WEEK 2: Ajax 0-0 VS Slecht 0-0 AJAX WINS VIA NS/ OPEN FOR FEED

UPN Zuch · 10-09-2020, 01:45 PM

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UPN Zuch · 10-10-2020, 11:45 PM

@Ajax @slecht check in so I know you see this.

Ajax · 10-12-2020, 02:01 PM

Checking in.

16.

Ajax · 10-13-2020, 11:39 PM

Extension. I'll post later tonight, but it won't be before midnight.

Ajax · 10-14-2020, 12:51 AM

Slecht?

WTF. That sounds just so lame…
I’m pronounced champion when I sign up. Kid can’t even pronounce his own name.
With you, they lowered the bar…
You’ll get beat with generics tonight. Sorry.. I legit don’t know who you are.
You’ll still lose in an instant — They’ll hear the booms in the distance.
You moonlight as an MC… We ALL see lunar eclipses.
For me, losing’s an impossible task;
Your fam’ll be ‘passing out flyers’ like plane-crashing passengers without oxygen masks.
Beating me’s a bigger fluke than Blue Whale fins…
Try to be fly; Hit a true tail spin.. with your lady yelling “YOU CAN’T WIN!”
This.. innocent Dude is lost in a panic..
While.. physicists choose my multi-verses as definitive proof of quantum mechanics.
It’s obvious you lack Sound poise…
My verses resonate deeply with people; your’s are just background noise.
Best to act the victim. One word from me - Crash the system.
I won’t vote this season once and will still top the league algorithm…

Goodnight.

UPN Zuch · 10-14-2020, 01:06 PM

Nice verse.

Ajax wins, OPEN FOR FEED

evaD · 10-14-2020, 03:48 PM

Welcome back @Ajax

Nice verse. Especially liked Moonlight as MC, Multiverses and best you w/ generics. Solid throughout and everything worded nicely.

iSpaz · 10-14-2020, 05:46 PM

Dope verse. I thought the ending was fire.

UserName · 10-14-2020, 10:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ajax

For me, losing’s an impossible task;
Your fam’ll be ‘passing out flyers’ like plane-crashing passengers without oxygen masks.

Jesus. Welcome back, dude.

TOP iLL DRAGSTER TWO · 10-14-2020, 11:40 PM

Wording and punctuation is too smooth. Couple ideas that have Ben done before but it doesn’t matter because you put them together nicely. Closer was swag and the oxygen mask shit is top 10 easy this week.

Orc · 10-15-2020, 05:52 AM

I enjoy the delivery and the rhyming you come with. Swag can carry a verse a long way and you’re a master at executing it to maximise the effect. Multi-verse line was insane imo. Resonate/sound poise/background noise - executed perfectly. Dope line. Nice verse all round.

Dope girl · 10-15-2020, 03:29 PM

It would have been a hot battle
keep it up

Mac · 10-15-2020, 03:33 PM

WTF. That sounds just so lame…
I’m pronounced champion when I sign up. Kid can’t even pronounce his own name.
lol

With you, they lowered the bar…
You’ll get beat with generics tonight. Sorry.. I legit don’t know who you are.
makes sense

You’ll still lose in an instant — They’ll hear the booms in the distance.
You moonlight as an MC… We ALL see lunar eclipses.
okk

For me, losing’s an impossible task;
Your fam’ll be ‘passing out flyers’ like plane-crashing passengers without oxygen masks.
damn

Beating me’s a bigger fluke than Blue Whale fins…
Try to be fly; Hit a true tail spin.. with your lady yelling “YOU CAN’T WIN!”
ehh

This.. innocent Dude is lost in a panic..
While.. physicists choose my multi-verses as definitive proof of quantum mechanics.
statementish?

It’s obvious you lack Sound poise…
My verses resonate deeply with people; your’s are just background noise.
cool

Best to act the victim. One word from me - Crash the system.
I won’t vote this season once and will still top the league algorithm…
okk coool

v/ ajax

Sharp · 10-15-2020, 05:43 PM

[QUOTE=Ajax;788968]Slecht?

WTF. That sounds just so lame…
I’m pronounced champion when I sign up. Kid can’t even pronounce his own name.
Best bar about his weird name I've seen
With you, they lowered the bar…
You’ll get beat with generics tonight. Sorry.. I legit don’t know who you are.
statement
You’ll still lose in an instant — They’ll hear the booms in the distance.
You moonlight as an MC… We ALL see lunar eclipses.
okay, more swagger than a punch right up until thr end though so I wasn't all about it
For me, losing’s an impossible task;
Your fam’ll be ‘passing out flyers’ like plane-crashing passengers without oxygen masks.
punch is fine but the setup seems to only exist to rhyme
Beating me’s a bigger fluke than Blue Whale fins…
Try to be fly; Hit a true tail spin.. with your lady yelling “YOU CAN’T WIN!”
yeah that's rhyming
This.. innocent Dude is lost in a panic..
While.. physicists choose my multi-verses as definitive proof of quantum mechanics.
lmao @ multi verses after the last bar
It’s obvious you lack Sound poise…
My verses resonate deeply with people; your’s are just background noise.
connections there, it's cool
Best to act the victim. One word from me - Crash the system.
I won’t vote this season once and will still top the league algorithm…
dope Al Gore rhythm bar

