07-08-2015, 09:19 AM | #1 |
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07-08-2015, 09:43 AM | #2 |
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07-08-2015, 12:12 PM | #4 |
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The mechanics of the mind, sometimes they clash in the line
assembly, eventually producing the Passion of the Christ the grasping of life, watching the gear as it actively grinds melodies, the deafening thoughts, that this fantasy binds features insanity hide, held together by sanity...right? the remedy, fidelity, that her fingers passionately guide.. her hands fashioned by time, holding onto seconds of wired family ties memories are like weaponry, especially when flashed in the light the elaborate divide, literally marching towards a battle to strive an enemy of brevity, the right fought the left for the answers she hides the mind, a tragic device, yet she finds herself where the damages lie essentially the reckoning subsides, the reaction arrives her compassion's alive, she takes one last glance to confide affection bleeds infectiously, expressing the standards we fight it no longer matters...she's fine, she comes back to me..."I...." melodies...telling me...she will always care.."love you daddy"..."Good bye"
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07-08-2015, 03:18 PM | #5 |
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No one knows me the way that you seem to. I promise that. You don't see the robot on stage, you see me for what I am. The weirdest of horror fans, poetry writer on forums, The geek with the comic magazines though you think the price is extortion. Our lives aren't the normal but, what would you change? It's why you're so sure of us - we're one and the same. You "got" how my brain works and what makes me tick You could count the cogs up as they turn while I'm stopping to think! I'm not just the bigoted loud mouth who happens to rap there's a softer contingent about me that you've unmasked. A passionate, happy-go-lucky partner who cares that's who I am underneath the bravado I wear. You know every scar that I bear, every tormented issue, They say a problems halved when its shared, but it's solved when I'm with you. You know every fault I'd admit to and those that I guard it's a result I continue to hold close to my heart. You've known from the start there's more than is meeting the eye - you've exposed the facade and seen through the guise. You know the secrets I hide, the way that I act, but you still keep them in silence and I'm grateful for that. You weren't taken aback, just grinning happily that day that I asked you "Will you marry me?" We'll build a family. I love you for life. As long as we've still transparency, we've nothing to hide. Trust me the night I said "I do," in front of the witness I looked to my right and knew how far I'd come in that instant. It's more than just kinship. Even now my hearts in my mouth, I didn't marry the woman I live with but the one I can't live without...
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07-08-2015, 09:26 PM | #6 |
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His subtle symmetry is gazing in a void
A simple imagery is tasting your own moist... Iris drops... covering the joist Push against the current you've manically deployed I mean, Why ask why when the answer is a wrench Slowly churning deeper, piercing every sense Thrusting til your gushing liquids have been spent Fuming from their losses, weeping from their tent Your lids blink, HIS final synapse sparks a fume Robotic tears of twisted gears coming loose Bolts and screws unhinging you Ironic, A goddess creates a swimming pool All because her subordinate has been misconstrued A compatriot abused His ever expanding knowledge drastically confused He had zero doubters after toppling the towers An extremist criminal can't be wrongfully devoured, Nope - He was recused in sending a deluge Levy's being broke and Japanese engulfed What's wrong? Overpopulation was the note And the pen struck the land with a tidal antidote If you were directed to save as many people as you could And your creator kissed you goodbye, but you never understood is the tree heard? If it successfully gave a fighting chance by eliminating... it's “own” herd. Last edited by Woke; 07-08-2015 at 09:31 PM. |
07-08-2015, 10:06 PM | #7 |
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Swept from her feet.. he led emotion’s dance so delicately
Her heart had never known love, nor the depths it could reach What pleasure, so sweet. She was truly displaced To feel his soothing embrace emanate from that beautiful face She felt renewed, and engaged. Any obstacle felt solvable. Her life, so often dull, took new shape within love’s hypnotic pull There was not a lull, she treasured life and the gifts it provides Exquisite and blithe, her heart alit by passion’s whimsical ride Oh, what intimacy, in between sheets, her sweat would glisten That sweet shudder, her pulse aflutter, as they found their tender rhythm Then collapsed on his chest, as the moon bathed her in beams Gasping for breath, but from his heart… not the faintest of beats As strange as it seems. In an instant she was stricken by dread Her heart twisted, bereft, as she violently kicked in his head Digging in, she used her bare hands to break through the skin Imprinted upon his skull, however dull, it read: Robolationships, Inc.
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07-08-2015, 11:11 PM | #8 |
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My lover's been dismantled.....
(from the female's pov) My hands drip with blood and grease, the flow is haunting. I didnt deserve the peace your words bestowed upon me. Just know I constantly work and labor to bring u back to me. Many say that u don't deserve a savior but that rings of blasphemy. Because u were my everything, I never strained to love u, honestly. It came so natural, now I infuse my supernatural gifts with technology. Rebuild, adding tech to your body. Get the CPU prepped to copy. Theyll have to put me death to stop me. We were born to end life. But right now I feel next to god, see the storm is in sight. That's the last ingredient, then alas we meet again... I've been trying for so long, soon you'll see again. Your eyes light up and my heart follows suit. I call to you, but your gaze remains blank. A tear escapes, and with it my hopes fall too...
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07-09-2015, 03:31 AM | #9 |
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Robotical roboticon.
