07-09-2018, 07:09 AM | #1 |
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Week 4: Cashius (2-1) vs. MMLP (2-1) - CASHIUS WINS
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07-12-2018, 04:21 AM | #2 |
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His fake persona dons a blue suit & red cape, a wannabe vigilante that raps
fatso looks more like hes up the Duff, man & it’s the only time hes shooting cans from the strap |
07-13-2018, 09:03 PM | #3 | |
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07-13-2018, 09:26 PM | #4 |
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MMLP decent concept and I liked your intentions but it was just too wordy and for that it didn’t work out. Was a miss for me man.
Cashius I really dug your punch, shit was nice. Good use of a current event personal Vote Cashius |
07-13-2018, 10:20 PM | #5 |
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Mmlp has a dope concept just didn’t execute it well while
Cash came with s slick personal plus it was fresh and current Decent battle got cash tho |
07-13-2018, 10:23 PM | #6 |
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more up the duff jus didnt sit to well to make it hit harsh.
cash had a dope bar. Vote / Cashius |
07-13-2018, 11:49 PM | #7 |
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MMLP worded it terribly imo.
Cash was dope tho lol nice bar bro. V/ Cashius |
07-14-2018, 02:33 AM | #8 |
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Like others have said, really liked MMLP concept... Cash always just has that next level wording/execution on fresh concepts.
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07-14-2018, 07:19 AM | #9 |
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Cash w/ the direct personal got this. MMLP is improving tho. He needs to limit the syllables used. His punches are a little long winded. Conceptually - this weeks bar was by far your best, bro. More stuff like this will get you where you need to be on the rankings, dude.
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07-14-2018, 08:43 AM | #10 |
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Got cash here that shit was fire and one of the few relevant and effective uses of a quote that I’ve seen on here
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07-14-2018, 08:46 AM | #11 |
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if mmlp had a reg gun bar w/ a duffman reference, he may have got this.. but the wordplay ruined it in this case. too awkward & weird sounding
cash had a light personal tbh, not his best but enough to take this v/cashius
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07-14-2018, 09:52 AM | #12 |
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I liked what MMLP tried to do here funny concept just think Cashius was more slick. Also funny and a recent personal to top it off.
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07-14-2018, 09:59 AM | #13 |
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yeah Cash got this, good disc/quote punch.
MMLP concept was fire just missed on execution... also the ..Duff, Man.. wp was a miss. |
07-14-2018, 10:24 AM | #14 |
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I quite like the duff man wordplay double punch here (so far he looks pregnant and doesnt shoot)... cool concept but the wording isnt very clean..
Cash I like the angle here... tbh it seems a bit easy to me for you but the wording is on point and the personal is effective here.. Vote Cash here... his wording and personal angle outshined MMs creativity/wordplay as his wording and rhyming let him down
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07-14-2018, 11:52 AM | #15 |
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Vote -- Cash
Decent diss. MMLP, I'm not familiar with the phrase 'up the Duff'. I like the concept but I couldn't get behind the full execution.
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Cashius Wins 12-0
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