Adverse 1-1 vs FGR 1-1 - FGR WINS

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@Adverse


@FGR

[Adverse]

Pics match up pretty well lol sup FGR 12 lines?

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@Adverse see updated pic

[FGR]

Didn't see battles were set it this section... Check.. 12 is cool ad

[Adverse]

Yoo


Throwing back a brewski with that hairstyle? This kid is just hopeless
Look like you grabbed clippers n said "fuck, my side burns!" Or is that cuz of the liver cirrhosis?
I'm a husky guy fam but face it bruh you're the heavier dude
He Hittin the barber like "yo square me up" and they like "bruh...ur whole head is a cube"
Your girl running around on u secretly, cuz you're trash and she loves me
She's keeping you in the dark for the same reason you are, cuz ur mad fuckin ugly
I can say "HA he came dressed for his own funeral!" Let the heater end this battle
But I'd rather commend him on his dope cosplay….. of Peter Griffin's shadow
In the mag User said we would both be contenders...I agree with half that G
Only place you making waves is in the pool and that's cus you built like a manatee
Reenact this scene again and fo sho you're getting capped take the photo and then BLAST
Last thing cameraman will see is an 'eagle peeking near his head' like the logo in the back

[FGR]

If I ever see this asshole imma blast off...dumping the 50cal feels great
I'll show up to your crib with arms so big it'll rival the one holding that plate
Adverse is hated by most. Plz kill yourself we all know you're bound to
I mean look at his face.. even the statue feels awkward around you
No one wants you here queer... I suggest you leave before getting hit
I'd say kick rocks.. but them shoes already look like you were stomping in a gravel pit
Trashed ass sneaks...replace them when you get money in your hands
I'd rather take my chances with strangers & candy then to ever step in them vans
I got a full head of hair with no care... If I was you I'd be cursing
Cuz your hairline is backing up more then a non-confrontational person
I take bitches to fast food places... Then I get them home for a poking
This homo's meeting big boys behind the building & having his mouth wide open

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Originally Posted by Victor.

Fgr come back hard and made this a tough call for me


Fire battle


I can barely call this


Deciding factor for me is picture difficulty


Cuz lines are so closE


adverse had less ammo


So vote adverse

[evaD]

Throwing back a brewski with that hairstyle? This kid is just hopeless
Look like you grabbed clippers n said "fuck, my side burns!" Or is that cuz of the liver cirrhosis?
Lmao
I'm a husky guy fam but face it bruh you're the heavier dude
He Hittin the barber like "yo square me up" and they like "bruh...ur whole head is a cube"
Lmao again great start
Your girl running around on u secretly, cuz you're trash and she loves me
She's keeping you in the dark for the same reason you are, cuz ur mad fuckin ugly
Lol
I can say "HA he came dressed for his own funeral!" Let the heater end this battle
But I'd rather commend him on his dope cosplay….. of Peter Griffin's shadow
Decent
In the mag User said we would both be contenders...I agree with half that G
Only place you making waves is in the pool and that's cus you built like a manatee
This coulda been worded sharper
Reenact this scene again and fo sho you're getting capped take the photo and then BLAST
Last thing cameraman will see is an 'eagle peeking near his head' like the logo in the back
This is ok bit of a reach



If I ever see this asshole imma blast off...dumping the 50cal feels great
I'll show up to your crib with arms so big it'll rival the one holding that plate
decent
Adverse is hated by most. Plz kill yourself we all know you're bound to
I mean look at his face.. even the statue feels awkward around you
Lol this is good
No one wants you here queer... I suggest you leave before getting hit
I'd say kick rocks.. but them shoes already look like you were stomping in a gravel pit
End of this could’ve been worded better but it’s decent
Trashed ass sneaks...replace them when you get money in your hands
I'd rather take my chances with strangers & candy then to ever step in them vans
Lol
I got a full head of hair with no care... If I was you I'd be cursing
Cuz your hairline is backing up more then a non-confrontational person
Punch would’ve come off better the other way round I think
I take bitches to fast food places... Then I get them home for a poking
This homo's meeting big boys behind the building & having his mouth wide open
Lol

Ad came out swinging with two haymakers, 3rd was good also. FGR had steady jabs throughout and a solid verse but I’ll give this to adverse for the two LOTBs

Vote - adverse

[Destroyer]