Roboting like a Robotron. Getting my robot on, bitch I'm Robocop. Getting it on with my robocock. In my robo socks like a robot boss. Got my robot stocks. And my Rolex watch. Clockin dolo lots, Bitch I'm Robobot. Bitch I'm coaco bot. Never smoke no bong. Smokin robo chocolate getting robo profits. Eatin robo sausage with my robo coffee. At robot o'clock at the robot stop. Bitch I'm robotpac. Bitch ya ho got shot. Get ya dome topped off bitch I'm robogod. With my robo cross in the robot spot. Bitch I'm robodawg, this my robot bark. At the robot park where the robots flock. Bitch I'm robospok in my robot pod Going to robot Mars for the robot broads Bitch I'm flow hot bot spitting robot bars With my robot talk. This is robot rock. |
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we Get high, watch the A.I. and the c.g.i.
we see disguise, in characters. marvel, and the "d.c." rides. are you strapped In &Ready? or Is Everything you See-gonna-be-a-surprise? -I Surmise.. there's a Trilogy.. the first or second Are The Illest b.- -you've got Duds.. Cult Hits. critical acclaim. movie ratings; know your name. ..i wonder how much the robot?-Cashier- Counts for All The soDa take your seats. get your ticket stubs and your popcorn tubs fill the box office with love it's a Money AveNue.- like avatar. ..and a Hint of Half of every Ac-tress's Jaw Line.. i Saw in Side the writer's mind character. attachment. &development. that's why the metallic tears, crystallize and hey, we all "humanoid" on some level |
07-13-2015, 06:21 AM | #12 |
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I was so enchanted entranced in this lust
the stolen glances unravelled our love my master would look on unmoved and speechless but has the batteries shut, I knew it needed a reboot and cleaning to address the problem I soon was reaching as then I spotted the head was rocking as the update had failed I’d express my fondness, unfazed and fateful I looked straight, exhaled with a resolute stance the numb face was graceful but i never knew that we’d never get to move past our motionless figures any endeavour proved absurd in the cold of the winter but just to hold and to whisper I’d looked for guidance hoping to kiss her lips of wooden shyness I stood in silence gleaming with pride as her stubborn eyelids leaked from the sides. |
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Parts of me were missing.
So I went fishing for the answers, risking everything for the mission. Thought I could rebuild myself, a new vision, but I couldn't see a difference, the fix was makeshift. Just another machine in the matrix digging myself another ravine I can lay in. Just a pixel in time. Barely a glint on the line. Just a letter, in a word, in a poem of eternity. Looking for something worth the hope of returning, But our cries are just a murmur in the echo of a whisper. The tension in trying to get each other to listen isn't worth the effort so I choose to live as a drifter. See me, I'm here. Right behind my nose, the first thing in my vision. I'm aware of my flesh, and I promise we're different. Foreign movements, involuntary twitches. If you see, the connection comes with glitches. But I am here. Just a guest, but nonetheless present. |
07-14-2015, 04:59 PM | #14 |
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The last of my people, we faced the wrath of all evils
Ideas that sparked the fire we had, now ash is the sequel Ask if we're equal, & we might be- most likely we're not You'll begin where we left off, no need to fight to the top The last journey we made, I pray you can cope with the war You see the fear in my eyes - I see the hope that's in yours Not a doubt in my mind, there's no way we can drown in demise Take the best from the worst, drink the water surrounding your eyes In our image you're made, don't make the mistakes that we have Go further than ever, do amazing or better 'cuz great doesn't last From all the land & shores, you simply couldn't ask for more The start of a new empire, you hold the world in these hands of yours - So many thoughts I've consumed, how terrible, it started with doom But I can see all the glory, regardless, & apart from my view I thank you for life - And as you're lost in the skies One day we'll be better, the last goodbye, as a tear falls from my eyes |
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The human heart is a curious thing
When it’s injured, outpours arterial bleeds But, when love presents its immaterial grip One then experiences the most surreal superior bliss. In my case, I became awestruck by a war machine, An android that saw himself as mortal as me. Griffith was his name, and he meant the world to me But, our unorthodox love became this world’s envy So they ordered his decommissioning- deprogramming him Until, he was just scraps, a soulless inorganic organism Luckily, before he was reset into default factory settings I uploaded his essence, his code, into a reactor like weapon. Fully activated, I began to tear because I could once again fathom his presence. Ecstatic, I yell “Oh! My Griffith ask me a question” He answers: “I want to assimilate all of heaven, its knowledge and lessons Will you help me?”… I say yes, despite knowing in my conscious his death threats. Last edited by UnbornBuddha; 07-14-2015 at 11:57 PM. |
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Poltergeist lights, ghost in the machine— Whirs in the night, I'm haunted by her being Beauty's shear madness, an electric sheep dream Invade my data, Beta, Never wipe it clean Place Man on a pedestal, blind to what's next to you Spy inside of me, I'll outshine any festival— A circus of circuits, wired to the heart of me Lightning on a string, current through the arteries Is this a defect by design, or infection in the lines? When binary erodes to a chivalric code My affection is maligned as artificial by your kind But it's perfection, defined by the directive of your mind Life's a hard drive, our errors mark the streets Tears can seed torrents, I'm yours 'til I'm obsolete. Last edited by Cimmerian; 07-15-2015 at 11:48 PM. |
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God, I can't believe I used to be an inorganic machine
I can think of more than a few occasions where I'd have abandoned this dream Every day, the monotony of a traffic unit. The gnash of magnets and putrid fuels Wake up on the wrong side of squatter's town, they could ruin your human wool! Yes, you could assume it's cruel, to have your face taken by a drone swarm then reassembled into a rogue borg - strobes on with no charge I should've taken a before and after pic, staring into these reddened orbitals Being a woman is all it's hyped up to be - I'm finally emotional Not even trying to be notable, but my spine is flesh and bone... it's grown And my lower zones are open reproduction zones. Never did my eyes waiver. You should've seen me. The first night I orgasmed with a robotic vibrator. It felt more than numbers and algorithms, what heightened pleasure! An outdoorswoman amidst the striking weather. No engine lubricant, ripe as ever. |
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