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Old 08-07-2018, 09:16 AM   #1
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The Summer Classic ‘18
The Premier Text Battling Tournament

@Flow @Knucklehead

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Due Dates:
  • Verses are due Friday,
    August 10th, 2018 @ 11:59 PM PST.
  • Check Ins are due Wednesday, August 8th, 2013 @ 11:59 PM PST
  • Voting ends Sunday, August 12th, 11:59 PM PST.
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  • Extensions are normally 24 hours
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Line Limit:
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  • Max. = 16 lines
  • The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. If no line agreement is made you CANNOT go above 16 lines

General Rules:
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  • 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
  • Feeding = DQ.
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  • A check in IS mandatory.
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don’t think I’ve read anything from knuck since he was caught biting from Strikta
- Karaoke thread -
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=119993

Fat wife, gaming nerd, shit his pants at Karaoke calling his work
You'll shit it worse when I turn up at your house an bury your head in the dirt
Remember @ work when Karaoke called n you knew youd made a big blunder
So shit enough bricks to build bridges that ya troll lookin wife could live under
I brought thunder to Schad an Barc son, faggot you faced Spree an barely won
How fuck can I be upset champ beating a bitch who ain't champed since version 1
So stick to writing Vamp Diaries fan fiction n stop thieving what's been done
cus even a teen bitch know Strix been bitten more by you then a Mikelson
N designin games isnt G, you a geek n it couldn't be clearer to me
only Demo graphics I wanna see is how many times you crept outta work cus of Karaoke
Even i was at yo work in Ithaca..a worse monstrosity couldn't be pictured
Lol'd followin you home to fuller lane where yo fuller shit witta wife thats fuller figured
See no one betting you got the fire to bring, diode confirms you in a downswing
Only stock you got here is you bitC0in before cryptocurrency was even a thing
N you wed Moby Dick. Now you stuck with the fat bitch for ya life
you ringing it was funnier than when Karaoke did your office phone and you cried
LMAO at your bitch and kid, shit he looks more like Kim Jong uns son
least you can say baes got a body like a coke bottle.. the 3 litre family sized one
Seth Canfield or Michael Scott? Nothing separates the two..
starts with a big boy voice before girlish shrieks cus Karaoke at The Office do
You a god at this shit.. psht behave im a wizard bar spitting mage
throw hands N this body fall at your feet from no where Low Key - call me Dr Strange

There's ya 22 lines no showing faggot.
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Aren't you the British faggot that lied about being black and from Philly?

You dream of bein' a brotha, but writing internet raps not gon help
If u wanna look at ur life a little darker, just reflect on all ur failures & off yourself
Slicin' ya characta. Anteater NEVER miss, so damn right I'll embarrass ya
Let's talk shells - When I unload a clip they're all in ur head like ya life in America
Don't know what ya tryin' for, u a lyin whore if u say u'll rip out my spinal cord
Just look at ya last tourney showin, u won't catch a Body or get to the Final Four
Forever a loser. Makes 0 sense how u could be so strange & lame
The only time you dropped the real and added a W, you had to change ya name
Spree showed us last week, you can't win battles if you only get to stalkin'
Spend all night diggin' up dirt, & u'll just end up w/ a hole big enough to fit ur coffin
So talk bout my wife, run up on urs & it's the last time she ever see u
I'll swing the blade low & have u holdin' her gut while ya cryin' like a pregnancy shoot
This my house, boy. Best believe I'll choke slam & rock a whore
Finish him! I'll ring ya fuckin' neck 'til Cashius sees ya face & locks his doors
Coached u as a newb too, but my perspective on ur goals wasn't good dude
Guess when I heard you wanted to be like a Schein I reallyyy misunderstood you
I'm the King, u wanna take the throne? Well, u ain't been so clean
You ain't never dropped fresh, prince.. u even stole ur backstory from his intro scene
Why do u do this to urself? Gotta be sad reasons for the stories
Been handling baggage just to crash & burn worse than that airline employee
Them forced wordplays & reaches are wack, u a try hard from the jump
How u gonna act black when what u bringing is both bland AND too fancied up

Pull up pussy, just a 6 hour drive right?

