Jilti vs. Fresh [Jilti Wins]

BROKE LESNAR · 11-13-2014, 06:30 PM

Rebuttal Option

▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

Due Monday 12am PST

fresh · 11-13-2014, 07:16 PM

Check g'luck

fresh · 11-17-2014, 09:19 AM

Ya bitch isn't pleased.. n after this battle I'll make sure jilti loses face
Cuz when I win-she'll wiper he slate clean and clearly see ya useless traits

jilti · 11-17-2014, 09:53 AM

when i go out for dinner & a movie, its ends with my balls licked all up
only Fresh Date on the bottom of package are for food & alcoholic products

Blanco Bishop · 11-17-2014, 06:30 PM

Jilti puch was worded awkwardly. Maybe missing a comma somewhere. I got the concept though. Fresh had me lost. Face n traits association could of worked with a little more thought put into the wording.

V jil

Spoken · 11-17-2014, 08:44 PM

Fresh ur punch fell short the build up was fine but but "when I win - she'll wiper HE slate clean and CLEARLY see ur useless traits"... it was worded awkwardly and maybe HE wasn't even supposed to be there idk but it felt choppy and fell short on impact. Jilti the wording fell short as well with misspell or something idk but I got the concept and to me both were choppy but for a better concept I have jilti the windshield and wiper wordplay seemed forced

fresh · 11-17-2014, 08:49 PM

He was sposed to be her lol stupid typo

Clayray · 11-19-2014, 01:07 AM

That still woulda fucked it up.

She'll wiper her slate clean

She'll wiper slate clean <-- seems better to me.

I got Jillti for the overall better punch.

fresh · 11-19-2014, 05:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Clayton

That still woulda fucked it up.

She'll wiper her slate clean

She'll wiper slate clean <-- seems better to me.

I got Jillti for the overall better punch.

That's what it sposed to read. Can't dry kin do this shit from a phone anymore smh

Glossy Finish Dick Lips · 11-19-2014, 02:44 PM

I got jilti

fresh had an ok concept but wording was horrid and his wp was a bit of a reach. I think if he worked on it a bit longer, he could have taken this because jilts wasn't that great but the better of the 2.

Kin · 11-19-2014, 04:22 PM

Fresh i was diggin the windshield wiper flip...ending coulda been harder tho

J... diggin the fresh date...always creative wit ya wording

V...iLL jiLL

El Muffin · 11-20-2014, 01:43 AM

v/ jil

both kinda underwhelmed this wk but jil was better than fresh in this one

BROKE LESNAR · 11-21-2014, 12:15 PM

I got Jilti here. Fresh struggled with his wp while Jilti had a much better flip on his np. Not saying Fresh np's are original, just that the flip was decent.

v-jilti

11-13-2014, 06:30 PM	#1
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760961	Jilti vs. Fresh [Jilti Wins] Rebuttal Option ▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in ▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar) Due Monday 12am PST

11-17-2014, 09:53 AM	#4
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816224	when i go out for dinner & a movie, its ends with my balls licked all up only Fresh Date on the bottom of package are for food & alcoholic products Last edited by jilti; 11-17-2014 at 01:47 PM.

11-17-2014, 08:44 PM	#6
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860410	Fresh ur punch fell short the build up was fine but but "when I win - she'll wiper HE slate clean and CLEARLY see ur useless traits"... it was worded awkwardly and maybe HE wasn't even supposed to be there idk but it felt choppy and fell short on impact. Jilti the wording fell short as well with misspell or something idk but I got the concept and to me both were choppy but for a better concept I have jilti the windshield and wiper wordplay seemed forced __________________ WP Po'ethics

11-20-2014, 01:43 AM	#12
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,693 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230531	v/ jil both kinda underwhelmed this wk but jil was better than fresh in this one __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople

11-13-2014, 07:16 PM	#2
fresh Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 302 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 0	Check g'luck

11-17-2014, 09:19 AM	#3
fresh Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 302 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 0	Ya bitch isn't pleased.. n after this battle I'll make sure jilti loses face Cuz when I win-she'll wiper he slate clean and clearly see ya useless traits

11-17-2014, 06:30 PM	#5
Blanco Bishop Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Cali Posts: 1,460 Battle Record: 11-20 Rep Power: 4150482	Jilti puch was worded awkwardly. Maybe missing a comma somewhere. I got the concept though. Fresh had me lost. Face n traits association could of worked with a little more thought put into the wording. V jil

11-17-2014, 08:49 PM	#7
fresh Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 302 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 0	He was sposed to be her lol stupid typo

11-19-2014, 01:07 AM	#8
Clayray 6ft of Seperation Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 1,541 Battle Record: 3-5 Champed - Faggot of the Year (2015) Rep Power: 0	That still woulda fucked it up. She'll wiper her slate clean She'll wiper slate clean <-- seems better to me. I got Jillti for the overall better punch.

11-19-2014, 02:44 PM	#10
Glossy Finish Dick Lips Banned Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Astoria, NY Posts: 1,417 Battle Record: 10-4 Rep Power: 0	I got jilti fresh had an ok concept but wording was horrid and his wp was a bit of a reach. I think if he worked on it a bit longer, he could have taken this because jilts wasn't that great but the better of the 2.

11-19-2014, 04:22 PM	#11
Kin Kill.It.Nonstop Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 666 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 662198	Fresh i was diggin the windshield wiper flip...ending coulda been harder tho J... diggin the fresh date...always creative wit ya wording V...iLL jiLL

11-21-2014, 12:15 PM	#13
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760961	I got Jilti here. Fresh struggled with his wp while Jilti had a much better flip on his np. Not saying Fresh np's are original, just that the flip was decent. v-jilti