05-22-2015, 09:47 PM | #1 |
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These Snakes Tail Me Like Chimera
Why worry? New necks and the old nooses
Lets get it cracking! Im a known nuisance My game pro but you looking for codes to it leading the new world order with a thrown toothpick crucify your dreams on the razors edge.. bringing the drama to where you lay your head you couldn't be a MC if you had Don Drapers breath.. aside from Portland there's no real Trailblazers left bitches break their neck for the freshest dick like writers reaching for feelings with a catchers mitt ready to write em' off, leave em' black barred, censorship get stoned & bury them deep 'in remembrance'.. I pretend the shit don't bother me when liars lie looking at some of the shit that these writers write taking up space reserved for me at higher heights your shit flames until I show you how to fire fight.. I'd ask you who the best is, but that's rhetorical this is Agent Smith with the eyes of the Oracle swimming in a Lazarus pit looking for immortal youth I used to be so cordial too...you can't afford a truce go 'head bring the fortress through, I'll torch your troops abort the youth, make the most loyal woman courtship too. I'm the lord to you, full vision couldn't get QwarterZ views take 12 with everyone that ever supported you
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06-12-2015, 12:23 PM | #2 |
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Obligated bump
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07-10-2018, 05:50 PM | #3 |
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Heh
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07-11-2018, 10:25 PM | #4 | |
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07-17-2018, 03:50 AM | #5 |
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This would fly in audio...your flow is bananas @ times, content wise it's nice...dug that QwarterZ line.
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09-15-2018, 10:55 PM | #6 | |
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I liked this especially the quoted part. Super clean rhymes and schemes, I thought. I'm rusty so that doesn't hold much water. Some lines seemed hastily written/ spit out just to keep it moving, like "bitches break their neck for the freshest dick", like I get what you're saying but the wording just strikes a dissonant chord. But I know you focus on the flow and like to keep it off the top, so no complaints with that in mind Keep writing Q
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09-23-2018, 06:03 AM | #7 |
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lmao Mr J this might seem completely random but is your name Ross?
i think we may know someone mutual |
09-24-2018, 08:53 PM | #8 |
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Nah. But I do know of a Ross.
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