Week One: Inno vs. Defiant vs. oorie - INNO WINS

[Blue Bayou]

NBL Season XIV

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@Defiant
@Inno @orrie

[Inno]

12

[Defiant]

Ok

[orrie]

Hi. 12 sounds like a party.

[Inno]

Ext?

[Inno]

Ayo

Let’s be honest I’m on this ,these niggas won’t punch but ama key some
Knock 2 birds off till I have 2 heads under my belt like a fucking threesome....
Hold the grip to yah dome let it spit till your gone that’s death applied
Must be looking to die, but you won’t hear death coming when the barrel leaves yah vision black call it def I...
Spray 9’s and leave 2 bodies cold in the gutter pilin
Cuz if these fagots thought they was winning their more delusional than Leo in shutter island...
And yo... I got 2 wife’s slurping cum while u both play cucks
Give em meat sweats n Have Em turn freaks for the balls no Milwaukee bucks...
Call it day care cuz they gon take kids i don’t play far
And... I’ll have both those sluts in line taking turns for a ride like a state fair...

[Defiant]

Innos an ugly fag, heres what il propose instead
Il see that you're Indated with demands, like admin shut the fuck up n close that thread
never at gatherings, never the type girls dive at
But here il make u the life of the house Party, ..... by ripping ya heads off on a live chat
Poems, 9000 posts n a sex life? Il snub that prediction
Sayin you've paid for what you got, it can only pornhub subscription
Only got accomplishments when the site died n that's a sheer weak trend
Shining when theres no crowd..... you're worse than that last wrestlemania weekend
Fucks an oorie?, another weird topical guy that mights apart see
The type you wouldn't leave alone with ya kids, when

Originally Posted by orrie

Hi. 12 sounds like a party.

[Aero]

Inno - Leo in shutter island wasn't good in classic way but kinda funny.


Defiant: wrestlemania line was cute.


Idk who I have winning this. Vote tie.

[Ender]

Inno
Let’s be honest I’m on this ,these niggas won’t punch but ama key some
Knock 2 birds off till I have 2 heads under my belt like a fucking threesome....
Call it day care cuz they gon take kids i don’t play far
And... I’ll have both those sluts in line taking turns for a ride like a state fair...

Defiant
Only got accomplishments when the site died n that's a sheer weak trend
Shining when theres no crowd..... you're worse than that last wrestlemania weekend
Fucks an oorie?, another weird topical guy that mights apart see
The type you wouldn't leave alone with ya kids, when "Hi. 12 sounds like a party."

I thought this was very close. I liked Defiant's concepts better but the wording hurt some of them. Inno's bars were better worded but I didn't like the concepts as much. I thought the wrestlemania line was the lotb so I suppose I'll go with Defiant.

Vote - Defiant

[Cashius]

Inno- Threesome and Greek Freak

Defiant- 12 sounds like a party

I enjoyed Inno’s verse more. Felt like his thoughts were laid out clearer and was a bit more creative. Wasn’t loving the lines I didn’t quote but those two were solid. Defiant’s wording seemed off and his concepts just felt lackluster to me.

Vote-Inno

[Sharp]

Let’s be honest I’m on this ,these niggas won’t punch but ama key some
Knock 2 birds off till I have 2 heads under my belt like a fucking threesome....
I fuck with it, but I still see that 'yeah fuck it ima key something setup' so I know you're being lazy and making excuses
Hold the grip to yah dome let it spit till your gone that’s death applied
Must be looking to die, but you won’t hear death coming when the barrel leaves yah vision black call it def I...
I don't get where the defy connection is
Spray 9’s and leave 2 bodies cold in the gutter pilin
Cuz if these fagots thought they was winning their more delusional than Leo in shutter island...
this is a pretty basic flip. It's just a reference. You could've said 'more delusional than barc talking about his record' to the same effect. It's just kind of... Meh
And yo... I got 2 wife’s slurping cum while u both play cucks
Give em meat sweats n Have Em turn freaks for the balls no Milwaukee bucks...
like giannis? I don't understand why 'Have Em' is capitalized. It's mechanically sound but the 'ball' jokes are kind of old news
Call it day care cuz they gon take kids i don’t play far
And... I’ll have both those sluts in line taking turns for a ride like a state fair...
not the worst park o a scheme... Maybe combined with thr last punch it's something, but jokes like 'the village bicycle' make the flip here feel corny


