WK 9: Exis 1-1 vs. Killing Spree 1-3 - Killing Spree WINS!!

[Incredible]

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@Exis @Killing Spree

[Kill Spree]

Check... going 12

[Exis]

Check, I fucks with 12 fam.

[Exis]

Ayo,

I'm better than pupils educated by masters usin' peripheral vision
Fuck the usual system, my only mission's to whip bitches in2 line via who isn't lyrically gifted
I'm the mystical prince, you ain't original nigga like every print be distinct
Any foot you have placed upon Earth is considered as weak, & all the feats you is claimin'
Is nothin' compared to both of my feets kickin' out frickin' wayward
'Til you is missin' your teeth
Couldn't touch where Midas be with it if you were to increase your reach
Shouldn't fuck with a mind supreme like mine if you wanna succeed here Spree
Rag away mole...go & bleed a bit
Run & get trapped where some rat got killed for cheddah keepin' on some cheesy shit
Didn't your fucked up mother done teach you right? You needs to keep the whites separate
Some colors don't mix in this washed up cycle of rap, the Netcees police will find evidence.

[Kill Spree]

Originally Posted by Exis

Twista - I Ain't Wired Right...

Listen Faggit
Wrap ur neck W/Cable till ur face shown in pout
U aint wired for PureFlex But U'll Seizure from one as I choke U Out!
U new to this, wen a punch Nox? it drop a joke
U aint Sicc but The more I expose ur a Bitch of a dude @Amen Might Block Ur Posts
Deliver punches to this snitches face, 9'll Force death
U prolly aint a Fed Ex! But I'll Drop U off @ur Door step
& Ur wife? I Fuk'er hard where this lame lay
Now ur Ex a Bish An all it took was Simple Game Play
pull the burner to ur buiscuit, U got that dead look
ironic U rep CHef on ur hat, Cos this is how U get Ur head cooked

[DynamiCz]

I'm better than pupils educated by masters usin' peripheral vision
Fuck the usual system, my only mission's to whip bitches in2 line via who isn't lyrically gifted

Nice rhyme scheme, just not a battle verse type opener to go with so this didn't hit

I'm the mystical prince, you ain't original nigga like every print be distinct
Any foot you have placed upon Earth is considered as weak, & all the feats you is claimin'

Didn't get this one cause you jumped off flow on the ending bar

Is nothin' compared to both of my feets kickin' out frickin' wayward
'Til you is missin' your teeth
Couldn't touch where Midas be with it if you were to increase your reach

Light, but ok

Shouldn't fuck with a mind supreme like mine if you wanna succeed here Spree
Rag away mole...go & bleed a bit
Run & get trapped where some rat got killed for cheddah keepin' on some cheesy shit

Shorten the bars down bro, cheese lines played, but this was still decent tho

Didn't your fucked up mother done teach you right? You needs to keep the whites separate
Some colors don't mix in this washed up cycle of rap, the Netcees police will find evidence.

I didn't quite get this one, again shorten the bars up a little bit

Overall, you had a decent verse more on the key style side, have to tune it up where its brings more aggression against your opponent. More direct and shorten the bars up a little bit homie.

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Listen Faggit

Wrap ur neck W/Cable till ur face shown in pout
U aint wired for PureFlex But U'll Seizure from one as I choke U Out!

Lol nice opener

U new to this, wen a punch Nox? it drop a joke
U aint Sicc but The more I expose ur a Bitch of a dude @Amen Might Block Ur Posts

Lol funny

Deliver punches to this snitches face, 9'll Force death
U prolly aint a Fed Ex! But I'll Drop U off @ur Door step

Fiya!!!!

& Ur wife? I Fuk'er hard where this lame lay
Now ur Ex a Bish An all it took was Simple Game Play

Decent

pull the burner to ur buiscuit, U got that dead look
ironic U rep CHef on ur hat, Cos this is how U get Ur head cooked


Lmao yoooo, good closer!



Nice verse here! Lol I don't think I need to explain much on your verse. I liked it overall. That Fedex line was dope. Props!


V-Spree, Props to both tho!

[DMS]

Exis had allot of bars that seemed like a verse from a TheSaurus album but less good
Just looking at the number of battle ‘tropes’ and technical stuff, Killing Spree got it for sure
Spree also had some sweet nameplay
V- Spree

[Bongo Bear]

Originally Posted by Exis

Ayo,

I'm better than pupils educated by masters usin' peripheral vision
Fuck the usual system, my only mission's to whip bitches in2 line via who isn't lyrically gifted

Nice candence and all but, not too directed at the opponent.

I'm the mystical prince, you ain't original nigga like every print be distinct
Any foot you have placed upon Earth is considered as weak, & all the feats you is claimin'

This is pretty ok.

Is nothin' compared to both of my feets kickin' out frickin' wayward
'Til you is missin' your teeth
Couldn't touch where Midas be with it if you were to increase your reach

Wasn't feeling this too much.

Shouldn't fuck with a mind supreme like mine if you wanna succeed here Spree
Rag away mole...go & bleed a bit
Run & get trapped where some rat got killed for cheddah keepin' on some cheesy shit''

Light.

Didn't your fucked up mother done teach you right? You needs to keep the whites separate
Some colors don't mix in this washed up cycle of rap, the Netcees police will find evidence.

Nah.

Originally Posted by Killing Spree

Listen Faggit
Wrap ur neck W/Cable till ur face shown in pout
U aint wired for PureFlex But U'll Seizure from one as I choke U Out!

Ok. Wasn't too crazy.

U new to this, wen a punch Nox? it drop a joke
U aint Sicc but The more I expose ur a Bitch of a dude @Amen Might Block Ur Posts

I don't get the personal. I think this was decent though without context.

Deliver punches to this snitches face, 9'll Force death
U prolly aint a Fed Ex! But I'll Drop U off @ur Door step

Pretty nice.

& Ur wife? I Fuk'er hard where this lame lay
Now ur Ex a Bish An all it took was Simple Game Play

Light for me.

pull the burner to ur buiscuit, U got that dead look
ironic U rep CHef on ur hat, Cos this is how U get Ur head cooked

Good punch.

Exis was good rhyme wise, but alot of it was pretty simple or undirected in the context of a battle. Killing Spree just had more direct punches. It was a very decent battle though. V/Spree

[Twodrop]

Exis had his closer, a lot of them were close to hits for me. He's just working on forming his bars into punches... I see improvement. Closer was the best for me... Ur schemes in the first few bars were cool, u just ended them a little weird. Try to think of ur punch, and build backwards.

First 3 from KS were nice, standouts being fedex, and the opener.

He got this comfortably imo..

v/ KS

[BodySnatcher]

As far as a written piece Exis has this but since its a battle I gotta give it to KS. His FedEx was the battle standout IMO. Keep at it Ex, I know its a transformation from your normality but you'll get the hang of it