Hush Vs Allen Knight - HUSH WINS

Allen Knight · 01-28-2014, 06:08 PM

12 lines

Hush · 01-28-2014, 06:20 PM

I bet he'll joke how I ain't fight aero at the Hilton the faggot fuck
Diff is When Allen meet strangers in a hotel lobby it's to carry the baggage up
Ur reps never made noise. The vets lied to u cuz ull never hack it
U get strung along in this circle, ur txt career made a tennis racket
When I entered nc in my browser and saw u was still mid tier was quite sad
Shit was a bigger tab let down than slipping off a roof and dropping an iPad
How many decades of wack bars does this lame got????
ppl go threw growing pains but for u it must be agonizing stuck in the same spot
I doubt it bothers Allen tho. To me that's not a shock
U must be secure in urself cuz when it comes to being a faggot u got it locked
I mean Allen's a weak clone. He could never touch the throne I keep owned
U couldn't be the face of the nbl if u tatted all 3 letters on ya cheek bones

Cope · 01-28-2014, 06:31 PM

definitely not hush.

Hush · 01-28-2014, 06:37 PM

Ur a fucking idiot and a fanboy

Plz hate me

Allen Knight · 01-28-2014, 06:40 PM

Victor aka space cowboy aka aero ether his life

Got the machette sharpened, ready to chop & bruise shit
Stab ur chest till there's a open space cowboy big enough to fit a astronaut thru it
I be fuckin bitches on planes, ur a pussy that lies n scare hoes
Ur idea of the mile high club's running that far stoned when u locked eyes w/ aero
Lmfao at ur fat ass avy pic, chubby ur not winning this jerk
This nigga V-neck stretched so wide a whole ny borough can swim in his shirt
Wat u ate ur self into depression?, went Mia in ur town dude
Shit idk where Turban but I can gueranntee his mouth was wrapped around food
U have imposters now? LOL, but I didn't believe wat came out that rookies mouth
Cuz I knew that wasn't the real hush...he didn't call out aero to fight then pussy out
Aeros goons had u petrified to walk the streets, this fuck is a puss
Every time u go by a hotel u think of A-team & if u see a black van u duck in a bush

Sharp · 01-28-2014, 08:59 PM

opened but yall need 2 voting links each

Split · 01-29-2014, 05:08 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hush

I bet he'll joke how I ain't fight aero at the Hilton the faggot fuck
Diff is When Allen meet strangers in a hotel lobby it's to carry the baggage up
>lol
Ur reps never made noise. The vets lied to u cuz ull never hack it
U get strung along in this circle, ur txt career made a tennis racket
>dopee concept but delivery could have been a little crisper.
When I entered nc in my browser and saw u was still mid tier was quite sad
Shit was a bigger tab let down than slipping off a roof and dropping an iPad
>nah
How many decades of wack bars does this lame got????
ppl go threw growing pains but for u it must be agonizing stuck in the same spot
>k
I doubt it bothers Allen tho. To me that's not a shock
U must be secure in urself cuz when it comes to being a faggot u got it locked
>k
I mean Allen's a weak clone. He could never touch the throne I keep owned
U couldn't be the face of the nbl if u tatted all 3 letters on ya cheek bones
>lol

Quote:

Originally Posted by Allen Knight

Victor aka space cowboy aka aero ether his life

Got the machette sharpened, ready to chop & bruise shit
Stab ur chest till there's a open space cowboy big enough to fit a astronaut thru it
>over my head brah. Ive seen Space Cowboy, too. that another name for stab wound? haha
I be fuckin bitches on planes, ur a pussy that lies n scare hoes
Ur idea of the mile high club's running that far stoned when u locked eyes w/ aero
>lmfaoo
Lmfao at ur fat ass avy pic, chubby ur not winning this jerk
This nigga V-neck stretched so wide a whole ny borough can swim in his shirt
>lol
Wat u ate ur self into depression?, went Mia in ur town dude
Shit idk where Turban but I can gueranntee his mouth was wrapped around food
>coukdve done a lot more witth that concept but k
U have imposters now? LOL, but I didn't believe wat came out that rookies mouth
Cuz I knew that wasn't the real hush...he didn't call out aero to fight then pussy out
>eh
Aeros goons had u petrified to walk the streets, this fuck is a puss
Every time u go by a hotel u think of A-team & if u see a black van u duck in a bush
>eh

I had this like: tennis racquet, hotel lobby, secure in self VS mile high, Turban

I actually thought that AK was gonna take it off the mile high bar which was easy LOTB, but the rest of his verse disappointed. Had Vic winning by a decent margin. good read.

