01-28-2018, 11:53 PM | #1 |
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WRATH vs. Swerve - SWERVE WINS
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Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER ORC @WRATH @Swerve Last edited by For Battling; 01-29-2018 at 12:06 AM. |
01-29-2018, 11:03 AM | #2 |
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02-01-2018, 08:59 PM | #4 |
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Ya girl pussy is gi-normus, and i dont mean that in the fun way
She got a fat cat, it sleeps too much eats lasagna and hates mondays YOU ain't got the Cohones, dick. Im not one to play Bruh got the kind of ladyparts that woulda made mo'nique accept the 500k You're not apart of the "in" crowd, cut you up to small lil figures.. After this battle u gon be down in the dumps.. left in a ditch and lost in the river On the road to success ur gonna crash, prolly cause u boring us Swerve in the nik of time, and you still wont be a champ at 40+ You dont know how to battle. I'll teach you if its kept off the record You need to learn how to except compliments... THAT you should forget all together |
02-02-2018, 12:20 AM | #5 |
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Greed, Pryde, Wrath? Nah, you lame...I'm dying, that's classic,
Closest you come to cardinal sins is missing your ornithology classes. Wrath works the angles tryna sneak wins, its a fact you're lame son, I work the angles so ballistics can't find the trajectory I spatter your brain from. Getchu where you live, step and only led is what you're tasting, Drive by leave you with more holes in your frame than a termite infestation. We can drop the guns and talk knives if you step to my dojo, I'll stab and leave four handles coming from your skull like the Punisher logo. Swerve known to be mean, put the gun to your head as you scream, Squeeze until you C flames and think you're watching the Calgary NHL team.
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02-02-2018, 09:18 AM | #6 |
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Ya girl pussy is gi-normus, and i dont mean that in the fun way
She got a fat cat, it sleeps too much eats lasagna and hates mondays didn't like how you turned pussy into garfield because people call cats pussy cats this somewhat makes sense but it just comes off lackluster to me. YOU ain't got the Cohones, dick. Im not one to play Bruh got the kind of ladyparts that woulda made mo'nique accept the 500k light You're not apart of the "in" crowd, cut you up to small lil figures.. After this battle u gon be down in the dumps.. left in a ditch and lost in the river ok On the road to success ur gonna crash, prolly cause u boring us Swerve in the nik of time, and you still wont be a champ at 40+ cool You dont know how to battle. I'll teach you if its kept off the record You need to learn how to except compliments... THAT you should forget all together didn't like this vs Greed, Pryde, Wrath? Nah, you lame...I'm dying, that's classic, Closest you come to cardinal sins is missing your ornithology classes. didn't like this.. Wrath works the angles tryna sneak wins, its a fact you're lame son, I work the angles so ballistics can't find the trajectory I spatter your brain from. cool Getchu where you live, step and only led is what you're tasting, Drive by leave you with more holes in your frame than a termite infestation. ok We can drop the guns and talk knives if you step to my dojo, I'll stab and leave four handles coming from your skull like the Punisher logo. didnt like tihs Swerve known to be mean, put the gun to your head as you scream, Squeeze until you C flames and think you're watching the Calgary NHL team. light damn this is close af. based off misses I'm gonna have to go with Swerve. This could go any way though. v/swerve
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02-02-2018, 11:09 AM | #7 |
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Lady parts was the only good line in this whole battle tbh.
