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Old 06-22-2020, 10:14 PM   #1
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Ayo,

Beggin' for more personals,
But I just treat you like Mr. J's avitar & clown you
Too much emotion for you to keep afloat,
So I've no choice but to drown you
Swim? He basically couldn't bitch
Lost like Tsunami kids washed away in currents
& when he was born his dick was so small,
He had to be raised as a woman
Come correct & accept you're gettin' murdered,
This whole Pancake/Big Mac shit is only best with burgers
I'll melt your flesh with burners
You pest, you hermit
Voters can't pull apart his bars,
Nigga's realised they can't be stretched no further
Winner? Pfft, you're a beginner
I'll leave this Netcees intern injured
& lace his shins with splinters
This bitch hasn't seen a hood since his mom bundled him up for winter
It's Exis here nigga, never been taken to school
'Cept when my rhymes came out his printer
Your best thought isn't Deep,
So I don't think you'll create Havoc you protege
Not even if I dug six feet deep & buried your half assed verse in all the way
When you said you'd win, I started laughin'
Like Ja, think he couldn't get any worse so started actin'
In a battle you is cannibal food,
What kind of leader is edible?
This board had to have a twist of fate,
Just for you to see you're illegible.
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Old 06-24-2020, 12:40 AM   #2
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Old 06-26-2020, 11:05 PM   #3
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Cool rhyme scheme, blah subject matter
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Old 06-28-2020, 08:31 AM   #4
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Idiot...
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Old 06-29-2020, 11:24 AM   #5
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Old 06-29-2020, 11:29 AM   #6
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Old 06-29-2020, 11:00 PM   #7
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The concept here was cool..

This bitch hasn't seen a hood since his mom bundled him up for winter

Reminds me of something i said once..

"I navigate the crowd, had to move through snakes
I was pulled from the Hood, like a long shoelace" -Geno

Idk if i ever dropped that line here. Might just be in my reserves. Anyway.. Cool shit Exis. Stay resilient
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Old 06-29-2020, 11:50 PM   #8
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I navigate the crowd, had to move through snakes
I was pulled from the Hood, like a long shoelace" -Geno

Thanks & that's pretty dope...have a feelin' I read that on RF? Not sure...but def didn't read it here bro.

Gracias for the feed, stay safe.
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