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Old 08-07-2018, 09:15 AM   #1
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The Summer Classic ‘18
The Premier Text Battling Tournament

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Due Dates:
  • Verses are due Friday,
    August 10th, 2018 @ 11:59 PM PST.
  • Check Ins are due Wednesday, August 8th, 2013 @ 11:59 PM PST
  • Voting ends Sunday, August 12th, 11:59 PM PST.
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  • Extensions are normally 24 hours
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Line Limit:
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  • Max. = 16 lines
  • The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. If no line agreement is made you CANNOT go above 16 lines

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Old 08-07-2018, 11:18 AM   #2
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Old 08-07-2018, 11:28 AM   #3
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I beat you 3 times… Discuss

what?! i'm confused tbh when...

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.ph...ght=bayou+bags

Blue Bayou Wins by KO!

same tourney too... i guess history does repeat itself...

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^ur gunna say you beat me?! nah, i'm severely better Bags..
if memory serves me right…... then take notes, cuz you clearly never have
guy's wack & overrated, never drops punchlines appealing w/ sting..
goes by ‘Ghost’ cuz i'll easily walk right through em w/out feeling a thing
are you dope or not?! say dope & i'll laugh in amusement..
if i made a poll it'd ‘Cosmonauts to get Selected’ then ANY Nasa Recruitment
i see u've worked on your delts, well keep liftin to heavy ya neck..
i've been shruggin’ my shoulders for years too... when asked why u get any respect
peep the HOF section then try & tell me you can see me B..
“Blue Bayou - beat everyone, prolly the best to ever do it”….. “Bags – tbe”
this Hawk leave u crippled, stick-steering once these shells spark hard..
dump the clip & have ya ‘Motor-Skills Relying on a Machine’ like those self park cars
you're trash & crap, wack with raps homie that's a fact..
cant turn a ‘disintegrate material’ .. but i will once ur body's dumped in an Acid Bath
ur baby momma's a beast that won't suck so u shouldn't brag homie..
Shes no American Beauty.. u just watch that on repeat so u can see some Bag Blowing
won't be seen w/ you, she runs when u try & give the hoe some mouth..
she could make a quick stop at the Book Store & STILL wouldn't be ‘Indigo n’ Out’
bare knuckle deathmatch, pussy if u realllly wanna see me then ding..
same Coaster not - take the ‘Cans off the table’ & i'll make sure u ain't Leaving a Ring
glad u like Street Fighter, i pay killers that are finnin to shoot..
leave u ‘On the ground Spinning w/ a Roll of the Green’ like Blanca's finishin move
que the autopsy, i gutted this NC troll so it's hopeless if he's flexin..
knife just finished ‘Crossing this Boarder’.. & now docs'll have Bags Open for Inspection

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Old 08-10-2018, 10:40 PM   #5
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If u ever one time voted or me... in any battle ever, I would be so heartwarmed... I dunno what it would take, but it would be revolutionary if I ever saw it
10 yrs in & still cryin for votes... why u even do this anymore?
actin like a bitch musket so fuckin old... u could reenact the revolutionary war
u thought that thread was smart...an hopped on to make it>?
next time u get a bright idea? grab the gauge an turn ya brain to a constellation
I want ya HOF spot back...i got to speak my agenda u aint the B i rememba
cuz u just a shell of yaself & im here to cut ya life support an make u eat the placenta
he married w kids...i come in the crib..no respect I'm rowdy
even the babys getting cancelled I'm a monster w the tommy ask Reptar bout me
then i grab ya ho an beat it up...now ya ass is out the picture
i go savage wen i split her an fuck till she blackout so hard that cashius try to lynch her
the bitch barely a man..so how the fuck would he bone?
this TransCanada man so confused about his pipe lines it could shut down keystone
n ya wordplays define u...coward don't deserve to fuckin speak
u rely on how ya words sound.... im more concerned w what they mean
keep runnin ya mouth outta pocket ill grab the choppa an pop it
i keep the metal round man...itta chase blue out the game like Dr Robotnik
yah kno i aint even gotta hold the cans...ill let the 40 blam
cuz when this bums round the drum fire...leave his body cold as a homeless man
cockin the pound...whole team got beams...u get popped w a round
come out the side of ya face? more red dots on ya profile than barcotics account
why the fuck u write like u seen hard prison an glocks
all ya gun bars just sound retarded...so i guess we can finally link autism to shots
u an internet gangsta...stop actin like u rappin from the trap spot
oh u push? get u wet up w them keys...imma have em pourin yak out on ya laptop
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This was such a dohpe read hahahaha. Immediate stand outs are
Shrugging shoulders, taking notes and disintegrate metal by blue
And
The sonic bar ask reptar an the fuck cashius blackout bar was lotb FML I enjoyed that way tooooo much. It's close, I thought Blue came with some heavily polished thought-out material and if you enjoy wordplay and unique ideas then youd vote blue. It's a tight contest for sure. But I am all about the savagery. That placenta line was interesting still not sure if I like it. Took me off guard an reread an then thought ok. I think against blues creativity it was a no. But then all of a sudden... I think it's the reptar bar that starts it but bags just starts bringing savage bar after savage bar. That cashius bar slayed me. For real. I will always appreciate that shit so.. although don't get me wrong bags is very original an creative. Sonic bars are so mad played an yet that's such a fresh flip on that tired concept.


