03-02-2014, 08:46 PM | #1 |
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Destroyer vs Bender - DESTROYER WINS
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03-02-2014, 08:47 PM | #2 |
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03-03-2014, 10:08 AM | #3 |
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ok I will drop 10 for this tonight
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03-03-2014, 06:50 PM | #4 |
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You guys are just a bunch of stupid haters….Destro I just did u a favor
And complained about the voters now, so you don’t have to do it later I see your 5-10 and that’s about average right? Yea, if we’re referring to this middle aged Caucasian faggot’s height You need a tutor when you write? maybe I could getcha some help But you need more aids then the ones attached to Strikta’s blood cells Couldn’t finish the NBL , your only mention in the mag…was that You’ve been in and out of it so much your wife wishes it was her vag You‘re a troll bro, I would love drive over you with my whip Like you were actually a fucking troll….that lived underneath a bridge @Destroyer Last edited by Bender; 03-03-2014 at 08:28 PM. |
03-03-2014, 08:39 PM | #5 |
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i'm on the come up, pretty soon you'll be watching me sellout
meanwhile your stock be continually dropping like strikta's T-cell count des is a demon with hits, when I start to write, I go nuts bout to leave Bender iced wit six holes in em like hush's box of donuts you feel that pounding in your head while you try to retort? that's not your heartbeat.. it's a knock on the door looking for back child support yeah des is old as fuck, but that's no reason to be hatin' kid that just means I'll probably die before u... find a loving relationship u been gone for too long, now ur wack & no one cares faggot take advice from strik: life is precious.. especially when ur girl looks just like that bitch will get my links up tonight |
03-03-2014, 08:43 PM | #6 |
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03-03-2014, 11:16 PM | #7 |
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Relationships, lol you used a precious line and dough nuts. Vs Bender Opener was decent, wife's vag was decent More consistent verse better misses better wording and better concepts Bender takes this .. |
03-04-2014, 03:34 AM | #8 |
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First line was ok. Decent clowning hit, and I'm assuming he moans about voters? I'm new here so will have to get up to scratch on where these personals come from. I liked the idea behind the next bar, although if 5-10 is an average score here, that's pretty shit. Actually, vet shit. Still though, tidy hit. Next bar was ok-ish. Felt like you coulda utilized the Strikta aids thing better, but having said that, I inly just caught the thread so dunno how much that play has been murdered (or not). Blood & Some rhymed weak for me. Yea it's a near rhyme and all that jazz, but it just didn't come off right for me. Last 2 bars were horrible. They looked extremely weak in contrast to your previous bars, and it was like you lost the will to finish strong. Destroyer Weak opener. Benders Strikta bar wasn't that good, but you just made it look much better. Wasn't keen on the multi whatsoever. Next bar was soft. And your set up made little sense, so just came off as filler. Next bar wasn't any better, and it wasn't until your NEXT bar that I knew you were tryna take a shot at his age. That ain't good, cuz it makes the previous bar look wasted. Next bar again, still no improvement. How is telling him to find a loving relationship gonna hurt him? It's not a hit, and it was another waste of 2 lines. Closer had a bit of relatable content, but again, not strong enough to act as the nail in his coffin. Bender, verse was alright other than the closing 2 bars. Destroyer, I was left after every line, hoping it'd pick up.. but it didn't. MVGT Bender |
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03-06-2014, 11:05 AM | #11 |
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You guys are just a bunch of stupid haters….Destro I just did u a favor
