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Old 01-19-2013, 10:56 PM   #1
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You call yourself the best? I Call that a Fallacy,
my pistol sounds like a dog Barking Angrily, Discharging Rapidly,
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I throw MCs aside like Tossing Wrappers, compared to me you’re just a Comic Actor…
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Old 01-19-2013, 11:06 PM   #2
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Nasty shit zygote. Welcome, good to see you here man

Ill verse, corner competition was fire, not a factor atomic rapture segment was nasty as hell. Jobless line slayed me. And the frankenstein shit was lolz/raw like to.

Ill way to open up this thread. Thanks fam

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Old 01-19-2013, 11:10 PM   #3
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Wow, that was dope!

Invincible with Lyricals, I’m a sick Criminal that drinks Chemicals,
Rip you in the Physical, flip Individuals like Reciprocals,
my knife sharper than the Visuals for high Definitional Digital…
My unpredictable Compositionals are impossible to Classify,
Rapid Rhyme Samurai, I break you down like tryna Factorize when Math Applied,

^^^Your whole piece was incredible, but these were probably my most favorite of the entire verse.
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Old 01-19-2013, 11:15 PM   #4
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Fuuuck. Great first drop.

You’re gonna get this work – look at how the Jobless Gather,

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I like that line a lot, but it felt forced. I be nit pickin though. .

Lexicon here brought out the feeling of brutality here perfectly.
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Old 01-19-2013, 11:44 PM   #5
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Illy shit zy, velociraptor line made me smile where the teeth show.. Awesome:) way to lay it down.
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Pinpoint position like Diagnostic Scanners identifying Chronic Cancer,
Catching motherfuckers out like Polygraphers,
Who’s the best at Dropping Chapters?
You? What an Idiotic Answer, What a Slander, you are Not a Factor,
Microscopic Stature - a speck of Cosmic Matter against Atomic Rapture,
Velociraptor Doppelganger you get your Oblongata Splattered,
Psychotic Battler with Bottled Anger, Top Commander,
Watch your Manners or get your Collar Fractured,
You’re gonna get this work – look at how the Jobless Gather,
I throw MCs aside like Tossing Wrappers, compared to me you’re just a Comic Actor…

^Best section.

Half your Lines Antagonize the other half are Standard Lies…
Amplify the Voltage Effect, stick Bolts in your Neck that look like Frankenstein Awoke from the Dead,
^GREAT scheme/flow.

You know what you're doing. On the same level as your other swag and flow or battle pieces. Just top notch technical ability.
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Rapid Rhyme Samurai, I break you down like tryna Factorize when Math Applied,
Half your Lines Antagonize the other half are Standard Lies…
Amplify the Voltage Effect, stick Bolts in your Neck that look like Frankenstein Awoke from the Dead,

That flow was perfect for me... I would have said "when Matt's applied" and "are the standard lies" the it would have read perfect. Awesome stuff Zygote. I like how eclectic your metaphors are especially
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Rapid Rhyme Samurai, I break you down like tryna Factorize when Math Applied,
Half your Lines Antagonize the other half are Standard Lies…
Amplify the Voltage Effect, stick Bolts in your Neck that look like Frankenstein Awoke from the Dead,

