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05-06-2018, 11:51 AM
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Hungry
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Heist Season
My only obligation is mopping up C.R.E.A.M, two sides of me, I do evil deeds with the mindset of my opposite being.
I organized the plot and the scheme, my plans never go downhill.. only downstream when cops start surrounding the scene. You could call us a team, we share the same mindsets, conquer the opposition who try to stop us from robbing the green. 100% success rate, this is the difference between man and machine. The man of your scariest dreams, the other two are wiser but barely seen. Darren Mitchell, exmilitary with legs replaced by steel... A depersonalization tainted brain mistaken for what’s fake and real. Insane but there’s still traces of his original skill. Overthrow and kill, control and steal. Cause if he doesn’t murder you, then the split in his persona will. Or we could Talk about Hundy, An expert in casino robberies and black magic. A wanted man, radio stations alert for his presence between the static. Heartbeats Repeating, frantic. |
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05-07-2018, 11:21 AM
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No clue what this was about, but I dug it. It read randomly, but the imagery and overall imagination poured into this made it a captivating read. Keep this story going. You got something here.
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05-07-2018, 01:26 PM
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Thx. It was a verse to a collab track that fell through |
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05-07-2018, 05:03 PM
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“My only obligation is mopping up cream”
Gayest line of 2018. This sounds like you’re decribing what it’s like to do a heist on gta Last edited by Mediocrity; 05-07-2018 at 05:07 PM. |
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05-07-2018, 06:24 PM
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Hungry
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05-07-2018, 06:25 PM
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Hungry
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You will never be a better writer then me |
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05-07-2018, 06:37 PM
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I’m the true King Author, crowned or not
what I release is X caliber, it’s bound to rock |
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05-11-2018, 09:18 PM
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Hungry
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Bump
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05-12-2018, 04:39 AM
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Lol...
This was nice fam...like SELF said the imagery was what really drew me into the piece...@ times I don't really get the flow of your shit, I probably just read things wrong... but whatev's this seemed a lot smoother idk lol... Liked it, stay upright. |
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05-12-2018, 09:56 AM
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This was dope. Nice little flex type post. Thats how it feels anyway. Just some shit for fun. Diggin the loco content.
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05-12-2018, 09:04 PM
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Hungry
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Thx man |
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05-12-2018, 09:04 PM
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Hungry
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Thankss |
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05-15-2018, 12:27 PM
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I can dig it.
Paints a picture of the tale your spinning. I liked it alot,fam |
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06-05-2018, 08:10 PM
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Hungry
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Thank you bro |
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