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^ur gunna say you beat me?! nah, i'm severely better Bags..
if memory serves me right…... then take notes, cuz you clearly never have

Ok

guy's wack & overrated, never drops punchlines appealing w/ sting..
goes by ‘Ghost’ cuz i'll easily walk right through em w/out feeling a thing

Cool, simple but worded nicely

are you dope or not?! say dope & i'll laugh in amusement..
if i made a poll it'd ‘Cosmonauts to get Selected’ then ANY Nasa Recruitment

This was fucking awful ayp this isn’t IHH it’s dead let it die

i see u've worked on your delts, well keep liftin to heavy ya neck..
i've been shruggin’ my shoulders for years too... when asked why u get any respect

Cool


peep the HOF section then try & tell me you can see me B..
“Blue Bayou - beat everyone, prolly the best to ever do it”….. “Bags – tbe”

Lol ok. I said nah and went to move on to the other bar then remembered this actually had content when I recalled meth adding people with tbe

this Hawk leave u crippled, stick-steering once these shells spark hard..
dump the clip & have ya ‘Motor-Skills Relying on a Machine’ like those self park cars

Ok

you're trash & crap, wack with raps homie that's a fact..
cant turn a ‘disintegrate material’ .. but i will once ur body's dumped in an Acid Bath

Cool. Worded really well.

ur baby momma's a beast that won't suck so u shouldn't brag homie..
Shes no American Beauty.. u just watch that on repeat so u can see some Bag Blowing

Dope

won't be seen w/ you, she runs when u try & give the hoe some mouth..
she could make a quick stop at the Book Store & STILL wouldn't be ‘Indigo n’ Out’

Don’t like it. I get it but it just isn’t good.

bare knuckle deathmatch, pussy if u realllly wanna see me then ding..
same Coaster not - take the ‘Cans off the table’ & i'll make sure u ain't Leaving a Ring

Dope

glad u like Street Fighter, i pay killers that are finnin to shoot..
leave u ‘On the ground Spinning w/ a Roll of the Green’ like Blanca's finishin move

Dope

que the autopsy, i gutted this NC troll so it's hopeless if he's flexin..
knife just finished ‘Crossing this Boarder’.. & now docs'll have Bags Open for Inspection

Cool for a border/boarder punch

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Good verse. I just can’t with the longbar overkill wordplays. Worded well at least unlike Cronus recent attempts at them.

