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Old 01-10-2019, 09:19 PM   #1
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Old 01-11-2019, 04:56 AM   #2
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Aint no sunshine when shes gone
cause dark don't belong to dawn
and monsters only fork with horns
and those forking monsters
find themselves strung along
a path
that test patience and wrath
rays make me race to the back
im just fading in black facing the facts
her taste is the past creative creations
will last without a face or a mask
a heart ripped in two is hard to glue
a heart dipped in gold is still silver stone
its not the organ but the zone the floor is cold
feminine forms strung along martian moons
nitpick the lost parts of you far too soon
lost art of synchronized dark matter article
pussy pink sized sat down to think
and became hypnotized by the notion
i find pleasure in someone else
walk into the sun
don't melt
hit em below the belt
mocha sip flip a poker chip lifes a bitch
watch her stroke her shit hold a clip
open off the motions of the overlord
under paid over board over bored under paid
okinawawa poster boards promote my cause
seething in nature her clothes are off and its been a while
since you been on a date brah ... her name is destiny
leprosy got her bad so disfiguring futures fornicate
a warm entity her thoughts soothe me
torn beauty
indefinitely lost in the present tense of yours truly..



orange skies and turquoise seas
a tortoise tells a tale of birds and bees
im sorta high with the herbal leaves
a shadow of her former self helping me
serpent up the tree ace up his sleeve...

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Old 01-12-2019, 11:53 AM   #3
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Damn son, already? Wise move, I'll try and post by tomorrow at the latest for you. Good shit
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Old 01-18-2019, 11:02 PM   #4
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This just dawned on me. I'll write tonight though. Just gotta run and buy a new phone
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