07-14-2018, 09:39 AM | #1 |
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WK 10: DMS 3-0 vs. Incredible 2-3 - INCREDIBLE WINS
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Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER INCREDIBLE @DMS @Incredible |
07-14-2018, 08:44 PM | #2 |
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Cereal not voting would be appreciated Last edited by DMS; 07-17-2018 at 07:52 PM. |
07-17-2018, 09:12 PM | #3 |
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8 I guess
You’re as soft as pasta, when I play on ya I’m smart still There’s so much the GAT lays on ya, it’s like this cat was Garfield I open up this kid’s door quietly, I ‘gain energy’ from this foster’s scream My crew role up ‘canisters’ filled, get ready cus we’re ‘Monsters Inc’ Ain’t gonna Mark chalk o’ let the police find him, this is pure malice This marshmallow hasn’t seen a gram in his life, why do you think he has s’more talent. Your girl a cheese head? I’ve been hearing that Inc, Ay. Cus she’s yelling at you to ‘Go Pack!’ Like she was cheering at Green Bay |
07-17-2018, 11:07 PM | #4 |
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Undeafeted...Pft for what reason? this inc leave you bleedin
& After I put this $$$ tattoo on ya head, the DQ is only what my killers are seekin That'll be with me barely speakin, them dogs bark on there own Youd think they walking some pets looking for you, that's the nose of the chrome Boy go home, stop skippin class to post up a verse from the library No book on how to shoot, he trippin? Turn'em to braille this kid is clearly blind, very! Me: Why so angry sometimes? DQ'n Bongo? Not letting votes come out? Him: "Just built up aggression from losing over n' over to him & Lenox on my Kik acct." |
07-18-2018, 01:57 AM | #5 |
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Undeafeted...Pft for what reason? this inc leave you bleedin
& After I put this $$$ tattoo on ya head, the DQ is only what my killers are seekin Lol...that won it for me, both were tight verses but yeah... Vote - Inc. |
07-18-2018, 11:49 AM | #6 |
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You’re as soft as pasta, when I play on ya I’m smart still There’s so much the GAT lays on ya, it’s like this cat was Garfield ehh...so much "missing something here maybe" the gat I open up this kid’s door quietly, I ‘gain energy’ from this foster’s scream My crew role up ‘canisters’ filled, get ready cus we’re ‘Monsters Inc’ this wasn't bad but could've been a lot better Ain’t gonna Mark chalk o’ let the police find him, this is pure malice This marshmallow hasn’t seen a gram in his life, why do you think he has s’more talent. nah, "need s'more talent" or something, dunno what the Mark part references Your girl a cheese head? I’ve been hearing that Inc, Ay. Cus she’s yelling at you to ‘Go Pack!’ Like she was cheering at Green Bay closer wasn't bad, set-up was lackluster Undeafeted...Pft for what reason? this inc leave you bleedin & After I put this $$$ tattoo on ya head, the DQ is only what my killers are seekin coolish flip kinda That'll be with me barely speakin, them dogs bark on there own Youd think they walking some pets looking for you, that's the nose of the chrome cool again Boy go home, stop skippin class to post up a verse from the library No book on how to shoot, he trippin? Turn'em to braille this kid is clearly blind, very! nah Me: Why so angry sometimes? DQ'n Bongo? Not letting votes come out? Him: "Just built up aggression from losing over n' over to him & Lenox on my Kik acct." funny line I got Inc here with a better overall verse, good battle fellas. |
07-18-2018, 08:04 PM | #7 |
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You’re as soft as pasta, when I play on ya I’m smart still
There’s so much the GAT lays on ya, it’s like this cat was Garfield Very light here fam...decent I open up this kid’s door quietly, I ‘gain energy’ from this foster’s scream My crew role up ‘canisters’ filled, get ready cus we’re ‘Monsters Inc’ Concept was coo, but the execution to the punch was light. Weak jab here Ain’t gonna Mark chalk o’ let the police find him, this is pure malice This marshmallow hasn’t seen a gram in his life, why do you think he has s’more talent. Nahhh b, wasn't to much rocking with this one Your girl a cheese head? I’ve been hearing that Inc, Ay. Cus she’s yelling at you to ‘Go Pack!’ Like she was cheering at Green Bay This was decent here, best line out of your verse to me..... -------- Undeafeted...Pft for what reason? this inc leave you bleedin & After I put this $$$ tattoo on ya head, the DQ is only what my killers are seekin Coo opener here! Wording is stretched as you read That'll be with me barely speakin, them dogs bark on there own Youd think they walking some pets looking for you, that's the nose of the chrome Light jab here, decent concept I guess Boy go home, stop skippin class to post up a verse from the library No book on how to shoot, he trippin? Turn'em to braille this kid is clearly blind, very! Lol, funny jab here, it was decent Me: Why so angry sometimes? DQ'n Bongo? Not letting votes come out? Him: "Just built up aggression from losing over n' over to him & Lenox on my Kik acct." Funny closer here! Props to both! No brainer here Inc gets this with better overall verse all the way around. DMS needs some work in some areas, but its all good keep at it homie. 1HunDo V-Inc
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07-18-2018, 11:52 PM | #8 |
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You’re as soft as pasta, when I play on ya I’m smart still
There’s so much the GAT lays on ya, it’s like this cat was Garfield had potential I open up this kid’s door quietly, I ‘gain energy’ from this foster’s scream My crew role up ‘canisters’ filled, get ready cus we’re ‘Monsters Inc’ I personally thought this was dope, I see how it could be better w/ a little more finesse but I like it Ain’t gonna Mark chalk o’ let the police find him, this is pure malice This marshmallow hasn’t seen a gram in his life, why do you think he has s’more talent. hmm, didn't catch the connection here. From the setup I thought u were going to go a different direction Your girl a cheese head? I’ve been hearing that Inc, Ay. Cus she’s yelling at you to ‘Go Pack!’ Like she was cheering at Green Bay ya, this was coo Undeafeted...Pft for what reason? this inc leave you bleedin & After I put this $$$ tattoo on ya head, the DQ is only what my killers are seekin lol ok That'll be with me barely speakin, them dogs bark on there own Youd think they walking some pets looking for you, that's the nose of the chrome fks w/ it Boy go home, stop skippin class to post up a verse from the library No book on how to shoot, he trippin? Turn'em to braille this kid is clearly blind, very! lol, not feeling this one, LMAO blind, VERY! haha.. it made me laugh Me: Why so angry sometimes? DQ'n Bongo? Not letting votes come out? Him: "Just built up aggression from losing over n' over to him & Lenox on my Kik acct." ya, nice Hmm... I thought it was closer than people think. Thought DMS actually had the lotb w/ the monsters inc line, guess it's just preference. Incred def had the more consistent verse w/ a couple jabs and some funny lines. Edge to incred, excited to see what DMS does in the future. v/ Incred |
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