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Fracture vs. Inno {Fracture wins}
Round One . . . FIGHT! DUE: Friday, the 5th of June @ 11:59 PM PST aka 3 am on the beast coast 12-16 lines, NO MORE AND NO LESS The rest you already know, I won't accept tom foolery and fuckery @Fracture @Inno
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Ayo..
Im the king, always seen as the sire, Youre dead meat.. Im gonna wear you out like ed geins the designer. Fracs hands go light speed.. Neo on the hunt Look at the seeding..only time a knuckle can beat me to the punch. Hes like a gun w/ no safety.. Any cock he'll bang, Back of innos head has had more hands on it than the walk of fame. Round 2 for him? nah this fuckos bouncing.. Ya girl wants u to be more open, my blade'll spare you couples counseling. Inno has a bank account?.. U mean a tip cup in a bent hat. Hes homeless,.. only draft protection is when he zips up the tent flap. Getting to meet his idol got inno so hyper.. Too bad this high note ends in murder, like courtney love his ghostwriter Last edited by Fracture; 06-04-2020 at 10:07 AM. |
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It’s the summer classic no doubt yah boy seeking crowns
But yo if frac is the pinnacle than I must be on Mount Everest looking down Fuck it I’ll let the barrrel spit, that shits hot next to the hip no lie I’ll send. So many shots at ya whip when they find the body it’s a DUI AND let’s be honest, yah styles outdated and past it’s prime At this point the only thing your doing is telling dads jokes that rhyme But yo fuck all that I got yah girl giving top non stop! She’s made me cum so much her hand glitters like the king of pop l I w heard all about you, your suppose to be top 3? But all I see is a washed up legend looking to cash in on his past glory No bullshit frac ama have you bowing to me Your gonna take to losing like like George Floyd took a knee... Last edited by Inno; 06-06-2020 at 02:07 AM. |
06-06-2020, 08:10 AM | #8 |
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ed gein is a heater
knuck was cool walk of fame hittt blade open seems familiar but still a goodie draft protection is a banger closer only one i didnt like vs mt everest was cool dui is okay dad jokes was funny glitter was stupid corny but lol past glory was ok but more statementish chauvin took a knee, didnt work for me inno was pretty good, enjoyed the comedic route.. too bad he ran into Frac this early.. Frac had that creativity i look for in verses.. nonchalant wording that stings.. great read v frac
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Fracture won. This was one of the better verses I read this round (could’ve been the best). Solid ideas and great wording. Pretty much what I expected. Inno’s verse was decent, but it wasn’t as witty or polished as Frac’s.
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06-06-2020, 12:48 PM | #10 |
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yo..
Im the king, always seen as the sire, Youre dead meat.. Im gonna wear you out like ed geins the designer. Decent start although wear/waring someone out is a bit tame Fracs hands go light speed.. Neo on the hunt Look at the seeding..only time a knuckle can beat me to the punch. Is this Neo from prowlers then? This is cool. Would’ve hit harder if the seedlings were in the thread anywhere but that’s not on you Hes like a gun w/ no safety.. Any cock he'll bang, Back of innos head has had more hands on it than the walk of fame. Lmao nice Round 2 for him? nah this fuckos bouncing.. Ya girl wants u to be more open, my blade'll spare you couples counseling. niiice Inno has a bank account?.. U mean a tip cup in a bent hat., Hes homeless,.. only draft protection is when he zips up the tent flap. Nice again Getting to meet his idol got inno so hyper.. Too bad this high note ends in murder, like courtney love his ghostwriter Feel like this one was tough to word for it come off but you managed it and it hits, nice verse It’s the summer classic no doubt yah boy seeking crowns But yo if frac is the pinnacle than I must be on Mount Everest looking down Decent start Fuck it I’ll let the barrrel spit, that shits hot next to the hip no lie I’ll send. So many shots at ya whip when they find the body it’s a DUI This is nice AND let’s be honest, yah styles outdated and past it’s prime At this point the only thing your doing is telling dads jokes that rhyme Haha nice again But yo fuck all that I got yah girl giving top non stop! She’s made me cum so much her hand glitters like the king of pop l Lol man this is a left field one I w heard all about you, your suppose to be top 3? But all I see is a washed up legend looking to cash in on his past glory Can’t see anything to this other than a straight statement No bullshit frac ama have you bowing to me Your gonna take to losing like like George Floyd took a knee... This is bad sorry Frac had some nice lines and execution was on point, plus his obligatory knife line. Inno started well but really fell off at the end and never really hit the highs frac did. Good effort though and the wording/flow etc were all there Vote - frac |
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yo..
