Corleone VS Sharp

[corleone]

quick keystyle..

Yo..

sharp dull in his head.. don't know why he grippin the mic for,
I'm the sharpest tool in the shed.. he more like a blown light bulb/
tight flows crush his equilibrium quick,
.. and cause his brains to come out, I'll watch his whole cranium split/
who G'd up this bitch? he soft.. never wanted to war/
I'll clap at him, standing.. just to give him a round of applause/
I'll strangle his throat, and cut through his vocal cords,
and handle the pump, and dump off at his squad/
this nigga sharp pussie, he don't want it with cor..
like doing sit ups on the park floor, his stomach'll sore/
he feel it in his gut, he nervous.. call it the butterfly effect/
I'll punch sharp in his face and watch his eyes eject/
I despise this bitch.. sharp cruising for a bruising,
he getting loose, but the truth lies in his music/
this dudes a e thug, a netcee who's unproven,
his whole album was straight text, no acoustics/
.. I'm all over P.A, and I still never heard of this dude,
and stay "sharp" infront of bitches, like a gentleman do/ (lol)
I'll level this fool.. he's unworthy, and stuck on his name/
but couldn't of been sharp with a book stuck to his brain..
I'll brake up his frame.. kill em', send em' right to a grave,
dig his remains and fuck his corpse all day/
sharps' gone gay.. he's running from the eye of the public,-
rhyming in shame and hiding behind lies he's published/
they say don't make an ass outta yaself, by assumption,
looks like sharp isn't as sharp as some would presumption/
.. he's buggin, this dude making up stories,
and the screen showing me sharp creating it for me/(as in, sharp tv screen/his name.. lol)
.. sharps tripping, he isn't as hype now,
son piped down,
I doubt his bitch ass even knows how a mic sounds/(netcee.. lol)
let's fight now.. me and you, wherever you at,
and I'll set your ass straight like the spine in your back..
who tally his battles? I bet he never faced none like me,
leave him shaking in his chair, like Muhammad Ali/
.. truest indeed, I will ruin your dreams,
put two in your spleen, and leave you to chew through your sleeves/
.. I'm evil, another dubious scene,
to slew through his team,
with bruised wrists, puking his genes/
I'll eat you.. I'll carve sharps' prudence to meat,
and use it for beef, sharps' a nutrient treat/
.. Illegal, another lucrative scheme,
to spew into green,
no telling what I'd do for this cream/
.. based off what do I see?,
regarding sharps' user title,
and his perception of me?.
.. sharps' bitch made, my switch blade sharper then what hes nick named,
I spit aids, inflict pain, daumer his whole spit game/
.. a sick "shade", I'll grip "sharp" and "mark" up his whole ribcage/
and risk fade, my pen ink shoot up his whole bitch page..
.. sharp winning? that's a definite negative,
sharp ain't built for the line, like markers to penmanship..

[Sharp]

THERE ONCE WAS A FAGGIT NAME FRANKIE
LIED SO MUCH HE WAS THOUGHT TO BE PRANK-Y
HE SAID 'BUT GUYS, I WAS WU!
PLEASE JOIN MY SITE AND MY CREW!'
AND WAS MET WITH A RESOUNDING 'NO THANK YE'


BODYBAG

[corleone]

^^^ checkmate.. fix my battle record, faggott.. that makes me 2-0 on this site but ill settle for 1-1 to move around your jealousy and hate for the meantime.. Im just that mature of a man.. suck a dick for lying tho lol

[Sharp]

So mature. Wow.

You don't win because you say you win dipshit. It's gotta go to votes

As of now, you're 0-1 vs me as per rules of a battle league you signed up for.

[corleone]

Originally Posted by Sharp

So mature. Wow.

You don't win because you say you win dipshit. It's gotta go to votes

As of now, you're 0-1 vs me as per rules of a battle league you signed up for.

dipshit? lmfao.. sharp, you aint built like that so chill with the gangster remarks.. another thing, who would vote for that pathetic verse of yours? lmfaoooooo.. and dont forget why I lost per rules, you started that whole shit and began running your mouth, and all I did was defend myself.. while you and your faggott buddies deliberately set all that shit up so I could lose.. now Im not saying I fell for your bullshit shit talking strategy but I just had to let you and your little butt buddies know what time it is.. because shit aint sweet over here my dude.. just know that.. 100!

[Hush]

Vote sharp

[Adverse]

Cor you can really tell you've been writing for 20 years bro! Because most of your concepts straight out of 1995

[corleone]

... lmfao

[corleone]

Adverse.. I started writing rhymes in 1991. That's almost 30 years consistently that I've been writing rhymes.

[Sharp]

Originally Posted by Corleone

dipshit? lmfao.. sharp, you aint built like that so chill with the gangster remarks.. another thing, who would vote for that pathetic verse of yours? lmfaoooooo.. and dont forget why I lost per rules, you started that whole shit and began running your mouth, and all I did was defend myself.. while you and your faggott buddies deliberately set all that shit up so I could lose.. now Im not saying I fell for your bullshit shit talking strategy but I just had to let you and your little butt buddies know what time it is.. because shit aint sweet over here my dude.. just know that.. 100!

This petty shit combined with your inability to take criticism is why you'll never have a regular battle on this site. You're a joke.

[corleone]

Originally Posted by Sharp

This petty shit combined with your inability to take criticism is why you'll never have a regular battle on this site. You're a joke.

Your reverse psychology is what deprives you from victory.

[Sharp]

I don't think you understand what reverse psychology is

[corleone]

first to 10 votes win..

[Sharp]

bro we haven't had 10 votes in this forum in the last year

oughtta just forfeit now

[the Munster]

If this a real battle then I vote for corleone since he actually tried

[corleone]

1-0 me.. Im iffy about @Hush vote for sharp.. maybe someone can help me understand it, lmfao.. well, I say that because me and @Hush been at it lately in the discussion forums and I gotta sicc sense for bullshit.. I dunno.. count if want @Sharp but I just know bullshit when I see bullshit.. so in retrospective, that would make us 1-1.. keep up the great work.. lmfaooo

[Sharp]

Originally Posted by the Munster

If this a real battle then I vote for corleone since he actually tried

my guy I spent a solid minute on that 'no thank ye' finisher

[corleone]

here's my two votes for the BA section with links.. to follow up with site rules and regulations..

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=143777
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.ph...161#post782161

[Sharp]

okay, it's two votes per battle you have open, not two in general

[Blue Bayou]

Good read on both sides but I've def got Corleone with the overpowering verse here and superior concepts

Props to both