Vs

10 yrs in & still cryin for votes... why u even do this anymore?
actin like a bitch musket so fuckin old... u could reenact the revolutionary war

Eh

u thought that thread was smart...an hopped on to make it>?
next time u get a bright idea? grab the gauge an turn ya brain to a constellation

Dope

I want ya HOF spot back...i got to speak my agenda u aint the B i rememba
cuz u just a shell of yaself & im here to cut ya life support an make u eat the placenta

Lmao cool

he married w kids...i come in the crib..no respect I'm rowdy
even the babys getting cancelled I'm a monster w the tommy ask Reptar bout me

Fireeeee

then i grab ya ho an beat it up...now ya ass is out the picture
i go savage wen i split her an fuck till she blackout so hard that cashius try to lynch her

Cool

the bitch barely a man..so how the fuck would he bone?
this TransCanada man so confused about his pipe lines it could shut down keystone

Cool

n ya wordplays define u...coward don't deserve to fuckin speak
u rely on how ya words sound.... im more concerned w what they mean

Lol

keep runnin ya mouth outta pocket ill grab the choppa an pop it
i keep the metal round man...itta chase blue out the game like Dr Robotnik

Dope

yah kno i aint even gotta hold the cans...ill let the 40 blam
cuz when this bums round the drum fire...leave his body cold as a homeless man

Liked this

cockin the pound...whole team got beams...u get popped w a round
come out the side of ya face? more red dots on ya profile than barcotics account

Nah

why the fuck u write like u seen hard prison an glocks
all ya gun bars just sound retarded...so i guess we can finally link autism to shots

Lmao

u an internet gangsta...stop actin like u rappin from the trap spot
oh u push? get u wet up w them keys...imma have em pourin yak out on ya laptop

Nah

16

Cool verse, the highlights really put it over. Reptar was lotb

V/Bags

Dope battle, worth the long read. Could see it going to blue if the wordplays are what’s in again

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^ur gunna say you beat me?! nah, i'm severely better Bags..
if memory serves me right…... then take notes, cuz you clearly never have
guy's wack & overrated, never drops punchlines appealing w/ sting..
goes by ‘Ghost’ cuz i'll easily walk right through em w/out feeling a thing
are you dope or not?! say dope & i'll laugh in amusement..
if i made a poll it'd ‘Cosmonauts to get Selected’ then ANY Nasa Recruitment
peep the HOF section then try & tell me you can see me B..
“Blue Bayou - beat everyone, prolly the best to ever do it”….. “Bags – tbe”
this Hawk leave u crippled, stick-steering once these shells spark hard..
dump the clip & have ya ‘Motor-Skills Relying on a Machine’ like those self park cars
you're trash & crap, wack with raps homie that's a fact..
cant turn a ‘disintegrate material’ .. but i will once ur body's dumped in an Acid Bath
bare knuckle deathmatch, pussy if u realllly wanna see me then ding..
same Coaster not - take the ‘Cans off the table’ & i'll make sure u ain't Leaving a Ring

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10 yrs in & still cryin for votes... why u even do this anymore?
actin like a bitch musket so fuckin old... u could reenact the revolutionary war
I want ya HOF spot back...i got to speak my agenda u aint the B i rememba
cuz u just a shell of yaself & im here to cut ya life support an make u eat the placenta
NASTY
he married w kids...i come in the crib..no respect I'm rowdy
even the babys getting cancelled I'm a monster w the tommy ask Reptar bout me
then i grab ya ho an beat it up...now ya ass is out the picture
i go savage wen i split her an fuck till she blackout so hard that cashius try to lynch her
keep runnin ya mouth outta pocket ill grab the choppa an pop it
i keep the metal round man...itta chase blue out the game like Dr Robotnik
yah kno i aint even gotta hold the cans...ill let the 40 blam
cuz when this bums round the drum fire...leave his body cold as a homeless man
cockin the pound...whole team got beams...u get popped w a round
come out the side of ya face? more red dots on ya profile than barcotics account
why the fuck u write like u seen hard prison an glocks
all ya gun bars just sound retarded...so i guess we can finally link autism to shots

v/Bags. This was probably the best battle i've read in awhile. Good stuff to both. Blue was extremely creative but i wasnt feeling the later lines of his verse. Bags had the harsher quotes and i have him edging it with a bar. Could go either way.
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what?! i'm confused tbh when...

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.ph...ght=bayou+bags

Blue Bayou Wins by KO!

same tourney too... i guess history does repeat itself...