V/ Hush

Ryan 12 · 01-29-2014, 10:49 AM

I bet he'll joke how I ain't fight aero at the Hilton the faggot fuck
Diff is When Allen meet strangers in a hotel lobby it's to carry the baggage up
^lmao
Ur reps never made noise. The vets lied to u cuz ull never hack it
U get strung along in this circle, ur txt career made a tennis racket
^corny as fuck
When I entered nc in my browser and saw u was still mid tier was quite sad
Shit was a bigger tab let down than slipping off a roof and dropping an iPad
^nah
How many decades of wack bars does this lame got????
ppl go threw growing pains but for u it must be agonizing stuck in the same spot
^lol
I doubt it bothers Allen tho. To me that's not a shock
U must be secure in urself cuz when it comes to being a faggot u got it locked
^lol'd
I mean Allen's a weak clone. He could never touch the throne I keep owned
U couldn't be the face of the nbl if u tatted all 3 letters on ya cheek bones
^lmao

vs

Got the machette sharpened, ready to chop & bruise shit
Stab ur chest till there's a open space cowboy big enough to fit a astronaut thru it
^good concept weird wording
I be fuckin bitches on planes, ur a pussy that lies n scare hoes
Ur idea of the mile high club's running that far stoned when u locked eyes w/ aero
^roflzzz
Lmfao at ur fat ass avy pic, chubby ur not winning this jerk
This nigga V-neck stretched so wide a whole ny borough can swim in his shirt
^lol
Wat u ate ur self into depression?, went Mia in ur town dude
Shit idk where Turban but I can gueranntee his mouth was wrapped around food
^meh
U have imposters now? LOL, but I didn't believe wat came out that rookies mouth
Cuz I knew that wasn't the real hush...he didn't call out aero to fight then pussy out
^ok
Aeros goons had u petrified to walk the streets, this fuck is a puss
Every time u go by a hotel u think of A-team & if u see a black van u duck in a bush
^weak

ok battle. both had some funny shit. allen u fell off at the end but that miles high was lotb had me roflzzzing. hush got this on consistency

vote... eyebrowse

01-29-2014, 11:45 AM

I bet he'll joke how I ain't fight aero at the Hilton the faggot fuck
Diff is When Allen meet strangers in a hotel lobby it's to carry the baggage up

Ok'ish. Jab at most, IMO.

Ur reps never made noise. The vets lied to u cuz ull never hack it
U get strung along in this circle, ur txt career made a tennis racket

Like the concept and your execution of it, but don't really think this had any major impact as well.

When I entered nc in my browser and saw u was still mid tier was quite sad
Shit was a bigger tab let down than slipping off a roof and dropping an iPad

Nah.

How many decades of wack bars does this lame got????
ppl go threw growing pains but for u it must be agonizing stuck in the same spot

This was alright.

I doubt it bothers Allen tho. To me that's not a shock
U must be secure in urself cuz when it comes to being a faggot u got it locked

Eh, pretty cool.

I mean Allen's a weak clone. He could never touch the throne I keep owned
U couldn't be the face of the nbl if u tatted all 3 letters on ya cheek bones

Nah.

[vs]

Got the machette sharpened, ready to chop & bruise shit
Stab ur chest till there's a open space cowboy big enough to fit a astronaut thru it

Cool concept, your delivery of it kind of took away the impact tho. Wording/execution was weird.