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Fat wife, gaming nerd, shit his pants at Karaoke calling his work
You'll shit it worse when I turn up at your house an bury your head in the dirt
nah this scheme is very played on him now, all the good flips have been used
Remember @ work when Karaoke called n you knew youd made a big blunder
So shit enough bricks to build bridges that ya troll lookin wife could live under
didnt he alresdy shit in your last line? But nah bro this was a miss for me too
I brought thunder to Schad an Barc son, faggot you faced Spree an barely won
How fuck can I be upset champ beating a bitch who ain't champed since version 1
ending with the same rhyming word hurt you here, decent
So stick to writing Vamp Diaries fan fiction n stop thieving what's been done
cus even a teen bitch know Strix been bitten more by you then a Mickelson
ok
N designin games isnt G, you a geek n it couldn't be clearer to me
only Demo graphics I wanna see is how many times you crept outta work cus of Karaoke
not feelin this
Even i was at yo work in Ithaca..a worse monstrosity couldn't be pictured
Lol'd followin you home to fuller lane where yo fuller shit witta wife thats fuller figured
flo wtf are you doing?
See no one betting you got the fire to bring, diode confirms you in a downswing
Only stock you got here is you bitC0in before cryptocurrency was even a thing
alright
N you wed Moby Dick. Now you stuck with the fat bitch for ya life
you ringing it was funnier than when Karaoke did your office phone and you cried
lmao ok this one was good
LMAO at your bitch and kid, shit he looks more like Kim Jong uns son
least you can say baes got a body like a coke bottle.. the 3 litre family sized one
no
Seth Canfield or Michael Scott? Nothing separates the two..
starts with a big boy voice before girlish shrieks cus Karaoke at The Office do
wording messed this up
You a god at this shit.. psht behave im a wizard bar spitting mage
throw hands N this body fall at your feet from no where Low Key - call me Dr Strange
dopeee


2 good
2 ok
1 Decent
6 misses


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You dream of bein' a brotha, but writing internet raps not gon help
If u wanna look at ur life a little darker, just reflect on all ur failures & off yourself
nah ur literally just telling him to kill himself
Slicin' ya characta. Anteater NEVER miss, so damn right I'll embarrass ya
Let's talk shells - When I unload a clip they're all in ur head like ya life in America
anteater? Yea idk what you’re talking about here man
Don't know what ya tryin' for, u a lyin whore if u say u'll rip out my spinal cord
Just look at ya last tourney showin, u won't catch a Body or get to the Final Four
nice af, solid personal and all around done good
Forever a loser. Makes 0 sense how u could be so strange & lame
The only time you dropped the real and added a W, you had to change ya name
Alright
Spree showed us last week, you can't win battles if you only get to stalkin'
Spend all night diggin' up dirt, & u'll just end up w/ a hole big enough to fit ur coffin
decent, kind of an old concept
So talk bout my wife, run up on urs & it's the last time she ever see u
I'll swing the blade low & have u holdin' her gut while ya cryin' like a pregnancy shoot
lol fuck. This was harsh. Nice
This my house, boy. Best believe I'll choke slam & rock a whore
Finish him! I'll ring ya fuckin' neck 'til Cashius sees ya face & locks his doors
not feelin
Coached u as a newb too, but my perspective on ur goals wasn't good dude
Guess when I heard you wanted to be like a Schein I reallyyy misunderstood you
he wanted to be like you and you misunderstood it? Is that rly the punch? Nah lol
I'm the King, u wanna take the throne? Well, u ain't been so clean
You ain't never dropped fresh, prince.. u even stole ur backstory from his intro scene
ok
Why do u do this to urself? Gotta be sad reasons for the stories
Been handling baggage just to crash & burn worse than that airline employee
this is cool, good use of the current event
Them forced wordplays & reaches are wack, u a try hard from the jump
How u gonna act black when what u bringing is both bland AND too fancied up
nah


3 good
2 ok
1 Decent
5 misses


Ok guys so I’m a little underwhelmed here based off your performances, considering you both had good showings last week. 22 lines each here lol sometimes you gotta remember that dropping quantity isn’t always better than quality. A lot of these lines didn’t really hit, or in flows case he OD’ed on karaoke references. Knuck had some lines that sounded good at first glance but really made no sense once I actually thought about it. Flow had 6 misses and Knuck had 5, bt Knuck had the better lines here imo. The hits hit harder.