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^ur gunna say you beat me?! nah, i'm severely better Bags..
if memory serves me right…... then take notes, cuz you clearly never have
... ok that’s cool
guy's wack & overrated, never drops punchlines appealing w/ sting..
goes by ‘Ghost’ cuz i'll easily walk right through em w/out feeling a thing
...the setup is horrible man . Dope ass punch tho
are you dope or not?! say dope & i'll laugh in amusement..
if i made a poll it'd ‘Cosmonauts to get Selected’ then ANY Nasa Recruitment
...what does this mean bro
i see u've worked on your delts, well keep liftin to heavy ya neck..
i've been shruggin’ my shoulders for years too... when asked why u get any respect
....fire
peep the HOF section then try & tell me you can see me B..
“Blue Bayou - beat everyone, prolly the best to ever do it”….. “Bags – tbe”
...ehhh
this Hawk leave u crippled, stick-steering once these shells spark hard..
dump the clip & have ya ‘Motor-Skills Relying on a Machine’ like those self park cars
....again the setups man . They are like wtf. It’s obv the multi is forced in. Dope punch tho
you're trash & crap, wack with raps homie that's a fact..
cant turn a ‘disintegrate material’ .. but i will once ur body's dumped in an Acid Bath
..better wording and very creative . But it’s forced and not working two ways
ur baby momma's a beast that won't suck so u shouldn't brag homie..
Shes no American Beauty.. u just watch that on repeat so u can see some Bag Blowing
...never saw
won't be seen w/ you, she runs when u try & give the hoe some mouth..
she could make a quick stop at the Book Store & STILL wouldn't be ‘Indigo n’ Out’
...:bro I really don’t get it
bare knuckle deathmatch, pussy if u realllly wanna see me then ding..
same Coaster not - take the ‘Cans off the table’ & i'll make sure u ain't Leaving a Ring
..: Creative shit
glad u like Street Fighter, i pay killers that are finnin to shoot..
leave u ‘On the ground Spinning w/ a Roll of the Green’ like Blanca's finishin move
...nah
que the autopsy, i gutted this NC troll so it's hopeless if he's flexin..
knife just finished ‘Crossing this Boarder’.. & now docs'll have Bags Open for Inspection
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10 yrs in & still cryin for votes... why u even do this anymore?
actin like a bitch musket so fuckin old... u could reenact the revolutionary war
..:nah don’t work both ways blue did a lot of these better
u thought that thread was smart...an hopped on to make it>?
next time u get a bright idea? grab the gauge an turn ya brain to a constellation
...that’s dope
I want ya HOF spot back...i got to speak my agenda u aint the B i rememba
cuz u just a shell of yaself & im here to cut ya life support an make u eat the placenta
...aight cool
he married w kids...i come in the crib..no respect I'm rowdy
even the babys getting cancelled I'm a monster w the tommy ask Reptar bout me
...hmmm nah don’t like it
then i grab ya ho an beat it up...now ya ass is out the picture
i go savage wen i split her an fuck till she blackout so hard that cashius try to lynch her
...lol no
the bitch barely a man..so how the fuck would he bone?
this TransCanada man so confused about his pipe lines it could shut down keystone
..:not googling this
n ya wordplays define u...coward don't deserve to fuckin speak
u rely on how ya words sound.... im more concerned w what they mean
...I kinda focus on making them rhyme .. idea nice tho
keep runnin ya mouth outta pocket ill grab the choppa an pop it
i keep the metal round man...itta chase blue out the game like Dr Robotnik
...dope
yah kno i aint even gotta hold the cans...ill let the 40 blam
cuz when this bums round the drum fire...leave his body cold as a homeless man
...tf hell no
cockin the pound...whole team got beams...u get popped w a round
come out the side of ya face? more red dots on ya profile than barcotics account
...nah
why the fuck u write like u seen hard prison an glocks
all ya gun bars just sound retarded...so i guess we can finally link autism to shots
....fire
u an internet gangsta...stop actin like u rappin from the trap spot
oh u push? get u wet up w them keys...imma have em pourin yak out on ya laptop
...eh



Bags had the better punches and more effective delivery
Blue had more creative punches and more lines I almost like


Bags hit harder when he hit . But was missing the KO punch I think it would have took to turn the tides