I be fuckin bitches on planes, ur a pussy that lies n scare hoes
Ur idea of the mile high club's running that far stoned when u locked eyes w/ aero

Dope.

Lmfao at ur fat ass avy pic, chubby ur not winning this jerk
This nigga V-neck stretched so wide a whole ny borough can swim in his shirt

Eh, concept their, executed poorly tho.

Wat u ate ur self into depression?, went Mia in ur town dude
Shit idk where Turban but I can gueranntee his mouth was wrapped around food

Nah.

U have imposters now? LOL, but I didn't believe wat came out that rookies mouth
Cuz I knew that wasn't the real hush...he didn't call out aero to fight then pussy out

I think you could have expanded on this. Weak execution.

Aeros goons had u petrified to walk the streets, this fuck is a puss
Every time u go by a hotel u think of A-team & if u see a black van u duck in a bush

Nah.

Pretty close battle. Nothing really stood out other then that Mile High from AK. Hush had some ok'ish concepts that he executed pretty smoothly but had no real impact, IMO. The Tennis Racket was ok'ish. The Tab Let was corny, IMO. Growing pains was ok, Secure in yourself could have been executed or taking in a different direction, had potential. AK's space cowboy had potential, but executed poorly. Mile High was nice direct shot, V-neck had potential, executed poorly tho. Turban was meh! Could have been taking in another direction, had mad potential to be dope. HIs imposter bar was weak, IMO. I think you could have worked on that, definitely had potential. A-Team was a miss, IMO. Overall, Bar for Bar. I got HUSH taking this barely. Just an overall consistent shot with less misses. AK definitely had the line of the battle with the mile high, but struggled to execute the rest of his concepts. I would say if he executed his personals a lot better he could have easily taken this.

MVGT: Hush, with a more consistent verse - punches/disses.

Alright battle, keep writing fellas.

Pyro · 01-29-2014, 01:25 PM

I bet he'll joke how I ain't fight aero at the Hilton the faggot fuck
Diff is When Allen meet strangers in a hotel lobby it's to carry the baggage up
didn't hit hard.. the faggot fuck just seemed like you needed something to rhyme with baggage up desperately

Ur reps never made noise. The vets lied to u cuz ull never hack it
U get strung along in this circle, ur txt career made a tennis racket
this could've been a lot better imo.

When I entered nc in my browser and saw u was still mid tier was quite sad
Shit was a bigger tab let down than slipping off a roof and dropping an iPad
no.. wording is off man

How many decades of wack bars does this lame got????
ppl go threw growing pains but for u it must be agonizing stuck in the same spot
this was ok.. not crazy but ok

I doubt it bothers Allen tho. To me that's not a shock
U must be secure in urself cuz when it comes to being a faggot u got it locked
again.. wording kills

I mean Allen's a weak clone. He could never touch the throne I keep owned
U couldn't be the face of the nbl if u tatted all 3 letters on ya cheek bones
some filler.. lil light as wel..

VS

Got the machette sharpened, ready to chop & bruise shit
Stab ur chest till there's a open space cowboy big enough to fit a astronaut thru it
ehh.. no real punch.. just a jab

I be fuckin bitches on planes, ur a pussy that lies n scare hoes
Ur idea of the mile high club's running that far stoned when u locked eyes w/ aero
could've been a lot better

Lmfao at ur fat ass avy pic, chubby ur not winning this jerk
This nigga V-neck stretched so wide a whole ny borough can swim in his shirt
na... didn't work

Wat u ate ur self into depression?, went Mia in ur town dude
Shit idk where Turban but I can gueranntee his mouth was wrapped around food
lol.. nah

U have imposters now? LOL, but I didn't believe wat came out that rookies mouth
Cuz I knew that wasn't the real hush...he didn't call out aero to fight then pussy out
nope.. Could've been a better personal hit

Aeros goons had u petrified to walk the streets, this fuck is a puss
Every time u go by a hotel u think of A-team & if u see a black van u duck in a bush
Again.. wording & forced..