Wrath opener was really bad. Nick/nik wp is older than the man himself. Swerve, not feeling this week’s entry. Who takes ornithology classes? Holes in your frame is played af. Also, I’m noticing that every week you have a “logo” bar - this is like three or four straight verses where you drop a logo bar. And you did it twice. Getting pretty stale. Vote — wrath
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02-02-2018, 04:30 PM | #8 |
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Ya girl pussy is gi-normus, and i dont mean that in the fun way She got a fat cat, it sleeps too much eats lasagna and hates mondays Rofl dead this was solid as fuck nice Garfield reference only older heads get it great shit Vvv. H YOU ain't got the Cohones, dick. Im not one to play Bruh got the kind of ladyparts that woulda made mo'nique accept the 500k Like the current reference but i felt the monique netflix cincept could have in a more creative aspect You're not apart of the "in" crowd, cut you up to small lil figures.. After this battle u gon be down in the dumps.. left in a ditch and lost in the river Played down in the dumps is overused On the road to success ur gonna crash, prolly cause u boring us Swerve in the nik of time, and you still wont be a champ at 40+ Cool You dont know how to battle. I'll teach you if its kept off the record You need to learn how to except compliments... THAT you should forget all together Soft flip Swerve Greed, Pryde, Wrath? Nah, you lame...I'm dying, that's classic, Closest you come to cardinal sins is missing your ornithology classes. Didnt like this flip felt it didnt have impact Wrath works the angles tryna sneak wins, its a fact you're lame son, I work the angles so ballistics can't find the trajectory I spatter your brain from. Dope reference Getchu where you live, step and only led is what you're tasting, Drive by leave you with more holes in your frame than a termite infestation. Dope metaphore We can drop the guns and talk knives if you step to my dojo, I'll stab and leave four handles coming from your skull like the Punisher logo. The attempt was cool felt couldve done more with the punisher logo reference Swerve known to be mean, put the gun to your head as you scream, Squeeze until you C flames and think you're watching the Calgary NHL team. Played Feel both were equal in quotes i liked wraths opener i was dying laughing. 40 plus was cool. Swerve had the angles and termites line which landed pretty direct and had impact. So wrath of humor factor comes up u have that but i dont think its enough agaisnt two hard bars. V/Swerve little more consistent |
02-03-2018, 01:11 AM | #9 |
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damn this is pretty close. Wrath that garfield shit was solid.. the nik of time punch was pretty dope. Im not hip to the monique ish n i wasnt feelin the closer but overall decent verse.
swerve.. opener was kinda weak but the work the angles punch was fire. U finished strong with the punisher ish n the flames punch.. prolly edged it for ya. V/ swerve |
02-03-2018, 03:15 AM | #10 |
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Wasnt feeling alot here tbh.
Swerve had better construction w/ some concepts that fell flat, while wrath bad played shit again fat cat was passable but eh ladyparts & ballistics were standouts vote - swerve, slightly better wording |
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I thought Wrath actually had better and more original concepts, but the wording spoiled a lot of it for me. Swerve dropped solid enough to take the win. Vote - Swerve |
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02-03-2018, 08:52 AM | #13 |
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Ya girl pussy is gi-normus, and i dont mean that in the fun way
She got a fat cat, it sleeps too much eats lasagna and hates mondays yea this is a weird one, I’m all for outside of the box concepts but this was worded weird idk YOU ain't got the Cohones, dick. Im not one to play Bruh got the kind of ladyparts that woulda made mo'nique accept the 500k nice I liked it You're not apart of the "in" crowd, cut you up to small lil figures.. After this battle u gon be down in the dumps.. left in a ditch and lost in the river nah this type of stuff is played man On the road to success ur gonna crash, prolly cause u boring us Swerve in the nik of time, and you still wont be a champ at 40+ decent You dont know how to battle. I'll teach you if its kept off the record You need to learn how to except compliments... THAT you should forget all together nah 1 hitter here (Monique), and 1 decent line....gotta work on better execution man cause you definitely have nice concepts but they’re falling short Vs Greed, Pryde, Wrath? Nah, you lame...I'm dying, that's classic, Closest you come to cardinal sins is missing your ornithology classes. pretty corny tbh Wrath works the angles tryna sneak wins, its a fact you're lame son, I work the angles so ballistics can't find the trajectory I spatter your brain from. buh listics? I’m not seeing this bro Getchu where you live, step and only led is what you're tasting, Drive by leave you with more holes in your frame than a termite infestation. alright We can drop the guns and talk knives if you step to my dojo, I'll stab and leave four handles coming from your skull like the Punisher logo. alright again not bad Swerve known to be mean, put the gun to your head as you scream, Squeeze until you C flames and think you're watching the Calgary NHL team. ehh decent imo No hitters from swerve this time around, kind of a letdown tbh coming from a fire verse last week. Although he had no hitters he did have more hits in general and an overall more consistent verse than wrath. Vote Swerve |
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opener was funny, barely hit tho 40+ joint hit cuz of wording down in the dumps played af, ladyparts & closer too simple vs Swerve work the angles was cool holes in ur frame hit same w/ c flames opener & punisher logo were weak conceptwise v/swerve by a bar |
02-03-2018, 01:31 PM | #15 |
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I have WRATH here. The wording was nice to me and appeared a little bit more. Opener was hilarious and I don't expect it. The lady parts line was really good too. Swerve had the holes in your frame and closer which was nice to me. I do think that WRATH had the better quotes and also some of his almost quotes were a bit stronger such as the Nik line. I got WRATH edgong.
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02-04-2018, 09:46 PM | #16 |
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Swerve Wins 7-3
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