Yo this was a dope battle
I read adverse and was sure he got it
Then read FGR, was feeling everything but the first shoe bar
Very close though, I think fgr just edged it
Non confrontational was lotb for me

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Ad -

Throwing back a brewski with that hairstyle? This kid is just hopeless
Look like you grabbed clippers n said "fuck, my side burns!" Or is that cuz of the liver cirrhosis?
Your girl running around on u secretly, cuz you're trash and she loves me
She's keeping you in the dark for the same reason you are, cuz ur mad fuckin ugly


FGR:

Trashed ass sneaks...replace them when you get money in your hands
I'd rather take my chances with strangers & candy then to ever step in them vans
I got a full head of hair with no care... If I was you I'd be cursing
Cuz your hairline is backing up more then a non-confrontational person

Man, I thought this was gonna be lowkey the BoTW - but it didn't really turn out as hype as I thought lol. Still, I enjoyed it for what it was. You both need to work on wording, it's just something that's holding back BOTH of these verses from being as fire as they could be. Overall, not gonna be too wordy, this was a decent little battle, but I liked Ad a little more. Conceptually, I thought he was just better and I laughed more at the cirrhosis line than anything FGR really had. Keep up the good work guys.

V - Adverse

[UPN Zuch]

Head cube
Fuckin ugly
Manatee

Vs

Step in vans
Closer

Going adverse here. More hits


Vote adverse

[Resin M-I-C]

peter griffin
eagle

vs

awkward
vans
big boys

real even.. going quotes here and fgr had one more line i liked.. vans my fav line of the battle too.. good stuff

v fgr

[Wanderer]

Throwing back a brewski with that hairstyle? This kid is just hopeless
Look like you grabbed clippers n said "fuck, my side burns!" Or is that cuz of the liver cirrhosis?
Tad wordy but ok. Cool concept
I'm a husky guy fam but face it bruh you're the heavier dude
He Hittin the barber like "yo square me up" and they like "bruh...ur whole head is a cube"
Again, kinda wordy but made me lol
Your girl running around on u secretly, cuz you're trash and she loves me
She's keeping you in the dark for the same reason you are, cuz ur mad fuckin ugly
Nah bro this wasn’t too hot
I can say "HA he came dressed for his own funeral!" Let the heater end this battle
But I'd rather commend him on his dope cosplay….. of Peter Griffin's shadow
It’s ok
In the mag User said we would both be contenders...I agree with half that G
Only place you making waves is in the pool and that's cus you built like a manatee
Its not the freshest idea’
Reenact this scene again and fo sho you're getting capped take the photo and then BLAST
Last thing cameraman will see is an 'eagle peeking near his head' like the logo in the back
I didn’t like this. I suppose the punch was just ok but That set up needed punctuation or just to be cut down altogether


Vs


If I ever see this asshole imma blast off...dumping the 50cal feels great
I'll show up to your crib with arms so big it'll rival the one holding that plate
Solid opener, not the most creative
Adverse is hated by most. Plz kill yourself we all know you're bound to
I mean look at his face.. even the statue feels awkward around you
im not overly keen
No one wants you here queer... I suggest you leave before getting hit
I'd say kick rocks.. but them shoes already look like you were stomping in a gravel pit
Yeah ok
Trashed ass sneaks...replace them when you get money in your hands
I'd rather take my chances with strangers & candy then to ever step in them vans
heating up more. This was cool
I got a full head of hair with no care... If I was you I'd be cursing
Cuz your hairline is backing up more then a non-confrontational person
this seems simple but I Never seen a receding hairline flip like this and I liked it
I take bitches to fast food places... Then I get them home for a poking
This homo's meeting big boys behind the building & having his mouth wide open
Closer’s ok


Man I don’t know if everyone else is gonna find this close to call but I do. I think adverse first two bars coulda been dope with better wording / execution but they fell slightly short. FGR had kick rocks, vans and hairline which were executed pretty well. Ahhggg man.