This battle wasn't the best but i can say there was some pretty good concepts. You have the concepts, just spend more time executing them & polishing the shit out your lines.

MVGT:Hush

Hush · 01-31-2014, 09:36 AM

Voted on 2

Texcellence · 01-31-2014, 11:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hush

Ur reps never made noise. The vets lied to u cuz ull never hack it
U get strung along in this circle, ur txt career made a tennis racket
When I entered nc in my browser and saw u was still mid tier was quite sad
Shit was a bigger tab let down than slipping off a roof and dropping an iPad
How many decades of wack bars does this lame got????
ppl go threw growing pains but for u it must be agonizing stuck in the same spot
I doubt it bothers Allen tho. To me that's not a shock
U must be secure in urself cuz when it comes to being a faggot u got it locked

Vote: Hush

Hush had the cleaner verse and the quoted lines were the best in the battle. Good job.

Loot · 02-02-2014, 12:37 PM

The mile club line was funny even tho I can only gather the context from the 2 verses. Good line. I liked the tennis racket line. That was original, n decently executed. The A team line had potential, but the setup n punch were both executed kinda poorly. The ipad line wasnt great, but was executed much better atleast in wording, n flow. I liked the same spot line, but it wasnt a heavy hit. Same with the pussy out line, tho rehashing a better line.

The aero line was the best line in a close battle, but Allen also had a one more line I didnt like.
Close. Vote: hush.

01-28-2014, 06:08 PM	#1
Allen Knight The Bad Guys. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,166 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899398	Hush Vs Allen Knight - HUSH WINS 12 lines __________________ C.O.B

01-28-2014, 06:20 PM	#2
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,042 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181417	I bet he'll joke how I ain't fight aero at the Hilton the faggot fuck Diff is When Allen meet strangers in a hotel lobby it's to carry the baggage up Ur reps never made noise. The vets lied to u cuz ull never hack it U get strung along in this circle, ur txt career made a tennis racket When I entered nc in my browser and saw u was still mid tier was quite sad Shit was a bigger tab let down than slipping off a roof and dropping an iPad How many decades of wack bars does this lame got???? ppl go threw growing pains but for u it must be agonizing stuck in the same spot I doubt it bothers Allen tho. To me that's not a shock U must be secure in urself cuz when it comes to being a faggot u got it locked I mean Allen's a weak clone. He could never touch the throne I keep owned U couldn't be the face of the nbl if u tatted all 3 letters on ya cheek bones __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk

01-28-2014, 06:37 PM	#4
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,042 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181417	Ur a fucking idiot and a fanboy Plz hate me __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk

01-28-2014, 06:40 PM	#5
Allen Knight The Bad Guys. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,166 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899398	Victor aka space cowboy aka aero ether his life Got the machette sharpened, ready to chop & bruise shit Stab ur chest till there's a open space cowboy big enough to fit a astronaut thru it I be fuckin bitches on planes, ur a pussy that lies n scare hoes Ur idea of the mile high club's running that far stoned when u locked eyes w/ aero Lmfao at ur fat ass avy pic, chubby ur not winning this jerk This nigga V-neck stretched so wide a whole ny borough can swim in his shirt Wat u ate ur self into depression?, went Mia in ur town dude Shit idk where Turban but I can gueranntee his mouth was wrapped around food U have imposters now? LOL, but I didn't believe wat came out that rookies mouth Cuz I knew that wasn't the real hush...he didn't call out aero to fight then pussy out Aeros goons had u petrified to walk the streets, this fuck is a puss Every time u go by a hotel u think of A-team & if u see a black van u duck in a bush __________________ C.O.B Last edited by Allen Knight; 01-29-2014 at 12:04 AM.

