01-29-2020, 10:21 AM | #21 |
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Yooo but shouts to @Aero for picking up on that F a G/effigy wordplay. I lost fair and square needed to convey that bar better, if anyone has any tips on how to do so lemms know, I'm still a student to this shit
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01-29-2020, 10:22 AM | #22 | |
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01-29-2020, 10:51 AM | #23 | |
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01-29-2020, 10:56 AM | #24 |
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@Adverse
You're predictable as a hot summer, "I'll spray this glock, bustin' at your ribs!" Predictable as a hot summer? Lol that made zero sense then to follow it up with a silly set up wasn't too good. So work on cleaning that up. But only time they see you as 'F, a G' is when they're erecting a statue for the greatest cocksucker that's ever lived The punch is actually not worded badly it's just way too many syllables. Should try to keep your punchlines to no more than 20 syllables this is 32... Buuuut if you're going to do more than 20 syllables for the punchline make sure the set up flows with multis You're gangster? Dead the shit, I'm not the one you'll get credit with I'll only say F, a G if they erect statues for the greatest cocksucker to ever live
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01-29-2020, 11:18 AM | #25 | |
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01-29-2020, 03:41 PM | #26 |
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I think yall should shorten the due date.. shits to long for 1 bar.. 3 days max
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01-29-2020, 03:52 PM | #27 | |
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01-29-2020, 04:04 PM | #28 |
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01-29-2020, 04:31 PM | #29 |
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Bush baked beans recipe lmao
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01-29-2020, 07:11 PM | #30 |
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Lmfaaaaao
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