LMAO WHY MUFF SIGN OUT THE BAL IN A BAWWWWLAZE OF GLORY THOUGH?

[Ghost1]

Originally Posted by Enbombz

You doing shit like this is why people get out off running leagues. Hopefully inc can see this is just you being you and he isn't put off from running leagues here. It's a pretty selfless act running a league and to shit on him because he a) didn't have same opinion of you or even b) he hasn't got as much experience at judging text battles as some of us is just petty as fuck.

It's just you being though dude, what can I say.

[El Muffin]

Its a roast I don't get how clowning is being eschewed and u talking about gunbars being preferred

In a roast

Lol but yeah everything else I'm fine w/

[Diablo]

Originally Posted by El Muffin

Its a roast I don't get how clowning is being eschewed and u talking about gunbars being preferred

In a roast

Lol but yeah everything else I'm fine w/

I loved the clowning

I'm a fan of it myself

I'm just saying, objectively, I can see why these newer cars may have preferred his verse

You gotta adapt to what's liked or stay irrelevant with what isn't

[Diablo]

I’m takin candy from babies & in return I leave`em eatin pistols
Hit this Airhead with heat seekin missiles & when this Starburst he'll start leakin Skittles

Nice reference to the pic full of fruity colours, the wordplay works too, not as strong an opening as muffs but not bad at all

Nigga looks like he failed study hall writing a new ballad on how to shoot rapid
These are culinary school pics…he went from bein prep & straight to fruit salad

Again, fruit salad was cool, think his wording was nice too- nice enough to sell the line at least even if it wasn't anything crazy

I mean you could be Goldust’s side-kick...or even side-bitch in that uniform
He looks like the type of nigga that`d pull up on someone ridin on a unicorn

LOL straight clowning, similar to Muff himself somewhat here, I like it

In the shadows I’ve ben stiller than statues waitin for him to make bad moves
The way I see it...if I need cash..I’ma pull a lick & stick`em just like his tattoos

Cool conceptually, not seen that done before so it's fresh to me at least

Damn nigga...what are thoooose!? LOL...I’m dead nigga where is my bouquet
Cause those are the most generic tattoos I’ve seen since I ran out VC on 2k

I didn't get this, can't even lie, it went over my head. Sorry BS

In the words of Riley…nigga you gay…ask him if he’s queer & if he dare lies
I’ll pay his stylist to put clips in his head & this idiot said I love barrettes & hair ties

The clips things been done, you tied it into the picture with the hair ties and whatnot but I wasn't overly crazy on this one. You've done well up to this point though, can't hate

Amen...is this your King up in NY?...Bet you feel like he raps to your soul
I mean I guess it makes sense...because one looks & the other acts like a Troll

Again, kind of cool, tied into the board relevancy with the Amen mention. It's a light jab though here for me personally

You’re bitch made & made for bitches so I bet you get played by the same hoe, right?
I can’t believe you recreated yourself as the live size version of the doll Rainbow Brite

Not so keen on this one in truth, I get it, just felt it needed something more to make it a zinger or some wordplay to add some creativity. As it was it was quite a statementish observation, it needed another element of either clowning or wordplay or hyperbole to make the line pop

[El Muffin]

I can do gun bars just don't think they belong in a pic diss

Unless its fire fire

Edit: issa stone cold robbery see i told ya

I'm lying

[Amen]

Originally Posted by Muff's BAL ROAST Verse

What in the entire FUCK. thissa holy disgrace
Names 69': Well it suits you : u got pussy ridden all over yur face
This was ok. Nothing heavy or anything because it was such an obvious angle.
Who gave you a mic. Fool, Yur lame & its trife
How u go from looking like a foreign exchange student to not goin 2 school a day in ur life
Ok.
Recent pic is telling . Trusttt, his brodies aware
U tell someone 2 to "go against the grain ' : & its jus ur homie combing your hair
Didn't like this one much.
You gettin no ass . Bro you smell of inferior
Cropped half the bitch face out the pic but we can still tell that she's hideous
Nah, wack.
Listen i dont envision that youll ever even sniff the top
That scarf is an Infinity Knot: like wen ppl ask if I listen to the shit u drop
LOL, you lying. I know you bump 69 nigga... You bumping Lil peep, Lil wheep, and Lil mo...
That first pic is death . Gawdd homie, its morbid
& its clear that THATS a little broad : well my nigga, so is ur forehead
Ok.
why that picture though? the moment is harddly important
Now presenting:" the first nigga in our family to NOT get deported"
This was ok, needed something, I felt.
That relationship weird. Its dumb scary, my mans
Here's the naked truth. She's holding you like she's the one wearin the pants
Nah.
That 2nd pic is tragic :bro stop the despair
Can't see the Game w/ Hanson: but mmm BOP nigga ur rocking their hair
Didn't like this.
Fact u talked shit to him? That's a blatant arrest
Ur not raps Heir Apparent you jus need to b deprived from taking a breath
Cool concept, wording was rough.

