TwoDrop vs. Jabari Black JB WINS

[Incredible]

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due FRIDAY JULY 20th! and will be open until Sunday.
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

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• Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

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• 1st Person can edit until his opponent drops
• 2nd Person can edit until the first vote is posted

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@Jabari Black @Twodrop

[Twodrop]

12 coo?

[Jabari Black]

Yep

[Twodrop]

10 @Jabari Black

AYO...

U play ball like a girl...all FACTS. A bat to his back iffy wanna dispute it
or 'BEAST out' & put the 'steel on holmes' like Benny from the sandlot shooting
U put in work but hardly get respect. U need to up ur earnings fam,
I'm FOCUSED. Sending Haymakers that'll light ya body up like Burning man
U know I keep a tooly tucked. Fuck around n ur whole family’s fucked
Long nose, diesel pump. Puttin all u niggas in Tacoma’s like Toyota trucks
Practicing w/ st8 razors on yah baby while chain smokin' newports
Reciting gun lines changing pampers...u even 'pullin' shit' on ya newborn
I'm not wasting time w/ JB tbh, ya lines st8 but the blade leave a red floor
Fuck playing games, I'm leaving holes in ya frame like I'm playing connect 4

[Jabari Black]

Originally Posted by Twodrop

Knife tucked when I stroll ya block. License to carry if it gets loud
If u feeling froggy take half off a vet nigga - that's a military discount

I let the semi shoot you. I’ll knock plenty screws loose when I wave the strap/
Or the mini deuce deuce....you’ll get a ‘.22, Two’ like a Jay-Z track/
You had a “half off a vet” line vs Blue...voters thought it was hard, chief/
But watch JC vs Craig Lamar at 13:30...yep...this bitch is a bar thief/
If you start beef, I’ll rush ya quick and have you flustered, bitch/
Then a pistol whip...slap the 5 across your mouth like you let a cuss word slip/
2 ratchets...if theses bitches start banging, you’ll need the strap, bitch/
Im savage! Pull up to this fake bitch door with MACs beside me like Nev on catfish/
I got a strap that twice ya weight...Gun so big the serial number on a license plate/
Can’t hold it straight...so ‘I slide the arm over the shoulder’ like a high school date/

[DMS]

Originally Posted by Twodrop

10 @Jabari Black

AYO...

U play ball like a girl...all FACTS. A bat to his back iffy wanna dispute it
or 'BEAST out' & put the 'steel on holmes' like Benny from the sandlot shooting

This was a nice opener, not quite heavyweight.

U put in work but hardly get respect. U need to up ur earnings fam,
I'm FOCUSED. Sending Haymakers that'll light ya body up like Burning man

Lol this made me think of the one Simpsons episode about burning guy,
Pretty good

U know I keep a tooly tucked. Fuck around n ur whole family’s fucked
Long nose, diesel pump. Puttin all u niggas in Tacoma’s like Toyota trucks

Pretty nice

Practicing w/ st8 razors on yah baby while chain smokin' newports
Reciting gun lines changing pampers...u even 'pullin' shit' on ya newborn

Meh

I'm not wasting time w/ JB tbh, ya lines st8 but the blade leave a red floor
Fuck playing games, I'm leaving holes in ya frame like I'm playing connect

I don’t get it. When you play connect four don’t you remove holes or fill holes with circles? Could’ve not said “Fuck playing games,” and done something like, “I put rounds in your frame like I’m playing connect four.” Cus it’d make more sense. But I’ve seen plays like that before allot so still wouldn’t hit hard for me.

4

[DMS]

Originally Posted by Jabari Black

I let the semi shoot you. I’ll knock plenty screws loose when I wave the strap/
Or the mini deuce deuce....you’ll get a ‘.22, Two’ like a Jay-Z track/

Nice,

You had a “half off a vet” line vs Blue...voters thought it was hard, chief/
But watch JC vs Craig Lamar at 13:30...yep...this bitch is a bar thief/

I actually searched it up, and yeah I’m 99% sure 2 Drop stole the bar.
This was a dope line and I guess a personal

If you start beef, I’ll rush ya quick and have you flustered, bitch/
Then a pistol whip...slap the 5 across your mouth like you let a cuss word slip/

Pretty good

2 ratchets...if theses bitches start banging, you’ll need the strap, bitch/
Im savage! Pull up to this fake bitch door with MACs beside me like Nev on catfish/

Pretty nice

I got a strap that twice ya weight...Gun so big the serial number on a license plate/
Can’t hold it straight...so ‘I slide the arm over the shoulder’ like a high school date/

Not my favorite bar from the battle but it’s good.

