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04-14-2014, 02:28 PM
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Hip-Hop Audio Freestyle: Psilocybin
The beat is something from
Portishead. It's creepy :) https://soundcloud.com/thedirtyserpe...sday-afternoon
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04-14-2014, 04:23 PM
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Chillin' like FUCK!!!
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I'll return with feedback when I get home from work.
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04-15-2014, 08:11 AM
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Sounds like you mumblin' jibberish while constipated tbh.Not tryna be a cunt but shit wasn't my thing...and that intro is too long.
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04-15-2014, 11:32 AM
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Chillin' like FUCK!!!
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were you on shrooms?
you need to go back and WRITE to that beat, that beat is too sick. i couldn't make out some of the words due to the vocals being way in the red. i don't know what else to say
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04-17-2014, 04:15 PM
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iono bout this
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