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Old 11-01-2014, 08:45 AM   #1
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Old 11-01-2014, 06:09 PM   #2
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Check. Goodluck Homie.
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Old 11-02-2014, 01:21 AM   #3
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Catch Fresh infront of his man, my gun drawn ready to bust ya'll
Leave you fallin back into ya niggas arms.. My bullets givin out trust falls
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Old 11-02-2014, 08:41 AM   #4
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I'll be posting later today
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Old 11-02-2014, 02:38 PM   #5
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You're a diva for sure; pink clothing and the desire for everyone to mention you?
@Persist the focal point for sure... and laugh; the only time you'll ever be the center of attention fool
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Old 11-02-2014, 03:35 PM   #6
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Persist coulda worded the second line a lil better but still had a more effective punch than fresh
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Old 11-02-2014, 04:05 PM   #7
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i got persist winning but tbh fresh should have won this

using ...and laugh fucked his bar up

i enjoyed his concept more but his wording in the second line backfired

mvgt persisr

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Old 11-03-2014, 06:16 PM   #8
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This is one of the better bars I've seen from persist, actually not bad- fresh you slacked here.

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Old 11-03-2014, 11:12 PM   #9
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Fresh wording dragged the impact while persist kept it tight and it hit... I got P on the w with better impact tho fresh had a cool concept
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wasn't feeling freshes bar.. felt the execution was too wordy and the concept was old. Persist had a pretty dope line that could have used a harder hitting execution. Seen a similar bar done by Orc (I think it was) in RB during the gauntlet that crushed this one but it was cool nonetheless. Fresh would have had to come hard to top it but couldn't pull it off.

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Old 11-04-2014, 12:14 AM   #11
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I've seen a couple trust fall concepts but this one def was nicely done, Fresh seemed like he didn't put much into his bar imo ..v/Persist
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Old 11-04-2014, 01:11 PM   #13
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The and laugh pause in freshest bar threw me off here. I like what he was going for but that took all sting away. Persists bar was decent I've seen a few trust fall bars but this approach was different. Over persist had the smoother hitting bar

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Old 11-04-2014, 01:32 PM   #14
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Fresh bar was crazyyyyyyyyy stretched. Fresh tried to hit him with the 1-2, 3, 4, and 5.


Anyways, Fresh bar was way to wordy which took away from the impact. Persist bar was ok at best. Not a fan of "Gun Bars" cause they're corny to me considering they are just false threats but it was a cool concept executed pretty smoothly.

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