Innos an ugly fag, heres what il propose instead
Il see that you're Indated with demands, like admin shut the fuck up n close that thread
cool idea, but the word you're looking for is 'inundated'
never at gatherings, never the type girls dive at
But here il make u the life of the house Party, ..... by ripping ya heads off on a live chat
I don't get it.
Poems, 9000 posts n a sex life? Il snub that prediction
Sayin you've paid for what you got, it can only pornhub subscription
okay
Only got accomplishments when the site died n that's a sheer weak trend
Shining when theres no crowd..... you're worse than that last wrestlemania weekend
nice. I appreciate that it's personal
Fucks an oorie?, another weird topical guy that mights apart see
The type you wouldn't leave alone with ya kids, when
quotes don't show up within quotes

Okay, more silly than anything but it works for me


I got Defiant with the harder hits. Good shit guys, props for pulling through a 3 way

V/def

[FGR]

Innos opener seemed a little selfhype'ish n didn't pack much sting but it was still okay.
Applied and def l didn't rhyme for me.. def l and apply sure..but with the Ed on the end it doesn't work for me
..leo line was a light jab
Ya last two bars were mehhh.. finisher was basic but ok
Vs
First two bars were a miss..
Pornhub was a light jab.... WrestleMania was cool..
Closer was an ok attempt at a personal..didn't hit all like that tho..

This is close as fuck... Hard to pick..both had a few jabs..both had misses..d had LOTB w the no crowd concept but inn was a llittle more aggressive with his delivery..i would just vote this as a tie... I want to pick a winner but cant.. I'm legit about to flip a coin.. idk man....I guess I'll go with inno .. with being slightly more harsh I guess... Could go either way...I could read this again and maybe vote the other way..so close... But VOTE INNO

[Blue Bayou]

2-2 with aero's tie vote

Ppl please vote up so i can set up week 2

[Blue Bayou]

Guys, first and foremost i apologize that this is going to end 3-2. It sucks and i'm sorry it's happening to you two. That being said, i have a schedule and need to get week 2 set-up so i can keep this moving. Thanks in advance for your understanding. It happens, and is always unfortunate when it does ... I'm going to break the tie


Let’s be honest I’m on this ,these niggas won’t punch but ama key some
Knock 2 birds off till I have 2 heads under my belt like a fucking threesome....
wording seems a bit off, but it's an interesting concept...coolish
Hold the grip to yah dome let it spit till your gone that’s death applied
Must be looking to die, but you won’t hear death coming when the barrel leaves yah vision black call it def I...
hmm...i think this is just rushed wordign wise...nah
Spray 9’s and leave 2 bodies cold in the gutter pilin
Cuz if these fagots thought they was winning their more delusional than Leo in shutter island...
ehh, love the movie but this is a pretty generic and basic reference...its okay, but far from good
And yo... I got 2 wife’s slurping cum while u both play cucks
Give em meat sweats n Have Em turn freaks for the balls no Milwaukee bucks...
lol, this was cool
Call it day care cuz they gon take kids i don’t play far
And... I’ll have both those sluts in line taking turns for a ride like a state fair...
okay, feels basic and dated...worth a bit of a chuckle


vs.


Innos an ugly fag, heres what il propose instead
Il see that you're Indated with demands, like admin shut the fuck up n close that thread
i did in n' date against him , and i think thats the actual word you were going for... anyways as is this just doesn't work and is a miss
never at gatherings, never the type girls dive at
But here il make u the life of the house Party, ..... by ripping ya heads off on a live chat
don't get the reference...did a quick search and still dont see what ur getting at here
Poems, 9000 posts n a sex life? Il snub that prediction
Sayin you've paid for what you got, it can only pornhub subscription
snub that prediction? what prediction? he self predicts he'll write a poem and get laid? Porn hub punch is okay.. i'm not really familiar with 'i paid for what i got' as a phrase....this is okay and somehwat lolish
Only got accomplishments when the site died n that's a sheer weak trend
Shining when theres no crowd..... you're worse than that last wrestlemania weekend
Cool. this is a good ref and punch
Fucks an oorie?, another weird topical guy that mights apart see
The type you wouldn't leave alone with ya kids, when
HI 12 sounds like a party
Nah. this is lame conceptually to me... and mights apart see? Your setups seem lazy and mehh, takes away from the bars focus on putting more effort into this part of your writting



Overall pretty lack lustre battle imo. I think this is probably being avoided vote wise cuz it is a pretty tough all. Defiant probably has the bar of the battle with the wrestlemania ref, but more misses overall....On the whole Inno edged this to me for more enjoyable 'misses' , and two coolish bars vs. one

Props to both... Vote Inno

[Blue Bayou]

Inno wins. Sorry again fellas