Ripto's Rage

Mr. J · 07-09-2018, 08:17 PM

Magenta murals that curl up the wall to the mezzanine
scotch sitting next to me, spilling, only to reflect a dream
passionate ploys developed out of habit, tomorrows youth
I sing my sorrows through the gap in the bottled tube.
confronted by awful truths & all Ive ever thought of you.
mcdonalds drive thru, ask for another escape & value.
Im hanging off my bar stool hoping to taste the cashews
it doesnt add up but I deal with it while awaiting obesity
life was once neat to me, now I can no longer coast easily
cloaked in black on black like watching ebony porn
pull another cigar out the humidor, close the ebony doors.
my pen creates sunsets that fall under the evening sky
folk music echoes through the valley, its the season right?
I can no longer believe the lie nor support the faults.
the flow begins to trail on as I started coasting off...

Exis · 07-18-2018, 02:08 AM

confronted by awful truths & all Ive ever thought of you.
mcdonalds drive thru, ask for another escape & value.
Im hanging off my bar stool hoping to taste the cashews
it doesnt add up but I deal with it while awaiting obesity
life was once neat to me, now I can no longer coast easily

^^Chea...

Vulgar · 07-20-2018, 11:14 PM

Im hanging off my bar stool hoping to taste the cashews

^That was a really cool line. No hesitation.

Mr. J · 09-24-2018, 08:54 PM

Thanks fellas. Link me

Bodey · 09-25-2018, 04:12 AM

Exis already quoted the lines I liked the best. Always appreciated your stuff. Cool read

07-09-2018, 08:17 PM	#1
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,023 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349678	Ripto's Rage Magenta murals that curl up the wall to the mezzanine scotch sitting next to me, spilling, only to reflect a dream passionate ploys developed out of habit, tomorrows youth I sing my sorrows through the gap in the bottled tube. confronted by awful truths & all Ive ever thought of you. mcdonalds drive thru, ask for another escape & value. Im hanging off my bar stool hoping to taste the cashews it doesnt add up but I deal with it while awaiting obesity life was once neat to me, now I can no longer coast easily cloaked in black on black like watching ebony porn pull another cigar out the humidor, close the ebony doors. my pen creates sunsets that fall under the evening sky folk music echoes through the valley, its the season right? I can no longer believe the lie nor support the faults. the flow begins to trail on as I started coasting off... __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

09-24-2018, 08:54 PM	#4
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,023 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349678	Thanks fellas. Link me __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

07-18-2018, 02:08 AM	#2
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,938 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	confronted by awful truths & all Ive ever thought of you. mcdonalds drive thru, ask for another escape & value. Im hanging off my bar stool hoping to taste the cashews it doesnt add up but I deal with it while awaiting obesity life was once neat to me, now I can no longer coast easily ^^Chea...

07-20-2018, 11:14 PM	#3
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604317	Im hanging off my bar stool hoping to taste the cashews ^That was a really cool line. No hesitation.