Blue was concistent . Hard battle to vote on


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Bags

I want ya HOF spot back...i got to speak my agenda u aint the B i rememba
cuz u just a shell of yaself & im here to cut ya life support an make u eat the placenta

then i grab ya ho an beat it up...now ya ass is out the picture
i go savage wen i split her an fuck till she blackout so hard that cashius try to lynch her

n ya wordplays define u...coward don't deserve to fuckin speak
u rely on how ya words sound.... im more concerned w what they mean
keep runnin ya mouth outta pocket ill grab the choppa an pop it
i keep the metal round man...itta chase blue out the game like Dr Robotnik


why the fuck u write like u seen hard prison an glocks
all ya gun bars just sound retarded...so i guess we can finally link autism to shots



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^ur gunna say you beat me?! nah, i'm severely better Bags..
if memory serves me right…... then take notes, cuz you clearly never have
guy's wack & overrated, never drops punchlines appealing w/ sting..
goes by ‘Ghost’ cuz i'll easily walk right through em w/out feeling a thing

i see u've worked on your delts, well keep liftin to heavy ya neck..
i've been shruggin’ my shoulders for years too... when asked why u get any respect

you're trash & crap, wack with raps homie that's a fact..
cant turn a ‘disintegrate material’ .. but i will once ur body's dumped in an Acid Bath

bare knuckle deathmatch, pussy if u realllly wanna see me then ding..
same Coaster not - take the ‘Cans off the table’ & i'll make sure u ain't Leaving a Ring




Vote: Blue... both these verse were either spot on hits or misses, some lines were worded great then you had niggas setting bars up like

"this Hawk leave u crippled, stick-steering once these shells spark hard.."

wtf does this mean? hahaha this shit is hilarious yo you can tell who never really shot some shit up before haha... or

"I want ya HOF spot back...i got to speak my agenda u aint the B i rememba"

my mans said REMEMBA to rhyme with placenta hahaha, I fuck with how grimey the punch was though

