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Old 07-21-2018, 12:42 AM   #1
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03 circa, bear witness to an OG merkin
holding court at bodegas where bottles of OE's purchased
drag a lucy, swig the paper bag while police lurkin
eyes pealed, just incase some old foes resurfaced
discuss the hoods latest news my man Gold, he hurtin
facing 2-5 for a jux in Corona and I know he nervous
this was back b4 readin on John Titor, I was readin Don Diva
latenights on the crates blasting Mobb through the speakers
the 4th was lastweek, and niggas still lighting bottle rockets
got me grippin up noid as fuck, wishin they would stop it
that piece of shit was cheap as hell, but it'll still bless you
Raven Arms MP.25 for Saturday Nights when niggas feelin Special
navy blue NY fitted with the Grant Hill Filas
I was a pretty young fly nigga that the bitches couldn't deny
other niggas dimes got lured off the allure
my name rang, plus I moved with soldiers who don't get sent off to war
young stupid mufuckas whispering in death's ear wildin
who never thought we would make it outta Edgemere Houses
we'd come through party's and back them 40's niggas down
to us if we aint know you, you was Ocean Village, or from outta town
Joker was an older dude we looked up to comin up
a no nonsense cat who'd run down on anyone runnin up
mad respect for dude till he started puffin dust
then started shootin niggas for no reason and went dumb as fuck
my man from Flushing was murdered, older head said it didn't concern us
he got killed over some dumb shit and to hit back really wasn't worth it
copped us our 1st guns as teens, he had the plug with the permit
we got tired of knifeouts, cuz the older heads didn't trust us with burners
was always gun happy, 1st gun charge at 16, another at 18
Lawyer said if I got another one I wouldn't get away clean
a smart nigga doing a whole lotta dumb shit, that's when my moms told me
my pops called from the midwest and said I should go OT
with all the drama, jail, and death around me
I'd given up on opportunity and the opportunity found me
so now 15 years later in Nebraska successful with a family I dearly love
it's crazy as hell thinking that I survived the shit above

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Old 07-21-2018, 05:52 AM   #2
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Tjis shit.fire. flow is amazing out loud. Spit this with my gutteral grimey geno swag and it sounds crazy.
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Old 07-21-2018, 11:44 PM   #3
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Nebraska? Shit reminded me of Belly lol

In fact, this whole verse read like some classic Nas shit.

I dug and enjoyed it. Good stuff, per usual.
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