And complained about the voters now, so you don’t have to do it later Lol, think you could have did more with this, tho You need a tutor when you write? maybe I could getcha some help But you need more aids then the ones attached to Strikta’s blood cells H I V, dude. If he did have AIDS, I'd say this was a pretty decent concept. Couldn’t finish the NBL , your only mention in the mag…was that You’ve been in and out of it so much your wife wishes it was her vag This was funny, to me. Basic but funny. I liked it. vs i'm on the come up, pretty soon you'll be watching me sellout meanwhile your stock be continually dropping like strikta's T-cell count You hate simile's but used one here. Lol, smh. Decent thou. des is a demon with hits, when I start to write, I go nuts bout to leave Bender iced wit six holes in em like hush's box of donuts I liked this. And what do you know, ANOTHER simile, lol. Co'monnnn. you feel that pounding in your head while you try to retort? that's not your heartbeat.. it's a knock on the door looking for back child support Lol, I think this could have been executed a lot better, but still cool. Considering I just read in some thread he was just divorced an shit. u been gone for too long, now ur wack & no one cares faggot take advice from strik: life is precious.. especially when ur girl looks just like that bitch Lol, played but still gave me a chuckle. Overall. I got Des taking this. I think Bender's 1st half of his verse was weird and not effective. Like the comparing his record to his height. Being 5'10 really isn't an insult, tbh. So that was a complete miss. The crying about votes, was alright, I think you could have gotten a little more witty with it, just came off kind of blahhh'ish to me. Bars quoted are the bars I enjoyed or had potential to land effectively but fell short. With that being said, I got Des taking this barely. v/Des |
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You guys are just a bunch of stupid haters….Destro I just did u a favor
And complained about the voters now, so you don’t have to do it later vs i'm on the come up, pretty soon you'll be watching me sellout meanwhile your stock be continually dropping like strikta's T-cell count des is a demon with hits, when I start to write, I go nuts bout to leave Bender iced wit six holes in em like hush's box of donuts bender had some decent concepts but the wording/punchline was awkward des had a couple too (though they were superior concepts) and the ones that landed did better. v/ des
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3-2 Des up
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03-09-2014, 12:31 PM | #14 |
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You guys are just a bunch of stupid haters….Destro I just did u a favor
And complained about the voters now, so you don’t have to do it later lmao funny I see your 5-10 and that’s about average right? Yea, if we’re referring to this middle aged Caucasian faggot’s height meh weak too statementish You need a tutor when you write? maybe I could getcha some help But you need more aids then the ones attached to Strikta’s blood cells forced cuz its 'aid' in the case of help, not 'aids' you dont say it liek that so its forced Couldn’t finish the NBL , your only mention in the mag…was that You’ve been in and out of it so much your wife wishes it was her vag played but still lol You‘re a troll bro, I would love drive over you with my whip Like you were actually a fucking troll….that lived underneath a bridge wtf weak vs i'm on the come up, pretty soon you'll be watching me sellout meanwhile your stock be continually dropping like strikta's T-cell count lold des is a demon with hits, when I start to write, I go nuts bout to leave Bender iced wit six holes in em like hush's box of donuts cool you feel that pounding in your head while you try to retort? that's not your heartbeat.. it's a knock on the door looking for back child support wack yeah des is old as fuck, but that's no reason to be hatin' kid that just means I'll probably die before u... find a loving relationship lmaoo u been gone for too long, now ur wack & no one cares faggot take advice from strik: life is precious.. especially when ur girl looks just like that bitch rofl ok closer This was an okay battle Bender impressed me with his opener but had more misses than Des Des had some funny shit and was more consistent V Des |
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03-28-2014, 11:54 AM | #16 |
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I'd like to edit my vote, please.
v/Bender. |
03-28-2014, 12:07 PM | #17 |
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Bender had the 5-10 line I guess. Verse was mostly jabs.
Des had die before you and precious, with a nod of approval for the donut line. V destroyer |
03-28-2014, 12:14 PM | #18 |
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both verses was decent, Both had some nice concepts & funny bars.
Vote-Destroyer for a better concepts & wording, I thought his lines funnier. |
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I'd like to also edit my vote.
better concepts & wording, I thought his lines funnier. Vote - Bender |
03-28-2014, 05:11 PM | #20 |
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I like how people call me out for swaying, but doing this type of shit in a battle thread is perfectly fine, huh?
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