 PM

Opener
Clap clap
Run it’s course

Those were my standouts. Cool verse overall. I’m sure we’ll cross paths at some point.

Zuo · 04-29-2023, 01:05 AM

I'm not here to mince words, just here to make this bitch lose
you won't need a replacement.. my uppercuts will raise his kids too.
nice I liked this
I'll see em' at the office, make em sleep when I empty the tank
he'll hear a "CLAP CLAP".. n get lifted out his seat like he's expecting a prank.
nah didn’t like this
I'm here out of boredom, he thinks he'll get clout n some glory
signed up to get molested n victimized, those initials became his origin story.
nah
I mush rappers on tracks, anything from this bum is forced
Getting too old to run circles. I'll cut off ur legs n let the blood run its course.
this is dope, good shit
MV got me acting like an old-school villain, s'why he's knowing he's dead
I be like "why aorta".. then I squeeze and stop the oxygen going to his head.
lmaooo I’m dead. Cool bar lmao
My aim is well known.. your lying if you say your floss higher
God'll bury you head first, arms out.. the execution'll be a crossfire.
decent I think
we have shit in common tho, we both fuck ur girl but I give her pleasure
says she likes urs cos the big ones hurt..
..now ur in the bathroom taking desperate measures.
lol funny, quirky little closer. Solid

Shame you got no showed forreal, I thought MV would show up but I guess not. It’s all good though. This verse was dope overall, I never really read anything from you but I knew you battled a lot back on RB. Keep bringing this type of heat and I see you champing this shit tbh. Props

04-28-2023, 03:36 PM	#12
Master Rock Steadily Lurking Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Beyond your reach Posts: 1,330 Battle Record: 7-7 Champed - Netcees Writers League Rep Power: 5599637	This line alone floored me..."Getting too old to run circles. I'll cut off ur legs n let the blood run its course." Fire for days!!! __________________ https://www.instagram.com/master_rock1/ https://www.youtube.com/graphicalmindz

04-24-2023, 01:49 PM	#2
Pepino Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2018 Posts: 26 Rep Power: 0	sure thing

04-24-2023, 04:45 PM	#3
Wordz AhGod カミノコトバ Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 203 Battle Record: 2-0 Rep Power: 0	Looks like I’m replacing Zuo here. 10 is good.

04-24-2023, 10:41 PM	#5
Wordz AhGod カミノコトバ Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 203 Battle Record: 2-0 Rep Power: 0	I'm not here to mince words, just here to make this bitch lose you won't need a replacement.. my uppercuts will raise his kids too. I'll see em' at the office, make em sleep when I empty the tank he'll hear a "CLAP CLAP".. n get lifted out his seat like he's expecting a prank. I'm here out of boredom, he thinks he'll get clout n some glory signed up to get molested n victimized, those initials became his origin story. I mush rappers on tracks, anything from this bum is forced Getting too old to run circles. I'll cut off ur legs n let the blood run its course. MV got me acting like an old-school villain, s'why he's knowing he's dead I be like "why aorta".. then I squeeze and stop the oxygen going to his head. My aim is well known.. your lying if you say your floss higher God'll bury you head first, arms out.. the execution'll be a crossfire. we have shit in common tho, we both fuck ur girl but I give her pleasure says she likes urs cos the big ones hurt.. ..now ur in the bathroom taking desperate measures. sorry, went 14.

04-27-2023, 09:44 PM	#6
Wordz AhGod カミノコトバ Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 203 Battle Record: 2-0 Rep Power: 0	no ext. show up on time or sign out bruh.

04-28-2023, 08:45 AM	#10
Diablo Badgerdick Join Date: Jul 2015 Location: Showdown City Posts: 2,604 Battle Record: 11-2 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 22685548	Opener was fire here I thought, great idea conceptually and worded tough. I didn’t get the prank one so I apologise if I missed something there but I’m going to gloss over that one. Origin story was worded really well I thought, blood run it’s course was another fire concept to me. Why aorta was real nice too, fresh as fuck to me as I’ve never seen that done before prior to this, love that creativity though for real. Shame you got noshowed here and some of those concepts went to waste because you turned up for this one. Wordz is nice with it, no doubt, looks like he’s a problem.

04-28-2023, 10:02 PM	#14
Ryno Retired Join Date: Jul 2018 Posts: 646 Battle Record: 12-10 Rep Power: 1601590	Opener Clap clap Run it’s course Those were my standouts. Cool verse overall. I’m sure we’ll cross paths at some point.