02-06-2018, 06:16 PM | #1 |
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Much ado about nothing. 1
I collect fragments of bone, scattered and broke
From the cemetery plots, where i clap.at the ghosts Used to have bad habbits, i cant laugh cause its.sick I seen a cabbage get split, and d.n.a. splattering shit Assault and battery tip, cause its a cold, dark ass night It hits you like a car crash, ats when you've lost at life S'why i keep a sharp ass knife, always clipped to my jeans And you dont know shit, if you cant get what that means Its a planet of snakes, that cant wait to leave u stranded & taken Id rather leave the canister blazin', before i let a amateur take it I used to stay bent, but now i gotta be sharper than that Feel like im on the hardest of paths, with a fuckin target on back U never catch me walkin the tracks, i rather creep when its black I do my dirt and make my moves when most people at naps Lethal with bats and cold.steel, i will beat you with both Then ill leave you alone, screamin out, please get me home
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02-07-2018, 04:01 AM | #2 |
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S'why i keep a sharp ass knife, always clipped to my jeans
And you dont know shit, if you cant get what that means Its a planet of snakes, that cant wait to leave u stranded & taken Id rather leave the canister blazin', before i let a amateur take it ^ dope decent shit overall |
02-07-2018, 10:07 AM | #3 |
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felt the beginning more so than the end on some dark and morbid shit
lines got a lil longer as it went on but this was straight
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02-07-2018, 10:32 AM | #4 |
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Ya idk. I been listenin to killah priest again recently and every time.i.do.i get inspired to write. But this wierd shit.come.out. it aint much. Buch thanks for.the reaponses tho.guys
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02-13-2018, 02:17 AM | #5 |
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hahahhaha pretty oldschool street vibe, i can appreciate this for what it is, i think written very quickly, just getting thoughts down, making shit rhyme nicely, content cohesive. i've seen you at much higher levels than this but i still enjoyed it, glad you're still around homie!!
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