01-29-2014, 01:25 PM	#10
Pyro Shunnin Da Chillins Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 151 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 33	I bet he'll joke how I ain't fight aero at the Hilton the faggot fuck Diff is When Allen meet strangers in a hotel lobby it's to carry the baggage up didn't hit hard.. the faggot fuck just seemed like you needed something to rhyme with baggage up desperately Ur reps never made noise. The vets lied to u cuz ull never hack it U get strung along in this circle, ur txt career made a tennis racket this could've been a lot better imo. When I entered nc in my browser and saw u was still mid tier was quite sad Shit was a bigger tab let down than slipping off a roof and dropping an iPad no.. wording is off man How many decades of wack bars does this lame got???? ppl go threw growing pains but for u it must be agonizing stuck in the same spot this was ok.. not crazy but ok I doubt it bothers Allen tho. To me that's not a shock U must be secure in urself cuz when it comes to being a faggot u got it locked again.. wording kills I mean Allen's a weak clone. He could never touch the throne I keep owned U couldn't be the face of the nbl if u tatted all 3 letters on ya cheek bones some filler.. lil light as wel.. VS Got the machette sharpened, ready to chop & bruise shit Stab ur chest till there's a open space cowboy big enough to fit a astronaut thru it ehh.. no real punch.. just a jab I be fuckin bitches on planes, ur a pussy that lies n scare hoes Ur idea of the mile high club's running that far stoned when u locked eyes w/ aero could've been a lot better Lmfao at ur fat ass avy pic, chubby ur not winning this jerk This nigga V-neck stretched so wide a whole ny borough can swim in his shirt na... didn't work Wat u ate ur self into depression?, went Mia in ur town dude Shit idk where Turban but I can gueranntee his mouth was wrapped around food lol.. nah U have imposters now? LOL, but I didn't believe wat came out that rookies mouth Cuz I knew that wasn't the real hush...he didn't call out aero to fight then pussy out nope.. Could've been a better personal hit Aeros goons had u petrified to walk the streets, this fuck is a puss Every time u go by a hotel u think of A-team & if u see a black van u duck in a bush Again.. wording & forced.. This battle wasn't the best but i can say there was some pretty good concepts. You have the concepts, just spend more time executing them & polishing the shit out your lines. MVGT:Hush __________________ Soundcloud Strawberry Pineapples Cuhh

01-28-2014, 06:31 PM	#3
Cope Member Join Date: Oct 2013 Posts: 37 Battle Record: 0-2 Rep Power: 0	definitely not hush.

01-29-2014, 10:49 AM	#8
Ryan 12 Worst of the worst Join Date: Nov 2013 Posts: 1,014 Battle Record: 6-1 Rep Power: 7022	I bet he'll joke how I ain't fight aero at the Hilton the faggot fuck Diff is When Allen meet strangers in a hotel lobby it's to carry the baggage up ^lmao Ur reps never made noise. The vets lied to u cuz ull never hack it U get strung along in this circle, ur txt career made a tennis racket ^corny as fuck When I entered nc in my browser and saw u was still mid tier was quite sad Shit was a bigger tab let down than slipping off a roof and dropping an iPad ^nah How many decades of wack bars does this lame got???? ppl go threw growing pains but for u it must be agonizing stuck in the same spot ^lol I doubt it bothers Allen tho. To me that's not a shock U must be secure in urself cuz when it comes to being a faggot u got it locked ^lol'd I mean Allen's a weak clone. He could never touch the throne I keep owned U couldn't be the face of the nbl if u tatted all 3 letters on ya cheek bones ^lmao vs Got the machette sharpened, ready to chop & bruise shit Stab ur chest till there's a open space cowboy big enough to fit a astronaut thru it ^good concept weird wording I be fuckin bitches on planes, ur a pussy that lies n scare hoes Ur idea of the mile high club's running that far stoned when u locked eyes w/ aero ^roflzzz Lmfao at ur fat ass avy pic, chubby ur not winning this jerk This nigga V-neck stretched so wide a whole ny borough can swim in his shirt ^lol Wat u ate ur self into depression?, went Mia in ur town dude Shit idk where Turban but I can gueranntee his mouth was wrapped around food ^meh U have imposters now? LOL, but I didn't believe wat came out that rookies mouth Cuz I knew that wasn't the real hush...he didn't call out aero to fight then pussy out ^ok Aeros goons had u petrified to walk the streets, this fuck is a puss Every time u go by a hotel u think of A-team & if u see a black van u duck in a bush ^weak ok battle. both had some funny shit. allen u fell off at the end but that miles high was lotb had me roflzzzing. hush got this on consistency vote... eyebrowse

