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Old 05-24-2020, 12:24 AM   #1
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Default I come in threes.

Thorny cells invade
Gardened organs with loose clots.
We gasp for respite


Pink bubbles and rays
Rouse the sidewalk chalk brigade.
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Wishing in rosé
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Old 05-24-2020, 03:13 PM   #2
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Good to see you back around here. It’s fat btw

All three are dope I like the 3rd one the most tho.

Smh thought you was gonna slide in without notice ? Lol

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Old 05-25-2020, 08:18 AM   #3
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Pink bubbles and rays
Rouse the sidewalk chalk brigade.
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If you don't have some poems to throw up containin' greatness, I'll be shocked...
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"Wishing in rosé"

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Really loved the imagery here, descriptive and the colors all popped it was like staring at a rainbow. I’ve never met you but you have made a fan out of me.
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Old 05-27-2020, 03:46 AM   #6
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Good to see you back around here. It’s fat btw

All three are dope I like the 3rd one the most tho.

Smh thought you was gonna slide in without notice ? Lol

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LOL

I was hoping my very veeeerryyy discrete and subtle drop would ignite a haiku rumble
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Old 05-27-2020, 03:47 AM   #7
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How are you J? @Inno
Thanks for the feedback everyone. Trying to wiggle out the rust!
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Old 06-01-2020, 11:55 AM   #8
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This is really good. Essential stupor was powerful.
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Old 06-07-2020, 08:46 PM   #9
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bags also comes in threes lmaooooo stupa idiyote
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All three are dope I like the 3rd one the most tho.

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lmfaooooooooooooo that was the gayest comment I've ever read. I'm officially leaving netcees.org soon unless some of my old buddies from back in the day wheel me back over here, lol. Omfg.. Your comment was disrespectful, might I add, as well. Have some manners brother. Everybody just wants to have some fun just like you. Peace
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lmfaooooooooooooo that was the gayest comment I've ever read. I'm officially leaving netcees.org soon unless some of my old buddies from back in the day wheel me back over here, lol. Omfg.. Your comment was disrespectful, might I add, as well. Have some manners brother. Everybody just wants to have some fun just like you. Peace
Wtf are you talking about? I know this person outside of netcees
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Old 06-08-2020, 08:33 AM   #12
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Lmao baby da big baby how you doinggggg?!?!? You still around! Estupido foolio
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these poems are actually poetic. thanks.
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Thanks Eng! I think we wrote together one time long ago.
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