Statementy yeah

I feel you. I hate writing for people I don't know. Some cool ideas in there

10-12-2020, 02:01 PM	#3
Ajax Senior Member Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 344 Battle Record: 5-4 Rep Power: 95147	Checking in. 16. __________________ https://soundcloud.com/ajaxinstrumentals

10-13-2020, 11:39 PM	#4
Ajax Senior Member Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 344 Battle Record: 5-4 Rep Power: 95147	Extension. I'll post later tonight, but it won't be before midnight. __________________ https://soundcloud.com/ajaxinstrumentals

10-14-2020, 12:51 AM	#5
Ajax Senior Member Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 344 Battle Record: 5-4 Rep Power: 95147	Slecht? WTF. That sounds just so lame… I’m pronounced champion when I sign up. Kid can’t even pronounce his own name. With you, they lowered the bar… You’ll get beat with generics tonight. Sorry.. I legit don’t know who you are. You’ll still lose in an instant — They’ll hear the booms in the distance. You moonlight as an MC… We ALL see lunar eclipses. For me, losing’s an impossible task; Your fam’ll be ‘passing out flyers’ like plane-crashing passengers without oxygen masks. Beating me’s a bigger fluke than Blue Whale fins… Try to be fly; Hit a true tail spin.. with your lady yelling “YOU CAN’T WIN!” This.. innocent Dude is lost in a panic.. While.. physicists choose my multi-verses as definitive proof of quantum mechanics. It’s obvious you lack Sound poise… My verses resonate deeply with people; your’s are just background noise. Best to act the victim. One word from me - Crash the system. I won’t vote this season once and will still top the league algorithm… Goodnight. __________________ https://soundcloud.com/ajaxinstrumentals

10-14-2020, 03:48 PM	#7
evaD Senior Member Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 697 Battle Record: 19-10 Champed - BA Show And Prove - Summer Classic XI Rep Power: 4156644	Welcome back @Ajax Nice verse. Especially liked Moonlight as MC, Multiverses and best you w/ generics. Solid throughout and everything worded nicely. __________________

10-14-2020, 05:46 PM	#8
iSpaz Gang shit on my brain Join Date: May 2015 Posts: 265 Battle Record: 10-11 Rep Power: 161231	Dope verse. I thought the ending was fire. __________________ But don't say I can't rap like I'm not a Rap God, Like I won't break your fucking favorite rapper's rap jaw

10-14-2020, 11:40 PM	#10
TOP iLL DRAGSTER TWO I <3 girls an good at sex Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 149 Battle Record: 4-4 Rep Power: 132751	Wording and punctuation is too smooth. Couple ideas that have Ben done before but it doesn’t matter because you put them together nicely. Closer was swag and the oxygen mask shit is top 10 easy this week. __________________ They think I’m dope and I Cedar Point

10-15-2020, 05:52 AM	#11
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,165 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899390	I enjoy the delivery and the rhyming you come with. Swag can carry a verse a long way and you’re a master at executing it to maximise the effect. Multi-verse line was insane imo. Resonate/sound poise/background noise - executed perfectly. Dope line. Nice verse all round.

10-15-2020, 03:29 PM	#12
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,706 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521416	It would have been a hot battle keep it up

10-15-2020, 03:33 PM	#13
Mac Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 480 Battle Record: 7-12 Rep Power: 1856619	WTF. That sounds just so lame… I’m pronounced champion when I sign up. Kid can’t even pronounce his own name. lol With you, they lowered the bar… You’ll get beat with generics tonight. Sorry.. I legit don’t know who you are. makes sense You’ll still lose in an instant — They’ll hear the booms in the distance. You moonlight as an MC… We ALL see lunar eclipses. okk For me, losing’s an impossible task; Your fam’ll be ‘passing out flyers’ like plane-crashing passengers without oxygen masks. damn Beating me’s a bigger fluke than Blue Whale fins… Try to be fly; Hit a true tail spin.. with your lady yelling “YOU CAN’T WIN!” ehh This.. innocent Dude is lost in a panic.. While.. physicists choose my multi-verses as definitive proof of quantum mechanics. statementish? It’s obvious you lack Sound poise… My verses resonate deeply with people; your’s are just background noise. cool Best to act the victim. One word from me - Crash the system. I won’t vote this season once and will still top the league algorithm… okk coool v/ ajax