Im the king, always seen as the sire, Youre dead meat.. Im gonna wear you out like ed geins the designer. cool concept but im going to wear you out isnt a very strong punch Fracs hands go light speed.. Neo on the hunt Look at the seeding..only time a knuckle can beat me to the punch. solid rank punch, worded well Hes like a gun w/ no safety.. Any cock he'll bang, Back of innos head has had more hands on it than the walk of fame. Lol this was cool Round 2 for him? nah this fuckos bouncing.. Ya girl wants u to be more open, my blade'll spare you couples counseling. i did a similar 'open up' concept on rb but this flipn was cool... lol at fuckos Inno has a bank account?.. U mean a tip cup in a bent hat., Hes homeless,.. only draft protection is when he zips up the tent flap. FIRE. one of my fave bars of the round....great wit here Getting to meet his idol got inno so hyper.. Too bad this high note ends in murder, like courtney love his ghostwriter pretty cool concept and punch, liked the swag in the setup It’s the summer classic no doubt yah boy seeking crowns But yo if frac is the pinnacle than I must be on Mount Everest looking down Dece open. seek/look seemed a bit lazy but solid jab here Fuck it I’ll let the barrrel spit, that shits hot next to the hip no lie I’ll send. So many shots at ya whip when they find the body it’s a DUI ehh its okay AND let’s be honest, yah styles outdated and past it’s prime At this point the only thing your doing is telling dads jokes that rhyme lol, funny direct personal..prob applies to frac the least from some of those UPN tourney guys but w/e, it lands But yo fuck all that I got yah girl giving top non stop! She’s made me cum so much her hand glitters like the king of pop l nah I w heard all about you, your suppose to be top 3? But all I see is a washed up legend looking to cash in on his past glory ehh these kind of swag personals have been done many times in the best and better... okay No bullshit frac ama have you bowing to me Your gonna take to losing like like George Floyd took a knee... nah basic , seemed like ur just rushed to get the verse done Cool battle. Frac had a good blend of concepts, draft protection was fuego... Inno had a good opener and the upn personal was funny...but he didnt seem as polished or good conceptually as he's been in the past here to hang with frac... Better concepts with better execution , props to both Vote - Fracture
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06-06-2020, 02:25 PM | #12 |
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Im the king, always seen as the sire, Youre dead meat.. Im gonna wear you out like ed geins the designer. this was good Fracs hands go light speed.. Neo on the hunt Look at the seeding..only time a knuckle can beat me to the punch. nah Hes like a gun w/ no safety.. Any cock he'll bang, Back of innos head has had more hands on it than the walk of fame. ha, set up was decent too Round 2 for him? nah this fuckos bouncing.. Ya girl wants u to be more open, my blade'll spare you couples counseling. Smirked, didnt want to like it bc its a bit over done but the delivery was on point Inno has a bank account?.. U mean a tip cup in a bent hat. Hes homeless,.. only draft protection is when he zips up the tent flap. wording crisp Getting to meet his idol got inno so hyper.. Too bad this high note ends in murder, like courtney love his ghostwriter lol at meet his idol.. punchwas aight Inno: It’s the summer classic no doubt yah boy seeking crowns But yo if frac is the pinnacle than I must be on Mount Everest looking down could've been something Fuck it I’ll let the barrrel spit, that shits hot next to the hip no lie I’ll send. So many shots at ya whip when they find the body it’s a DUI haha I like this oddly AND let’s be honest, yah styles outdated and past it’s prime At this point the only thing your doing is telling dads jokes that rhyme hmmm nah But yo fuck all that I got yah girl giving top non stop! She’s made me cum so much her hand glitters like the king of pop LOL... Inno got glitter in his sperm confirmed I w heard all about you, your suppose to be top 3? But all I see is a washed up legend looking to cash in on his past glory this could've been something.. lot of truth to it No bullshit frac ama have you bowing to me Your gonna take to losing like like George Floyd took a knee... lazy here but ok Ok this was a nice short battle with no convoluted punches. Inno had some shit here and it was good but Frac came with just a little bit more and the wording was cleaner. mvgt Fracture.
