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Old 06-22-2020, 05:34 AM   #1
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Default quick keystyle.. "The Tale Of Shabazz : 2020"

The Tale Of Shabazz : 2020 - written by Corleone

Shabazz was a disciple of the Islamic faith who considered himself to be a philosopher. He was known for his prophecies on the destruction of the world and proficied that signs of "Armageddon" will appear during the future years of 2020. He studied Greek philosophy and Greek mathematics. He also studied, "Inversion" math and developed essential math problems which lead to exact calculations of a series of events to occur throughout today's world.

He believed that the human anatomy was more majestic then perceived. He studied religion and came about many theological studies. He believed that the human heart was considerably majestic and also, that the heart obtained over thousands and thousands of realms that he referred to as, "Chambers" which safe guarded the secrets of life and creativity of how mankind and all of civilization came about.

He believed that their stood atleast 3,996 chambers within the heart itself that majestically coordinated 4,996 sectors within the heart, as well. He also believed that these chambers and sectors majestically unlocked the very tools to create both light, energy, and force. He prayed and worshipped, "Allah" as his God and referred to Allah as, "Abdul" in his revelation of ritualistic séances to which he performed as prayer ceremonies. He referred to his religious adversary as, "Baal", and prayed against Baal on his religious journey to serve Allah.

The word, "Abdul" in his new found revelation meant : "The Destroyer", "The Devil", "Truth Seeker" and "Ghaad". "Ghaad", was short for a sector of Allahs mercenaries in Shabazzs' new found revelation. He also referred to the streets of Israel as, "The Streets of Abdul", referring to the love the people of Israel have for Allah.





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another novel for the panelist,
.. deep like manuscripts,
beat type canvases,
street life, I chief on cannabis//
incentives of a wise poet,
who knows he's passionate..
flows immaculate,
bestowed by my souls inhabitants//
golden scriptures, composing victims,
the oldest owl..
with a golden style, known for molding my inner child//
3,996 chambers that build my heart,
that's 3,996 layers of timeless art//
3,996 temples known as parts,
that build 4,996 emotions in noahs ark//
it's mathematics, inscribed by a matrix of wonder,
compiled by a world of transparency and sacred of numbers//
from the inversion math formula and sadist of stumblers,
comes about real philosophers, creators and lovers//
genius alike minded individuals who pray to eachother,
slave to eachother,
give thanks and praise one another//
it's theology.. a bit more aged then its cover,
a great wine.. known for miracles, and brilliant color//
secret society, under oath, as the teachings of baal,
reach in our souls and infect each belief we console//
from polygamy, to sex.. to the streets of Abdul,
some died in the trenches, slugs eject, as many seek refuge//
a university of Greek scholars, is to emerge and possibly fall,
a word for us all, to train and observe it's course//

(to be continued)
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Old 06-22-2020, 10:24 PM   #2
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3,996 chambers that build my heart,
that's 3,996 layers of timeless art//
3,996 temples known as parts,
that build 4,996 emotions in noahs ark//
it's mathematics, inscribed by a matrix of wonder,
compiled by a world of transparency and sacred of numbers//

The fuck just happened!? Lol, no shit while readin' this I had Nas - One Mic pumpin'...shit tripped me out.

Good shit though bro, thought the first couplet was niceeee!

Stay upwards Cor...
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Old 06-23-2020, 12:03 AM   #3
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3,996 chambers that build my heart,
that's 3,996 layers of timeless art//
3,996 temples known as parts,
that build 4,996 emotions in noahs ark//
it's mathematics, inscribed by a matrix of wonder,
compiled by a world of transparency and sacred of numbers//



The fuck just happened!? Lol, no shit while readin' this I had Nas - One Mic pumpin'...shit tripped me out.

Good shit though bro, thought the first couplet was niceeee!

Stay upwards Cor...
lol.. thanks.. it's a deep math.. it could actually be real, as well.. but I didn't want to put it out there like that to where some people might portray myself for being crazy or something.. lmfao.. thanks tho..
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Old 06-23-2020, 12:37 AM   #4
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I'm not retarded lol, got it...just thought it was ironic listenin' to that Nas joint while readin' this was all.
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Old 06-23-2020, 01:21 AM   #5
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Your style is really reminiscent of that old school New York style, like Exis was saying got Nas vibes reading this or maybe like GZA? Think your trolling does get old but have enjoyed the couple OMs I've read from you
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