That flow was perfect for me... I would have said "when Matt's applied" and "are the standard lies" the it would have read perfect. Awesome stuff Zygote. I like how eclectic your metaphors are especially
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Old 04-15-2013, 03:19 PM   #9
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super sick. the punches are straight killin em. very much enjoy these. ive read every single one ever. they are all dope. this had too many quotables so not even gonna try. awesome
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Da god. Where ru zyg
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It's really fun to rap this one. But Geno, newsflash it's not 2013 anymore.
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Ik. Upped some old ahit just because i felt like it. Been diggin in the nc crates alot. Idk. Its nostalgic. Anyway. Ya. Wow @ 2013
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This was a dope read, Zygote. Held good rapping stature, with good multi-syllabic rhymes and rhyme schemes. Most of the lines hold your attention, and it's good to a nice degree. Nice one with this drop, had a lot going for you. Nice. Keep writing!
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way too much filler for a battle verse..
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Frankenstein was the creator though...
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My Battle Raps Mangle Cats like a swinging Battle Axe
You call that a verse? I call it chippin Bubble Wraps N ripping Double Chops
My pee dropping sounds like having a talk with Mommy Trouble Cops
The slyest Fox behind daddy's massive Stacks Frying Jacks
I congregate with possessed dolls eating poison mixed with Ivy Cracks
Watch the Fire Burn when the Sire Come
Giving you anything you want making you feel Right at Home,
Where the Titans Roam,
A Giant Gnome Confined in Foam trying to Inscribe a Poem
I strike you in the head with Lightning Bolts throwing bombs like a Fighting Drone
I'm a reptillian simian increasing degrees to a billion; Zygote Clone
Against me all type of Life is Prone, stabbing at Gideons On with a Knife or Bone
Andromeda Major Mentalist Berater, Blazing at a Hater
Be an Instigator End up Wrecked in Crater
with broken a Neck, Respirator, tazered Next to an Alien Ventilator
When the button's pressed to Make the Paper I take you up without a bet like an Elevator,
Sacred Humiliater, Forsaken Communicater above the rest like Training Decapitator
The Celtic Bro Sent, Krow Bent Medic who Owes Rent,
You couldn't Shake the Torment, I take everything you got in one Epic Moment
Rap 1 Coming Soon
Before the end of June
I'll bury you in a Tomb, then have spirits haunt your Room
I'll crash your wedding if you're the Groom
You're Nothing but a Disgusting Ghoul
Now who acts the Fool?
All I Do is spit the Truth
Take-over the Booth, give your lady a Make-Over to boot!
Like big baby said I'm a White Devil
Worshippers Might Revel, unless they're unSettled
I'll get the pot!, you get the Tea Kettle
In my Dreams you Meddle
Doesn't Mean you win a Medal
You're softer than a flower Petal
Don't make me Sentimental,
I was Sent-to-End-you
All I Do is entertain you
Adverbs - I must Explain to you
These Wiccan spells are a Pain for you
I think you've been writing Insanely dude
Ever since This 1
If I Had to Pick one, I Grab the Stick- you run.
I'm just Having Fun, selling and trading one of my Many Guns, telling you lately i've been telling you the Ending Son.
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You're far from a Wiccan
Brolly a disgusting Puerto Rican
Trynna square off with a legendary Heathen
Emcees end up Beaten, By a sudden beast, Eaten
Brains leaking down creaking, I'm Freaking
Channeling thoughts till you internally Weaken
Leave you verbally striken
With that not mentally Written
You're not a lion king with linen
You're just a special little Kitten
Not yet fitting, So I keep on power Lifting
Your ass like a cross without an hour Shifting
I'm prolific, into the mythic analytic linguistics
Striving for more than Prohibited Statistics
You guys be the Artistic, I'm trynna pass crack through the Biscuit
Making a dark Living on the side Scripting or Scribbling
God Dribbling made me a Sibling that's Unforgiving
It's in my nature to want to berate or train a Hater
Mister Decapitator, The actual account Fabricator
Hiding drugs in a Respirator, The local thug Annihilator driving a knife through the Savior
Greeting an Alien in a Crater thinking Elohim's Greater than Dearly Major
Confusing this for an Avenger
I'm the rage of October close to November
Making you see the bloody December
Watch a team thoroughly Dismember
An Air Bender, blazing to Ember
Measured in gale with a flaming Temper
Flowing aids and Leprosy Mentor
Striking your epi Center
I'm there right before the Memory Enter
Glowing Leper, corroding flesh exploding mesh Unworthy Letter
I'm hidden under YouTube beats writing before Duppy Sellers
I take pleasure and delight listening to these Helen Kellers
Their criticism is back like Early Settlers
You against me is like a chicken versingone of those 200 lb Modern Wrestlers,
Nothing Pelters, With more steal than Fuckin Welders,
But back to rap talk I'm a giant here to Devour
All I do is betray for Power
Gain then Shower agent not caring about Shady Honor
Slay a Coward trynna Play the Forward like a reigning Connor
Battle type amigo without a bard like David a Donor
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Death for my alien haters. Especially traitors.
I'm ahead of you, no fingerprint detectable.
Emcees I find delectable.
Let zygote add the decimal.
I don't even need to put myself on a pedestal.
Lecture you, describe the types of death to you.
Inspecting you, make it seem that I'm a threat to you.
I'm TOO SHIFTY YOU better MOVE QUICKLY.
Responding sickly, granting whatever your wish be.
I know I'm acting pithy. I know you're coming with me-
to freestyle land. Shake and squeeze your hand.
Your rebuttal was fairly bland
&very sad.
Meanwhile, I'm a merry lad who will outrhyme you- very fast.
Cherish what we had. Another month I think our thread was fairly bad.
Take out an-add for you writing, call it free ghostwrites which were barely a fad.
Nary. A tad. You try to scare my like an overbearing Dad.
Won't work, you jerk.. I cannot be murked.
This isn't my first, it won't be the last.
I said-earlier that you're slow and I'm fast.
I'm the only one that passed
you on the Auto-bon highway, on Friday.
We're going to do things my way.
Your alien ventilator will be unplugged, that's what I say.
Choking the life of the host is likelay/
I'm already there. &you just might be.
I'm not the one in trouble, living trifely.
Just 'tryin ta find wifey, and get this dough for the life of me.
You're rebuttal only means you like me, but wanna fight me.
PSYCH,G. Aside from being unsightly, you can't write nicely
OR nightly. Bight me.
I kid. Describe the plight of me.
Grab a heavy stake for my heart and keep the light off me.
(This was Kind-of-clean)
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