Vote Knucklehead

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Fat wife, gaming nerd, shit his pants at Karaoke calling his work
You'll shit it worse when I turn up at your house an bury your head in the dirt
NAH
Remember @ work when Karaoke called n you knew youd made a big blunder
So shit enough bricks to build bridges that ya troll lookin wife could live under
ANOTHER SHIT YASELF BAR, THIS IS ALIL BETTER
I brought thunder to Schad an Barc son, faggot you faced Spree an barely won
How fuck can I be upset champ beating a bitch who ain't champed since version 1
THIS IS VERY HARSH LOL
So stick to writing Vamp Diaries fan fiction n stop thieving what's been done
cus even a teen bitch know Strix been bitten more by you then a Mikelson
TRIED GOOGLING, NOT FAMILIAR W/ THE REFERENCE, MOVING ON
N designin games isnt G, you a geek n it couldn't be clearer to me
only Demo graphics I wanna see is how many times you crept outta work cus of Karaoke
DIDNT LIKE HOW THIS WAS WORDED
Even i was at yo work in Ithaca..a worse monstrosity couldn't be pictured
Lol'd followin you home to fuller lane where yo fuller shit witta wife thats fuller figured
NAH MAN
See no one betting you got the fire to bring, diode confirms you in a downswing
Only stock you got here is you bitC0in before cryptocurrency was even a thing
THIS WAS NICE
N you wed Moby Dick. Now you stuck with the fat bitch for ya life
you ringing it was funnier than when Karaoke did your office phone and you cried
GETTING REDUNDANT
LMAO at your bitch and kid, shit he looks more like Kim Jong uns son
least you can say baes got a body like a coke bottle.. the 3 litre family sized one
NAH MAN
Seth Canfield or Michael Scott? Nothing separates the two..
starts with a big boy voice before girlish shrieks cus Karaoke at The Office do
NAH
You a god at this shit.. psht behave im a wizard bar spitting mage
throw hands N this body fall at your feet from no where Low Key - call me Dr Strange
NOT FEELING THIS

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You dream of bein' a brotha, but writing internet raps not gon help
If u wanna look at ur life a little darker, just reflect on all ur failures & off yourself
FUNNY
Slicin' ya characta. Anteater NEVER miss, so damn right I'll embarrass ya
Let's talk shells - When I unload a clip they're all in ur head like ya life in America
LOL OK
Don't know what ya tryin' for, u a lyin whore if u say u'll rip out my spinal cord
Just look at ya last tourney showin, u won't catch a Body or get to the Final Four
HARSH
Forever a loser. Makes 0 sense how u could be so strange & lame
The only time you dropped the real and added a W, you had to change ya name
SIMPLE BUT HIT
Spree showed us last week, you can't win battles if you only get to stalkin'
Spend all night diggin' up dirt, & u'll just end up w/ a hole big enough to fit ur coffin
OKISH
So talk bout my wife, run up on urs & it's the last time she ever see u
I'll swing the blade low & have u holdin' her gut while ya cryin' like a pregnancy shoot
OK
This my house, boy. Best believe I'll choke slam & rock a whore
Finish him! I'll ring ya fuckin' neck 'til Cashius sees ya face & locks his doors
NOT FOLLOWING
Coached u as a newb too, but my perspective on ur goals wasn't good dude
Guess when I heard you wanted to be like a Schein I reallyyy misunderstood you
EHHH
I'm the King, u wanna take the throne? Well, u ain't been so clean
You ain't never dropped fresh, prince.. u even stole ur backstory from his intro scene
LOL OK
Why do u do this to urself? Gotta be sad reasons for the stories
Been handling baggage just to crash & burn worse than that airline employee
OK
Them forced wordplays & reaches are wack, u a try hard from the jump
How u gonna act black when what u bringing is both bland AND too fancied up
LOL

v/Knuck... Both took a personal route but Flows angles on the Karaoke phone call werent good and lil repetitive. Knuck gave a variety of peronals with decent wording and they landed.

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You dream of bein' a brotha, but writing internet raps not gon help
If u wanna look at ur life a little darker, just reflect on all ur failures & off yourself

Forever a loser. Makes 0 sense how u could be so strange & lame
The only time you dropped the real and added a W, you had to change ya name

I'm the King, u wanna take the throne? Well, u ain't been so clean
You ain't never dropped fresh, prince.. u even stole ur backstory from his intro scene



Flow

LMAO at your bitch and kid, shit he looks more like Kim Jong uns son
least you can say baes got a body like a coke bottle.. the 3 litre family sized one