ITS DONE

Vote - FGR

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@Mac @Bomb Bard @Blue Bayou @Neighbor could use votes

[Mac]

Throwing back a brewski with that hairstyle? This kid is just hopeless
Look like you grabbed clippers n said "fuck, my side burns!" Or is that cuz of the liver cirrhosis?
ok abit wordy good concept

I'm a husky guy fam but face it bruh you're the heavier dude
He Hittin the barber like "yo square me up" and they like "bruh...ur whole head is a cube"
funny light

Your girl running around on u secretly, cuz you're trash and she loves me
She's keeping you in the dark for the same reason you are, cuz ur mad fuckin ugly
came off a bit simple ad at the end

I can say "HA he came dressed for his own funeral!" Let the heater end this battle
But I'd rather commend him on his dope cosplay….. of Peter Griffin's shadow
okish

In the mag User said we would both be contenders...I agree with half that G
Only place you making waves is in the pool and that's cus you built like a manatee
haha nice

Reenact this scene again and fo sho you're getting capped take the photo and then BLAST
Last thing cameraman will see is an 'eagle peeking near his head' like the logo in the back
cool


vs.

If I ever see this asshole imma blast off...dumping the 50cal feels great
I'll show up to your crib with arms so big it'll rival the one holding that plate
ok nice reference but it lacked a diss

Adverse is hated by most. Plz kill yourself we all know you're bound to
I mean look at his face.. even the statue feels awkward around you
it makes sense due to his face but this could hav been harsher

No one wants you here queer... I suggest you leave before getting hit
I'd say kick rocks.. but them shoes already look like you were stomping in a gravel pit
haha cool

Trashed ass sneaks...replace them when you get money in your hands
I'd rather take my chances with strangers & candy then to ever step in them vans
nice lol I was trying to figure out a vans line with Ad earlier

I got a full head of hair with no care... If I was you I'd be cursing
Cuz your hairline is backing up more then a non-confrontational person
lol good

I take bitches to fast food places... Then I get them home for a poking
This homo's meeting big boys behind the building & having his mouth wide open
not feeling this too much

real tight battle, both had equal amount of misses and punches so it's a tough call.. I think i'm going here with FGR due to his non-confrontational person line. Adverse I see you're trying new styles that's cool I feel you, just shorten a bit the lines and that will improve the readability flow. however excellent verse as always

v/fgr

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I'm a husky guy fam but face it bruh you're the heavier dude
He Hittin the barber like "yo square me up" and they like "bruh...ur whole head is a cube"
I can say "HA he came dressed for his own funeral!" Let the heater end this battle
But I'd rather commend him on his dope cosplay….. of Peter Griffin's shadow
Reenact this scene again and fo sho you're getting capped take the photo and then BLAST
Last thing cameraman will see is an 'eagle peeking near his head' like the logo in the back



If I ever see this asshole imma blast off...dumping the 50cal feels great
I'll show up to your crib with arms so big it'll rival the one holding that plate
No one wants you here queer... I suggest you leave before getting hit
I'd say kick rocks.. but them shoes already look like you were stomping in a gravel pit
Trashed ass sneaks...replace them when you get money in your hands
I'd rather take my chances with strangers & candy then to ever step in them vans


Close as fuck for me. Good reads from both. I thought the strangers and candy from FGR was lotb, Adverse's square up and Peter griffin lines were right behind it. Funny that FGR was up against a verse that had two lines about shoes last week, now he's got two this week.. It's just preference for me, but I got FGR with lotb. Great battle guys

V/FGR

[Bomb Bard]

I'm a husky guy fam but face it bruh you're the heavier dude
He Hittin the barber like "yo square me up" and they like "bruh...ur whole head is a cube"
I can say "HA he came dressed for his own funeral!" Let the heater end this battle
But I'd rather commend him on his dope cosplay….. of Peter Griffin's shadow
In the mag User said we would both be contenders...I agree with half that G
Only place you making waves is in the pool and that's cus you built like a manatee

All decent shit you didn’t have much to work with imo


VS


If I ever see this asshole imma blast off...dumping the 50cal feels great
I'll show up to your crib with arms so big it'll rival the one holding that plate

No one wants you here queer... I suggest you leave before getting hit
I'd say kick rocks.. but them shoes already look like you were stomping in a gravel pit
Trashed ass sneaks...replace them when you get money in your hands
I'd rather take my chances with strangers & candy then to ever step in them vans
I got a full head of hair with no care... If I was you I'd be cursing
Cuz your hairline is backing up more then a non-confrontational person
I take bitches to fast food places... Then I get them home for a poking
This homo's meeting big boys behind the building & having his mouth wide open


Mir started to heat up at the end there. I got FGR with more quotables and his misses were better. That Vans line was dope and your closer was nice. Imo I think adverse didn’t have much to work with or I can’t see shit on my phone but who knows


V/FGR

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FGR wins