01-29-2014, 11:45 AM	#9
Sicc Guest Posts: n/a	I bet he'll joke how I ain't fight aero at the Hilton the faggot fuck Diff is When Allen meet strangers in a hotel lobby it's to carry the baggage up Ok'ish. Jab at most, IMO. Ur reps never made noise. The vets lied to u cuz ull never hack it U get strung along in this circle, ur txt career made a tennis racket Like the concept and your execution of it, but don't really think this had any major impact as well. When I entered nc in my browser and saw u was still mid tier was quite sad Shit was a bigger tab let down than slipping off a roof and dropping an iPad Nah. How many decades of wack bars does this lame got???? ppl go threw growing pains but for u it must be agonizing stuck in the same spot This was alright. I doubt it bothers Allen tho. To me that's not a shock U must be secure in urself cuz when it comes to being a faggot u got it locked Eh, pretty cool. I mean Allen's a weak clone. He could never touch the throne I keep owned U couldn't be the face of the nbl if u tatted all 3 letters on ya cheek bones Nah. [vs] Got the machette sharpened, ready to chop & bruise shit Stab ur chest till there's a open space cowboy big enough to fit a astronaut thru it Cool concept, your delivery of it kind of took away the impact tho. Wording/execution was weird. I be fuckin bitches on planes, ur a pussy that lies n scare hoes Ur idea of the mile high club's running that far stoned when u locked eyes w/ aero Dope. Lmfao at ur fat ass avy pic, chubby ur not winning this jerk This nigga V-neck stretched so wide a whole ny borough can swim in his shirt Eh, concept their, executed poorly tho. Wat u ate ur self into depression?, went Mia in ur town dude Shit idk where Turban but I can gueranntee his mouth was wrapped around food Nah. U have imposters now? LOL, but I didn't believe wat came out that rookies mouth Cuz I knew that wasn't the real hush...he didn't call out aero to fight then pussy out I think you could have expanded on this. Weak execution. Aeros goons had u petrified to walk the streets, this fuck is a puss Every time u go by a hotel u think of A-team & if u see a black van u duck in a bush Nah. Pretty close battle. Nothing really stood out other then that Mile High from AK. Hush had some ok'ish concepts that he executed pretty smoothly but had no real impact, IMO. The Tennis Racket was ok'ish. The Tab Let was corny, IMO. Growing pains was ok, Secure in yourself could have been executed or taking in a different direction, had potential. AK's space cowboy had potential, but executed poorly. Mile High was nice direct shot, V-neck had potential, executed poorly tho. Turban was meh! Could have been taking in another direction, had mad potential to be dope. HIs imposter bar was weak, IMO. I think you could have worked on that, definitely had potential. A-Team was a miss, IMO. Overall, Bar for Bar. I got HUSH taking this barely. Just an overall consistent shot with less misses. AK definitely had the line of the battle with the mile high, but struggled to execute the rest of his concepts. I would say if he executed his personals a lot better he could have easily taken this. MVGT: Hush, with a more consistent verse - punches/disses. Alright battle, keep writing fellas.

01-31-2014, 09:36 AM	#11
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,042 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181417	Voted on 2 __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk

02-02-2014, 12:37 PM	#13
Loot I used to be dope at text Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 52 Rep Power: 0	The mile club line was funny even tho I can only gather the context from the 2 verses. Good line. I liked the tennis racket line. That was original, n decently executed. The A team line had potential, but the setup n punch were both executed kinda poorly. The ipad line wasnt great, but was executed much better atleast in wording, n flow. I liked the same spot line, but it wasnt a heavy hit. Same with the pussy out line, tho rehashing a better line. The aero line was the best line in a close battle, but Allen also had a one more line I didnt like. Close. Vote: hush.