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Old 06-25-2020, 03:00 AM   #1
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quick keystyle..

face to face with my knife.. contemplating suicide,
it's do or die, in my mind for a gruesome hiy//
the coolest guy, never was the prudent type,
all I hear is voices telling me I've ruined lives//
I'm through with knives, I'm making sure this noose is tight,
can't cut it right, so I dropped my blade for useless fights//
I'm pooling rides and looking for a fool that drives,
hazards on.. acting as if my engine blew tonight//
he's a student from a near school, and the musics' high,
he can't hear a thing.. as I sneak up behind him and remove his eyes//
I stabbed him in his face, with the same blade I use to try,
threw him in the drunk.. sirens ringing, hoping he wouldn't choose to cry//
I was pulled to the side.. checked my watch, but had already knew the time//
a policeman asks of my license and registration, in his pursuit of crime//
I handed him my information..
and cut his throat open when he stuck his head in to look inside,
then quickly hop'd out my vehicle to cover clues they'd find//
.. I turn the ignition off, took the keys and shut the door,
then overheard some noise from the other car//
.. I pop'd the trunk open, seen the cop and dude-moapin', then stabbed them some more//-
.. like, "what the fuck are you moving for?!",
I was just cooling off and debating whether I'd use-this-saw//
I said.. "haven't you learned at all?!",
I squirmed for gore and felt a sudden urge to knawl//
I chewed their skulls and ate chunks from their flesh,
as I injected sedatives into their bodies for days unto the next..
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Old 06-25-2020, 03:28 AM   #2
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Ahhh...yes you've seen my power and now you've truly awoken
They were only my hosts the policeman, and dude that were mopin'
I sit up out of the car's trunk, grab your chin and stop your chewin' motions
The pieces of my scalp hit the cement as you spew and start chokin'
What you don't remember your old friend? I'm the DEVIL, COR
"It isn't you, that's not true!" What were you expecting me to be red with horns?
I've come to claim your soul because all of the lies you've said on forums
Your sin was your pride, and how you would say anything to get adored
I quickly unsheathed my blade, and dismembered your head with my metal sword
Last thing you seen were the "eyes of an angel" as your head was left on a pike forevermore
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Old 06-25-2020, 03:33 AM   #3
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@Adverse lmfao why did you have to ruin this thread with a bullshit post about me filled with lies? especially you just sent me a PM like 5 minutes asking to collaborate with me.. the answer is no, im not doing a collab with you, you fucking weirdo.. and I will respond to this when I get the time and completely destroy you.. :)
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Old 06-25-2020, 04:02 AM   #4
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@Adverse lmfao why did you have to ruin this thread with a bullshit post about me filled with lies? especially you just sent me a PM like 5 minutes asking to collaborate with me.. the answer is no, im not doing a collab with you, you fucking weirdo.. and I will respond to this when I get the time and completely destroy you.. :)
It was an open cypher i was just continuing the story, i just wanted to collab with you, you ruined my dreams of being a rape star :/
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Old 06-25-2020, 07:14 AM   #5
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Jesus..Cor loco much? Dude's not here mentally...
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Old 06-26-2020, 03:21 AM   #6
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lol sometimes you feel like a nut, sometimes you dont.
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