[DMS]

I got JB pretty comfortably here,
That bar stealer line won it for me, plus I might be underrating that ender,

V/JB

[GUDELJ]

U play ball like a girl...all FACTS. A bat to his back iffy wanna dispute it
or 'BEAST out' & put the 'steel on holmes' like Benny from the sandlot shooting
this is pretty cool
U put in work but hardly get respect. U need to up ur earnings fam,
I'm FOCUSED. Sending Haymakers that'll light ya body up like Burning man
alright not bad
U know I keep a tooly tucked. Fuck around n ur whole family’s fucked
Long nose, diesel pump. Puttin all u niggas in Tacoma’s like Toyota trucks
bar a tad bit played but good flip, wording and execution really nice
Practicing w/ st8 razors on yah baby while chain smokin' newports
Reciting gun lines changing pampers...u even 'pullin' shit' on ya newborn
nah lol
I'm not wasting time w/ JB tbh, ya lines st8 but the blade leave a red floor
Fuck playing games, I'm leaving holes in ya frame like I'm playing connect 4
this is Decent. Connect 4 concepts pretty played by now


Vs


I let the semi shoot you. I’ll knock plenty screws loose when I wave the strap/
Or the mini deuce deuce....you’ll get a ‘.22, Two’ like a Jay-Z track/
decent
You had a “half off a vet” line vs Blue...voters thought it was hard, chief/
But watch JC vs Craig Lamar at 13:30...yep...this bitch is a bar thief/
lol damn. Nice personal here
If you start beef, I’ll rush ya quick and have you flustered, bitch/
Then a pistol whip...slap the 5 across your mouth like you let a cuss word slip/
lmao if you had said “slap the fifth” I would have died. Good bar though
2 ratchets...if theses bitches start banging, you’ll need the strap, bitch/
Im savage! Pull up to this fake bitch door with MACs beside me like Nev on catfish/
ok lol
I got a strap that twice ya weight...Gun so big the serial number on a license plate/
Can’t hold it straight...so ‘I slide the arm over the shoulder’ like a high school date/
gun so big lollllll. I love this. Swaggy and creative


This battle was a lot closer than I had expected. I didn’t think twodrop was gonna bring bars this good. Twodrop had 1 Miss, 1 Decent, and the rest were cool. Jabari had no clear misses and the biting personal against twodrop definitely helped seal the deal. Good battle here and props to both.


Vote Jabari Black

[Blue Bayou]

U play ball like a girl...all FACTS. A bat to his back iffy wanna dispute it
or 'BEAST out' & put the 'steel on holmes' like Benny from the sandlot shooting
cool, steel a pretty old and basic wp but won't lie I enjoy the flip here
U put in work but hardly get respect. U need to up ur earnings fam,
I'm FOCUSED. Sending Haymakers that'll light ya body up like Burning man
hell ya, dig this
U know I keep a tooly tucked. Fuck around n ur whole family’s fucked
Long nose, diesel pump. Puttin all u niggas in Tacoma’s like Toyota trucks
throwbackkk, cant lie I did this exact wordplay years back (long bar days) so this was played to me
Practicing w/ st8 razors on yah baby while chain smokin' newports
Reciting gun lines changing pampers...u even 'pullin' shit' on ya newborn
nah felt corny and lame tbh
I'm not wasting time w/ JB tbh, ya lines st8 but the blade leave a red floor
Fuck playing games, I'm leaving holes in ya frame like I'm playing connect 4
holes / frame / connect 4 a dece meta, seen a lot of similar connect 4 bars tho


Vs


I let the semi shoot you. I’ll knock plenty screws loose when I wave the strap/
Or the mini deuce deuce....you’ll get a ‘.22, Two’ like a Jay-Z track/
solid nameplay open and attack line
You had a “half off a vet” line vs Blue...voters thought it was hard, chief/
But watch JC vs Craig Lamar at 13:30...yep...this bitch is a bar thief/
LoL, good personal hit
If you start beef, I’ll rush ya quick and have you flustered, bitch/
Then a pistol whip...slap the 5 across your mouth like you let a cuss word slip/
cool
2 ratchets...if theses bitches start banging, you’ll need the strap, bitch/
Im savage! Pull up to this fake bitch door with MACs beside me like Nev on catfish/
lol, fresh concept this is tight
I got a strap that twice ya weight...Gun so big the serial number on a license plate/
Can’t hold it straight...so ‘I slide the arm over the shoulder’ like a high school date/
lol cool meta, punch a bit light but the concept was dope and this was worded well


Cool battle here, Twodrop def really liked your first two bars u were rolling... then I feel like you got a tad played after that (Tacoma, connect 4 line) but on the whole pretty solid verse with some cool concepts..

Jabari... really solid 10 line verse, good consistency throughout and some dope concepts.. the gun bars got a bit repetitive but they were all solid and the personal was hard hitting


I've got JB here... props to both

[Twodrop]

im fine w/ closing this... JB got it.

[bleak]

Word i got you when @Cred mods me