vs

Originally Posted by BodySnatcher's BAL ROAST Verse

I’m takin candy from babies & in return I leave`em eatin pistols
Hit this Airhead with heat seekin missiles & when this Starburst he'll start leakin Skittles
Like the concept, but to me the execution was mildly gay and soft.
Nigga looks like he failed study hall writing a new ballad on how to shoot rapid
These are culinary school pics…he went from bein prep & straight to fruit salad
Lol, this was ok.
I mean you could be Goldust’s side-kick...or even side-bitch in that uniform
He looks like the type of nigga that`d pull up on someone ridin on a unicorn
Mildly gay.
In the shadows I’ve ben stiller than statues waitin for him to make bad moves
The way I see it...if I need cash..I’ma pull a lick & stick`em just like his tattoos
Concept there - execution was soft.
Damn nigga...what are thoooose!? LOL...I’m dead nigga where is my bouquet
Cause those are the most generic tattoos I’ve seen since I ran out VC on 2k
Not sure what you are talking about here and I don't google so yea... And the "LOL" SHIT in your own verses kill it for me... Corny, don't do it. THat's like you trying to force a funny.
In the words of Riley…nigga you gay…ask him if he’s queer & if he dare lies
I’ll pay his stylist to put clips in his head & this idiot said I love barrettes & hair ties
This was ok.
Amen...is this your King up in NY?...Bet you feel like he raps to your soul
I mean I guess it makes sense...because one looks & the other acts like a Troll
TO answer the question no, he's trash. But the troll shit fits.
You’re bitch made & made for bitches so I bet you get played by the same hoe, right?
I can’t believe you recreated yourself as the live size version of the doll Rainbow Brite
Wording rocky. Concept there but again the execution was soft.

This was actually close... I do think Muff edged it, tho if I'm being fair here. Body's got the mechanic's down which him and I have discussed - I'm just not a fan of his executions the majority of the time. Conceptually he's straight - I just think he flops on the execution.

There is my take, since it was asked I dropped my opinion on the verses.

inb4 wack amen tag makers lol... (what does amen think?) hahaa... You faggot dick riders.

[Diablo]

Okay, so in summary I think both started off stronger than they closed it out. That's apparent off bat. I do think Muff got it though after breaking both verses down, he had the funnier clowning and more creative angles that worked where Body was losing me toward the end with the Troll/Rainbow Bright lines that I felt needed some more ZING to then to make them standout. It's definitely closer than it looks, though, it's no robbery to say either won even if I have Muff edging that one after breaking it down bar for bar, he shouldn't be mad that Bodysnatcher got it, BS is a lot better than Muff giving him credit for ITT

[El Muffin]

ISSA ROBBED

[Defiant]

U done this stuff when I was modding a load of shit before ......it became more effort than it was worth
U was messaging 3-4 times a day saying some shit
Went overboard when I put u 2nd in a roast 1 week
I could post pms you sent that'd make u wanna kill yourself


He's trying to help and run something he gets nothing out of
If him and cred ain't helping the site it's dead

[Diablo]

Originally Posted by Amen

This was actually close... I do think Muff edged it, tho if I'm being fair here. Body's got the mechanic's down which him and I have discussed - I'm just not a fan of his executions the majority of the time. Conceptually he's straight - I just think he flops on the execution.

There is my take, since it was asked I dropped my opinion on the verses.

inb4 wack amen tag makers lol... (what does amen think?) hahaa... You faggot dick riders.

Nah, you good, that's how I scored it as well pretty much. Muff in a very close one with the slight edge, no robbery though, mainly due to his wording being sloppy and rushed. He made this close himself by not putting full effort in.

[El Muffin]

Na thx 4 the input

And Bodysnatcher nice w/ it

Mucho potential .

[El Muffin]

Originally Posted by Defiant

U done this stuff when I was modding a load of shit before ......it became more effort than it was worth
U was messaging 3-4 times a day saying some shit
Went overboard when I put u 2nd in a roast 1 week
I could post pms you sent that'd make u wanna kill yourself


He's trying to help and run something he gets nothing out of
If him and cred ain't helping the site it's dead

Nigga I don't remember NONE of that

Wtf did u run I was in

Show me the pms

I was in your BAL years ago but I certainly don't remember no roast nor coming @ you about SHIIIIIT

proof plz

Then again I don't remember spazzing on everyone either

I just remember going to rmbva n getting sought out like a fugitive by some of you

[Amen]

Originally Posted by Diablo

Nah, you good, that's how I scored it as well pretty much. Muff in a very close one with the slight edge, no robbery though, mainly due to his wording being sloppy and rushed. He made this close himself by not putting full effort in.

Word. BS's verse wasn't bad at all - like I said - I'm just not a fan of his executions the majority of the time.

[Incredible]

Yo I just saw this thread, Damn didn't want it to turn into this at all....I don't want to be remembered as the mod that robbed or didn't rob muff of a roast win. Just trying to learn shit, get better, and keep this craft/art of text going. Its an interesting outlet and its a positive one. I did already apologize to muff and everyone who felt I was wrong and wished muff the best of luck going forward. And stated that going forward I will have someone else judge the roasts. @El Muffin we cool man no hate no ill will towards you. We keep it breezy...

[El Muffin]

I didn't make this thread

We good

[BodySnatcher]

@Amen @Diablo @El Muffin....appreciate the feedback, I know I suck, I'm still tryin to get on LilCrip level...lol...btw VC is points/money on Nba2k

[For Battling]

Nah I’d never PM someone co-signing their bitchassness and whiny little brat shenanigans

[El Muffin]

But you'll bite niggas in a hot minute ..

Just don't offer input

[Twodrop]

hip hops needs this beef tbr

[Orc]

BodySnatcher is nice with it