10-23-2015, 04:47 PM | #1 |
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So word this punch
You'll get ya loud mouth slapped shut son, Yeti still show no respect,
Then Plot’ll just get that Sass, squashed flat! Without even an avalanche through Tibet. Aight so can we discuss this bar, why was it bad? what could improve it? I'm asking.. give some examples of how a sass squashed bar would work. Coz I set it up with the loud mouth bit, then did a yeti/yet he wp in the setup, then dropped the Saswatch wp, and conected it with tibet. Anyway.. Please drop your examples of how to make this concept a working punch |
10-23-2015, 04:49 PM | #2 |
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it's too much of a reach for anyone here to enjoy it
it's a "smart" punch that isn't actually smart. it's like saying.. bees make honey. get it? they make honey. ok, cool dude. yetis, sasquatches, tibet. whatever.
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10-23-2015, 05:01 PM | #3 |
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You were so preoccupied with whether or not you could, you didn't stop to think if you should.
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It's not a question of wording, this is more of an texistential question. What is the point of writing anything at all? This bar is more of a philosophical question than an attack. Because of what worth is jamming in three related words if you lose your soul in the process? No one was harmed in the making of this punch. You are a fervent dadaist. This is text battling as ironic performance art; you've inverted the form and motivations in such a way that the entire concept of your opponents verse is comical. You did it unintentionally. You broke the game by mashing the controller out of frustration. An accidental revolution.
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Is it gonna be awkward now if I say I liked it?
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You can like whatever you want, man.
Let me ghostwrite your Lulz and Tears picture story time and lets see if Veritas can tell. Troll game on 1 million right now.
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Aight my g
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nvm
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lol oh dan
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if nothing else it's a reach because it's pronounced sass quatch NOT sass squashed
so that's why I think it falls short otherwise it would be ok |
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