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Im the king, always seen as the sire, Youre dead meat.. Im gonna wear you out like ed geins the designer. Elementary and not dissing him Fracs hands go light speed.. Neo on the hunt Look at the seeding..only time a knuckle can beat me to the punch. Huh Hes like a gun w/ no safety.. Any cock he'll bang, Back of innos head has had more hands on it than the walk of fame. Above avg filler Round 2 for him? nah this fuckos bouncing.. Ya girl wants u to be more open, my blade'll spare you couples counseling. Ok Inno has a bank account?.. U mean a tip cup in a bent hat. Hes homeless,.. only draft protection is when he zips up the tent flap. Three lines is weird. Setup could've been more relevant to draft protection, but this is good Getting to meet his idol got inno so hyper.. Too bad this high note ends in murder, like courtney love his ghostwriter Not a harsh diss tent flap was the best line, couples counseling was better than the rest. Everything else was too plain or didn't do a good job of dissing him directly 5/10 VS Inno It’s the summer classic no doubt yah boy seeking crowns But yo if frac is the pinnacle than I must be on Mount Everest looking down Though you were going elsewhere with this. This is ok Fuck it I’ll let the barrrel spit, that shits hot next to the hip no lie I’ll send. So many shots at ya whip when they find the body it’s a DUI I see what you're going for but it aint really work.If he's dead, DUI don't matter AND let’s be honest, yah styles outdated and past it’s prime At this point the only thing your doing is telling dads jokes that rhyme Got a chuckle outta me But yo fuck all that I got yah girl giving top non stop! She’s made me cum so much her hand glitters like the king of pop l Meh. I w heard all about you, your suppose to be top 3? But all I see is a washed up legend looking to cash in on his past glory Too plain No bullshit frac ama have you bowing to me Your gonna take to losing like like George Floyd took a knee... Lazy filler Dad jokes made me lol, second half of the verse was noticeably worst than the first half. 4/10 Vote: Frac |
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Im the king, always seen as the sire,
Youre dead meat.. Im gonna wear you out like ed geins the designer. cool opener Fracs hands go light speed.. Neo on the hunt Look at the seeding..only time a knuckle can beat me to the punch. not feelin Hes like a gun w/ no safety.. Any cock he'll bang, Back of innos head has had more hands on it than the walk of fame. alright Round 2 for him? nah this fuckos bouncing.. Ya girl wants u to be more open, my blade'll spare you couples counseling. yikes this was hot Inno has a bank account?.. U mean a tip cup in a bent hat. Hes homeless,.. only draft protection is when he zips up the tent flap. lol cool Getting to meet his idol got inno so hyper.. Too bad this high note ends in murder, like courtney love his ghostwriter decent Vs It’s the summer classic no doubt yah boy seeking crowns But yo if frac is the pinnacle than I must be on Mount Everest looking down decent Fuck it I’ll let the barrrel spit, that shits hot next to the hip no lie I’ll send. So many shots at ya whip when they find the body it’s a DUI ok here AND let’s be honest, yah styles outdated and past it’s prime At this point the only thing your doing is telling dads jokes that rhyme lmaooooo I love this But yo fuck all that I got yah girl giving top non stop! She’s made me cum so much her hand glitters like the king of pop ok lol I w heard all about you, your suppose to be top 3? But all I see is a washed up legend looking to cash in on his past glory nah No bullshit frac ama have you bowing to me Your gonna take to losing like like George Floyd took a knee... nah Good battle here, I have to start getting used to the UPN guys’ style. I like it a lot but sometimes I feel like it lacks. Facture had a nice verse with only one miss. Inno had a good verse here too, may just be the best I’ve ever seen from him. Props. Closer than I expected here but I have fracture winning. Vote Frwcture |
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