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Old 11-10-2018, 05:30 PM   #1
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“Lies set in truth”

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Old 11-13-2018, 06:41 PM   #2
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Old 11-13-2018, 07:35 PM   #3
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Old 11-16-2018, 07:05 PM   #4
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Lies set in truth.

You'd be surprised at all the lies I ever told
& that surprises me, since my eyes will always know
Who's lying to me. Honest, not something I'm dying to be
I just need food on the table plus I'm trying to sleep
I might be on edge, it's likely that life seems upset
But I can't quite grasp why
- It might just be a joke, maybe I should laugh twice
What's life when you are broke, practically shattered
It's concerning how concerned you are, does empathy matter
- My own dreams will batter me, it's seen as tragedy
You know that story; is it wrong to steal to feed your family
& that's just real, I'm an honest man facing dark times
I should've had this ambition- Hunger had to spark mine
I promise it's for the good of us, my word's forever
Since I'm living life where truth & lies blur together
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Old 11-17-2018, 03:00 PM   #5
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I have time today. but you can give it to Razah if you want.
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Old 11-18-2018, 12:46 AM   #6
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@Mr. J post you got until tomorrow morning
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Old 11-18-2018, 09:00 PM   #7
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Was that this morning? Or tomorrow morning?
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Old 11-18-2018, 09:54 PM   #8
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Was that this morning? Or tomorrow morning?
That's a "Post something right now and stop being that guy"
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Old 11-19-2018, 03:35 AM   #9
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You opened well, gr8 imagery...the whole middle Section was nice...endin' was solid bro...

Glad you showed, easy win Raz...like mine but vice versa lol.
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Old 11-19-2018, 02:36 PM   #10
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That's a "Post something right now and stop being that guy"
Didn't know you were in charge here bruv.

If one of them gave the go ahead I'd pop in and drop but no word so ..
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