Anyway back to the actual verses in whole I took out the bars that missed to me and then reread what I liked together as an actual verse and i was fuckin with Blue'e a little bit more honestly. His hits were a bit more clean and outside of that horrid set up I was feeling his brand of punches more... I hated having to vote on this both verses were pretty good though
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^ur gunna say you beat me?! nah, i'm severely better Bags..
if memory serves me right…... then take notes, cuz you clearly never have
Light
guy's wack & overrated, never drops punchlines appealing w/ sting..
goes by ‘Ghost’ cuz i'll easily walk right through em w/out feeling a thing
Fire
are you dope or not?! say dope & i'll laugh in amusement..
if i made a poll it'd ‘Cosmonauts to get Selected’ then ANY Nasa Recruitment
What? LOL
i see u've worked on your delts, well keep liftin to heavy ya neck..
i've been shruggin’ my shoulders for years too... when asked why u get any respect
Light
peep the HOF section then try & tell me you can see me B..
“Blue Bayou - beat everyone, prolly the best to ever do it”….. “Bags – tbe”
Great concept, execution was light, tho
this Hawk leave u crippled, stick-steering once these shells spark hard..
dump the clip & have ya ‘Motor-Skills Relying on a Machine’ like those self park cars
Ok
you're trash & crap, wack with raps homie that's a fact..
cant turn a ‘disintegrate material’ .. but i will once ur body's dumped in an Acid Bath
Diss in to great was fire
ur baby momma's a beast that won't suck so u shouldn't brag homie..
Shes no American Beauty.. u just watch that on repeat so u can see some Bag Blowing
Don't get this?
won't be seen w/ you, she runs when u try & give the hoe some mouth..
she could make a quick stop at the Book Store & STILL wouldn't be ‘Indigo n’ Out’
Don't like
bare knuckle deathmatch, pussy if u realllly wanna see me then ding..
same Coaster not - take the ‘Cans off the table’ & i'll make sure u ain't Leaving a Ring
Lol fuck w/ this one
glad u like Street Fighter, i pay killers that are finnin to shoot..
leave u ‘On the ground Spinning w/ a Roll of the Green’ like Blanca's finishin move
Blanca references are mad outdated
que the autopsy, i gutted this NC troll so it's hopeless if he's flexin..
knife just finished ‘Crossing this Boarder’.. & now docs'll have Bags Open for Inspection
A lot going on here but light
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Originally Posted by Ghost1 View Post
10 yrs in & still cryin for votes... why u even do this anymore?
actin like a bitch musket so fuckin old... u could reenact the revolutionary war
Musket/Must GET - reach.
u thought that thread was smart...an hopped on to make it>?
next time u get a bright idea? grab the gauge an turn ya brain to a constellation
This was ok
I want ya HOF spot back...i got to speak my agenda u aint the B i rememba
cuz u just a shell of yaself & im here to cut ya life support an make u eat the placenta
No
he married w kids...i come in the crib..no respect I'm rowdy
even the babys getting cancelled I'm a monster w the tommy ask Reptar bout me
What?
then i grab ya ho an beat it up...now ya ass is out the picture
i go savage wen i split her an fuck till she blackout so hard that cashius try to lynch her
Lol ok
the bitch barely a man..so how the fuck would he bone?
this TransCanada man so confused about his pipe lines it could shut down keystone
Light
n ya wordplays define u...coward don't deserve to fuckin speak
u rely on how ya words sound.... im more concerned w what they mean
Relevant concept - poor execution
keep runnin ya mouth outta pocket ill grab the choppa an pop it
i keep the metal round man...itta chase blue out the game like Dr Robotnik
Don't know who that is or what you are referencing
yah kno i aint even gotta hold the cans...ill let the 40 blam
cuz when this bums round the drum fire...leave his body cold as a homeless man
This was nice
cockin the pound...whole team got beams...u get popped w a round
come out the side of ya face? more red dots on ya profile than barcotics account
Lol ok
why the fuck u write like u seen hard prison an glocks
all ya gun bars just sound retarded...so i guess we can finally link autism to shots
Fire
u an internet gangsta...stop actin like u rappin from the trap spot
oh u push? get u wet up w them keys...imma have em pourin yak out on ya laptop
Nah
Blue had 3 misses and a few others that were close... while Bags had 4 total misses but a few that were close, just not effective. Mad close on here. Bags autism shot was brutal, considering the angle he took was so relevant after reading Blue's verse - that was dope. His cans/homeless bar was dope too. I guess this faggot can bar out. That's cool man. Blue had the diss in to great material bar which was dope and his cans off the table was fire but after reading that autism shit - kind out did him there. I think Blue barely gets it on consistency, IMO. Props to both on the dope showing, tho.

v/ Blue - barely.
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^ur gunna say you beat me?! nah, i'm severely better Bags..
if memory serves me right…... then take notes, cuz you clearly never have

Coo opener here, light on the aggressive side tho

guy's wack & overrated, never drops punchlines appealing w/ sting..
goes by ‘Ghost’ cuz i'll easily walk right through em w/out feeling a thing

Niceee

are you dope or not?! say dope & i'll laugh in amusement..
if i made a poll it'd ‘Cosmonauts to get Selected’ then ANY Nasa Recruitment

This was ok, creative..

i see u've worked on your delts, well keep liftin to heavy ya neck..
i've been shruggin’ my shoulders for years too... when asked why u get any respect

Lmao, I like this here

peep the HOF section then try & tell me you can see me B..
“Blue Bayou - beat everyone, prolly the best to ever do it”….. “Bags – tbe”

Cool jab here

this Hawk leave u crippled, stick-steering once these shells spark hard..
dump the clip & have ya ‘Motor-Skills Relying on a Machine’ like those self park cars

This was nice here, 2nd bar alittle stretched but still nice

you're trash & crap, wack with raps homie that's a fact..
cant turn a ‘disintegrate material’ .. but i will once ur body's dumped in an Acid Bath

Another coo hit..

ur baby momma's a beast that won't suck so u shouldn't brag homie..
Shes no American Beauty.. u just watch that on repeat so u can see some Bag Blowing

Didn't to much like this one

won't be seen w/ you, she runs when u try & give the hoe some mouth..
she could make a quick stop at the Book Store & STILL wouldn't be ‘Indigo n’ Out’

Nahh, didn't like this one either bro

bare knuckle deathmatch, pussy if u realllly wanna see me then ding..
same Coaster not - take the ‘Cans off the table’ & i'll make sure u ain't Leaving a Ring

