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Old 08-19-2017, 11:45 PM   #1
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I'm the best, now go load yah clips and start writin yah verses
I'm overkill on sight, I'm even snipin the hearses
a method actor with drama,I just might rehearse it
give you 1 round and make off with the cash, remind you of the 90's Tyson purses
you about that lights and cameras, I'm about that stainless slide action
side swiping yah wind pipe with that serrated side jagged
I'm crazy fly, dodging a stray in my flight jacket
while giving a high five to the sky captain, I'm lampin
I coordinate eything down to the clothes and the bullets you faggots
rocking an overcoat with rocks and bands matching them Full Metal Jackets
those too concerned with discernment get burned quick
that's why I shoot 1st and inquire after
End of Days lies behind these bars, this the final chapter
told my bitch to put Revelation on my books, never mind asking
why no man knoweth the day nor the hour, cept for me, that shit is time captioned
you are who your girl tells me that I'm better than
you should let her b, exchanged vowels but she chose me, you should just letter man
I's Barry Seal on that bitches strip, places you'll never land
a Harry situation you shouldn't hinder son, cuz with the cannon I'm Mega Man
trouble's upon yah, I'll ride up on yah, grey poupon ya
puttin up numbers with the 'phors, triple double entendres
you should all learn not to meddle with the monsta
I'm Twisted medal mixed with Contra but this is not a game my nigga..
gotta relate shit to movies for you to get the picture, damn
9/11 was an inside job cause of the Demolition Man,
while you niggas in the disc bitch and gossip drinkin gin and tonic
I was gettin permits for dig projects and burners with big optics
fuck punches, my rhyme books full of eye jammies nigga stop it
I got killas in the projects who'll hit you while I'm chillin in the tropics
them ties still strong, one word from me, some henny and some chronic
all you see is the glove with the 40, that's Gary and Kemp wit the sonics
I talk murder, these days gettin you shot is clever
I approve hits in code while shoppin for crocs and leathers
my nigga calls and pops off, screamin "I wanna take his top off"
I'm at the dealership like, "the rag's cool, but the drop top is better"
typa nigga to wave back whenever he see the crime wave
I do shit the con way
you'll catch a shell in yah face for talkin out the side of yah mouth like Conway
not to mention, the damage that the nato round made
they gone be yellow tapin yah chest like Soundwave
plus the swags on some shit, call me Kanye Bellafonte
my heartbeat was produced by Premo, featuring Phonte
gotta go, yah blood cuzzin comin through to fuck me under the mistletoe
after we're done we'll summon you to come clean up the menstrual show
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Old 08-20-2017, 07:42 AM   #2
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Triple double entendres lotb
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Old 08-20-2017, 11:13 AM   #3
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Old 08-20-2017, 11:10 PM   #4
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Old 08-25-2017, 07:53 AM   #5
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yeah this is low key fire, didnt even see this dropped

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Old 08-25-2017, 11:49 PM   #6
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word good looks on the feed
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Old 09-10-2017, 04:31 AM   #7
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Ehh i was feeling some of ghis dont know kinda lead nowhere good structure though...
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Old 12-21-2017, 10:56 AM   #8
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This shit was fuego af. A lot of quotables.
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Old 12-21-2017, 11:41 AM   #9
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This was slick. Bar three lines around the final chapter bit which messed the flow up for me but everything before an after was an had some bad ass entrendres not including that actual line which was class
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Old 12-21-2017, 04:13 PM   #10
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Liked this. Some slick shit throughout.
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Old 12-26-2017, 01:32 PM   #11
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This was slick as fuck. Liked the whole swag behind the verse. Thought you could have had some double entendres there but this was a dime. Flowed perfect with matching syllables and you were successful in creating a whole “braggadocio” atmosphere.
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