Vote: Knucklehead... Just had the better verse, atleast he talked about different shit, that Fresh Prince line was dope to me cause of the Philly shit that was creative, line of the battle to me. Wording was the better of the two by far also. Flow wtf were you doing? Every other line had Karaoke name in it.... I battled the nigga and aint use his name that many times. Your wording was very bad in this verse also. You gotta be better than that bro I don't know what you were thinking haha don't ever do that again
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Fat wife, gaming nerd, shit his pants at Karaoke calling his work
You'll shit it worse when I turn up at your house an bury your head in the dirt
hmmm, shit "it" made the wording weird to me, don't love this angle
Remember @ work when Karaoke called n you knew youd made a big blunder
So shit enough bricks to build bridges that ya troll lookin wife could live under
I get the personal angle, but bridge/troll ref are pretty played out so this wasn't very fresh to me
I brought thunder to Schad an Barc son, faggot you faced Spree an barely won
How fuck can I be upset champ beating a bitch who ain't champed since version 1
cool personal, like the angle in tying it to ur "nickname" .. this hit
So stick to writing Vamp Diaries fan fiction n stop thieving what's been done
cus even a teen bitch know Strix been bitten more by you then a Mickelson
had to look this up, wp is cool .. a bit out dated with a vamp/bite concept but it plays because of the personal here
N designin games isnt G, you a geek n it couldn't be clearer to me
only Demo graphics I wanna see is how many times you crept outta work cus of Karaoke
multi is blah but i'll give you a pass for accent, mehh this one was stale to me
Even i was at yo work in Ithaca..a worse monstrosity couldn't be pictured
Lol'd followin you home to fuller lane where yo fuller shit witta wife thats fuller figured
nah, not digging.. came off corny
See no one betting you got the fire to bring, diode confirms you in a downswing
Only stock you got here is you bitC0in before cryptocurrency was even a thing
BOOM.... this was dope, nice np
N you wed Moby Dick. Now you stuck with the fat bitch for ya life
you ringing it was funnier than when Karaoke did your office phone and you cried
did he actually cry? lmao, this one was cool and hit
LMAO at your bitch and kid, shit he looks more like Kim Jong uns son
least you can say baes got a body like a coke bottle.. the 3 litre family sized one
lol, pretty funny .. like the 'coke bottle' silhouette angle
Seth Canfield or Michael Scott? Nothing separates the two..
starts with a big boy voice before girlish shrieks cus Karaoke at The Office do
ehhh, cool idea tbh but this feels really rushed & underdone
You a god at this shit.. psht behave im a wizard bar spitting mage
throw hands N this body fall at your feet from no where Low Key - call me Dr Strange
nice creativity here, this was dope


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You dream of bein' a brotha, but writing internet raps not gon help
If u wanna look at ur life a little darker, just reflect on all ur failures & off yourself
lol, pretty morbid but I like the straightforward personal here
Slicin' ya characta. Anteater NEVER miss, so damn right I'll embarrass ya
Let's talk shells - When I unload a clip they're all in ur head like ya life in America
nahh, the 'all in your head' idea is very played, even with the personal this was mehh to me
Don't know what ya tryin' for, u a lyin whore if u say u'll rip out my spinal cord
Just look at ya last tourney showin, u won't catch a Body or get to the Final Four
nice, wording was very solid & the personal(s) hit
Forever a loser. Makes 0 sense how u could be so strange & lame
The only time you dropped the real and added a W, you had to change ya name
niiiice, good angle here, liked this
Spree showed us last week, you can't win battles if you only get to stalkin'
Spend all night diggin' up dirt, & u'll just end up w/ a hole big enough to fit ur coffin
nah, 'digging up dirt' coffin lines are very played out, personal & wording helps but still meh
So talk bout my wife, run up on urs & it's the last time she ever see u
I'll swing the blade low & have u holdin' her gut while ya cryin' like a pregnancy shoot
niiice, fresh concept this is dope
This my house, boy. Best believe I'll choke slam & rock a whore
Finish him! I'll ring ya fuckin' neck 'til Cashius sees ya face & locks his doors
ringing his neck would make him blue, this needed to be worded diff.. funny angle tho but I feel like the 'black' part here doesn't work as choking/chke slamming him would make him turn blue not black
Coached u as a newb too, but my perspective on ur goals wasn't good dude
Guess when I heard you wanted to be like a Schein I reallyyy misunderstood you
lol this was pretty decent, good swag
I'm the King, u wanna take the throne? Well, u ain't been so clean
You ain't never dropped fresh, prince.. u even stole ur backstory from his intro scene
nice personal, this hit well & the prince tie in was set up very well to make this work
Why do u do this to urself? Gotta be sad reasons for the stories
Been handling baggage just to crash & burn worse than that airline employee
pretty dece, wording made the personal land well
Them forced wordplays & reaches are wack, u a try hard from the jump
How u gonna act black when what u bringing is both bland AND too fancied up
nahh, not feeling