Ehhh, this was decent at best here, could have been worded better

glad u like Street Fighter, i pay killers that are finnin to shoot..
leave u ‘On the ground Spinning w/ a Roll of the Green’ like Blanca's finishin move

Might be played/I like it tho nice

que the autopsy, i gutted this NC troll so it's hopeless if he's flexin..
knife just finished ‘Crossing this Boarder’.. & now docs'll have Bags Open for Inspection

Coo closer here

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10 yrs in & still cryin for votes... why u even do this anymore?
actin like a bitch musket so fuckin old... u could reenact the revolutionary war

Niceeee opener!

u thought that thread was smart...an hopped on to make it>?
next time u get a bright idea? grab the gauge an turn ya brain to a constellation

Lol, another nice jab

I want ya HOF spot back...i got to speak my agenda u aint the B i rememba
cuz u just a shell of yaself & im here to cut ya life support an make u eat the placenta

This was ok

he married w kids...i come in the crib..no respect I'm rowdy
even the babys getting cancelled I'm a monster w the tommy ask Reptar bout me

Lol, nice rugrat flip

then i grab ya ho an beat it up...now ya ass is out the picture
i go savage wen i split her an fuck till she blackout so hard that cashius try to lynch her

Lmao, nice again

the bitch barely a man..so how the fuck would he bone?
this TransCanada man so confused about his pipe lines it could shut down keystone

This was ok, could have been worded better

n ya wordplays define u...coward don't deserve to fuckin speak
u rely on how ya words sound.... im more concerned w what they mean

Lmao, nice personal hit for me

keep runnin ya mouth outta pocket ill grab the choppa an pop it
i keep the metal round man...itta chase blue out the game like Dr Robotnik

Nastyyyy

yah kno i aint even gotta hold the cans...ill let the 40 blam
cuz when this bums round the drum fire...leave his body cold as a homeless man

I like this here, Worded the execution nice

cockin the pound...whole team got beams...u get popped w a round
come out the side of ya face? more red dots on ya profile than barcotics account

This was ehhh, decent at best

why the fuck u write like u seen hard prison an glocks
all ya gun bars just sound retarded...so i guess we can finally link autism to shots

Nastyyy

u an internet gangsta...stop actin like u rappin from the trap spot
oh u push? get u wet up w them keys...imma have em pourin yak out on ya laptop

Lmao good closer!


This was def a dope read here! Both came good with the punches, wording, flow was also on point for both. Blue had more misses then Bags & Bags had more haymakers then Blue that did some damage. Imma edge my vote to Bags on this. More consistent with heavier hits.

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TAKE NOTES ->This was just okay.
GHOST -> Kind of simple, no?
COSMNONAUT -> I read this before and thought it was dope but now that I'm trying to see if makes sense I don't like it.
SHRUG -> Best line so far.
TBE -> This was just okay.
MOTOR SKILL -> Dope.
DISINTEGRATE -> Maybe doesn't work both ways but the wordplay was so smooth I give it a pass. Dope.
BAG BLOWING -> I catch the reference but that's a really old reference for a run of the mill Bag nameplay.
INDIGO -> No idea what it references but I understand the point. It's a diss with a reference. But it's pretty soft in terms of impact and not creative enough to make up for it.
COASTER -> Pretty creative gunboy punchline.
SPINNING GREEN -> I dislike niche references. This is fine I guess.
BOARDER -> Eh.

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BITCH MUSKET -> This was just okay.
CONSTELLATION -> This was just okay.
PLACENTA -> This was just okay.
REPTAR -> Best line of the battle. It was witty and you should be proud of this line.
BLACKOUT -> funny but more of a brag than diss.
TRANS -> This was just okay.
WORDS -> Straightforward but good.
ROBOTNIK -> You guys are now even on video game punchlines.
BUMFIRE -> Liked this one quite a bit. All worked together.
BARCOTIC FACE -> This was just okay.
AUTISM -> This was good.
KEYBOARD YAK -> No.

Both were okay. One video game, one bad closer. I liked Bags' good lines more than Blue's good lines. Good job guys.

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