07-18-2013, 08:20 PM | #21 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 923
Battle Record: 25-26
Champed - NBL Cypher
Rep Power: 11169469 |
no one wants u on their team, u get dropped quick so no need to quote articles
anyone'd subatomic when ur rep and skill are equal to less then one of those particles text is ya life n it's stressing u out.. u need get this off ya chest nerd it resembled a high school massacre the way u freaked out when u couldn't handle lecture vs i don't need guns to kill 'em. no1's scared if he says he's got a matic, & my death plan foreshank? will show i've CLEARLY got a leg up on this faggot. . . For a pinkslip battle i thought this was weak tbh, ive seen shank dropped better and well ive not seen much from atomic neways, felt most of atomic's line were just either too simple for my liking or just played out e.g the artifact line, he did have an ok foreshank flip tho. So down to quotes i got shank 2 against atomic 1, shank wins |
07-18-2013, 11:13 PM | #22 |
The COAT...
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: BC, Canada
Posts: 1,724
Battle Record: 28-20
Champed - Art of Writing League (x3)
Rep Power: 4595810 |
when i get up n at em'..it's a chick slobbin between the sheets like a slut
faggot when u say get up n at em' it's cause u want a dude deep in ur guts -woulda been doper if the first half of the second line was worded differently then the first line to relate better to the punch you were goin for, but was still decent the way it was no one wants u on their team, u get dropped quick so no need to quote articles anyone'd subatomic when ur rep and skill are equal to less then one of those particles -liked the concept here and it flowed nicely, but the punch was a bit wordy for me i rep chains n black to rob a lame or leave bodies in a fkn ditch u wear chains n black to go w/ that faggot ass hair style and cut ur wrists -lol! nice emo fag. ur the lamest nerd to try text, i hope u die next n choke on dicks the only way this battle could get any more pathetic is if u were aloud to vote on it -allowed* for shame. this worked for me, not bad text is ya life n it's stressing u out.. u need get this off ya chest nerd it resembled a high school massacre the way u freaked out when u couldn't handle lecture -sounds like he battled lecture in the past and didn't do well? if thats the case not a bad finish, pretty consistent verse, not really any huge weak point. seriously he's constantly raging, i swear this dyke is irate, so please take a deep breath, as i hold the CYANIDE TO UR FACE. -unless i was missin some wordplay on the cyanide, wasnt really feelin this he's got the ego of a god, but please just know you suck, i swear kid thinks his Artifact, but honestly it's all just old as fuck. -didnt feel it seriously ull be a virgin for life.. this stuff is depressin, ur bars are JUST like ur love life, no set up OR fuckin connection. -not too shabby, i liked it i don't need guns to kill 'em. no1's scared if he says he's got a matic, & my death plan foreshank? will show i've CLEARLY got a leg up on this faggot. -kinda liked, 3.5/5 ur bars? all fuckin played ur dads pissed he had a son so gay. the man can't contain himself, & is depressed @ what the broke RubberMaid -nice closer, probs my fav line from your verse Felt Atomic had 2 or 3 bars I was feeling and about the same, if not more lines that I wasn't really feeling. Shanks 'cut your wrist' line was the most memorable to me he had some other decent lines and not a lot of big misses. Feel he took the battle with a more consistent verse. +1 Shank
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07-18-2013, 11:23 PM | #23 |
official hypedaddy.
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saddest voting ever
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