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Old 09-05-2020, 09:40 PM   #1
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Chasing beers with urgency
cus beverages leverage my sense of fear,
waited years to ferment, see-
I sever better vets with cheaper care.
This' my place to seek and steer,
mental weaker peers can meet me there, I'll feed em well,
food for thought is that my brain got sleeper cells.
ding ding, that's the winners bell
when I release each ring of Hell,
I've tamed my demons well!
Claws so raw each page scratch brain stems n slam "quit" at ya,
but you'll leave inspired and content with a nurtured amygdala.
Scripture perfect shift to bitter murder spliffs,
leave quitter nerds n shit with sicker, rougher hits
while you're just twitter over disc

You might think I'm arrogant, and will strongly disagree,
but why would I take YOUR time if I didn't believe in ME?
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Old 09-06-2020, 12:02 AM   #2
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sleeper cells / tamed my demons well, was great

ferment/beer line at the beginning as well

call em out!!!
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