Cool battle with a lot of personals on both sides which was refreshing. Both had some meh played concepts but both also had a couple nice zingers with good personal touches as well... Flo bitCoin and the closer were dope, Knuck really liked pregnancy shoot, flo add a W, and the fresh princ / philly bars... Yeah overall I've got Knuck in this one with a little more consistency & a few less misses overall... props to both

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Knucklehead aka demo aka c0in aka Seth Canfield



- Karaoke thread -
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=119993

Fat wife, gaming nerd, shit his pants at Karaoke calling his work
You'll shit it worse when I turn up at your house an bury your head in the dirt
....not really a punch right ?
Remember @ work when Karaoke called n you knew youd made a big blunder
So shit enough bricks to build bridges that ya troll lookin wife could live under
Ok better use of personal but over wording
I brought thunder to Schad an Barc son, faggot you faced Spree an barely won
How fuck can I be upset champ beating a bitch who ain't champed since version 1
... eh not really
So stick to writing Vamp Diaries fan fiction n stop thieving what's been done
cus even a teen bitch know Strix been bitten more by you then a Mikelson
....I don’t get it
N designin games isnt G, you a geek n it couldn't be clearer to me
only Demo graphics I wanna see is how many times you crept outta work cus of Karaoke
...dope idea and wordplay but u killed it wit the Kare shit
Even i was at yo work in Ithaca..a worse monstrosity couldn't be pictured
Lol'd followin you home to fuller lane where yo fuller shit witta wife thats fuller figured
....aight it’s dece
See no one betting you got the fire to bring, diode confirms you in a downswing
Only stock you got here is you bitC0in before cryptocurrency was even a thing
... good idea but u killed it wit wording
N you wed Moby Dick. Now you stuck with the fat bitch for ya life
you ringing it was funnier than when Karaoke did your office phone and you cried
....lol better but ur killing ur ammo wit name drops
LMAO at your bitch and kid, shit he looks more like Kim Jong uns son
least you can say baes got a body like a coke bottle.. the 3 litre family sized one
..:ehhh
Seth Canfield or Michael Scott? Nothing separates the two..
starts with a big boy voice before girlish shrieks cus Karaoke at The Office do
...nah
You a god at this shit.. psht behave im a wizard bar spitting mage
throw hands N this body fall at your feet from no where Low Key - call me Dr Strange
..:don’t get it

There's ya 22 lines no showing faggot.
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Jay Welsh aka Flo Real

Aren't you the British faggot that lied about being black and from Philly?

You dream of bein' a brotha, but writing internet raps not gon help
If u wanna look at ur life a little darker, just reflect on all ur failures & off yourself
..:nah
Slicin' ya characta. Anteater NEVER miss, so damn right I'll embarrass ya
Let's talk shells - When I unload a clip they're all in ur head like ya life in America
.:: cool
Don't know what ya tryin' for, u a lyin whore if u say u'll rip out my spinal cord
Just look at ya last tourney showin, u won't catch a Body or get to the Final Four
....nah
Forever a loser. Makes 0 sense how u could be so strange & lame
The only time you dropped the real and added a W, you had to change ya name
...nice
Spree showed us last week, you can't win battles if you only get to stalkin'
Spend all night diggin' up dirt, & u'll just end up w/ a hole big enough to fit ur coffin
...played but it hit hard
So talk bout my wife, run up on urs & it's the last time she ever see u
I'll swing the blade low & have u holdin' her gut while ya cryin' like a pregnancy shoot
...dece
This my house, boy. Best believe I'll choke slam & rock a whore
Finish him! I'll ring ya fuckin' neck 'til Cashius sees ya face & locks his doors
...ok ish
Coached u as a newb too, but my perspective on ur goals wasn't good dude
Guess when I heard you wanted to be like a Schein I reallyyy misunderstood you
...huh?
I'm the King, u wanna take the throne? Well, u ain't been so clean
You ain't never dropped fresh, prince.. u even stole ur backstory from his intro scene
...dope
Why do u do this to urself? Gotta be sad reasons for the stories
Been handling baggage just to crash & burn worse than that airline employee
...nah
Them forced wordplays & reaches are wack, u a try hard from the jump
How u gonna act black when what u bringing is both bland AND too fancied up
...no

Pull up pussy, just a 6 hour drive right?

Knuck won
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