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Old 05-25-2020, 06:24 PM   #1
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Old 05-25-2020, 06:25 PM   #2
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100 lines, no personals, at least 70% horse bars
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A one-eared artist, huh?


All my goons in the sprinter; you can Answer to God when they're spammin the shotty.
See a Van Gogh painting ya living room til forensics has to canvas your body.
It's awfully bad.. you're a try-hard loser; a wanna-be fan.
Only screenshots from Cash you'll see today go thru ya front porch & cost me a band.
I PUT YOU HERE; helping you beat @INF was an ugly decision..
This was an obvious set-up followed by an even messier execution (i.e. every punch that you've written.)
Blindside this software geek while I'm grippin the ratchet.
Extended clip.. I'm a virtual machine w/ the Mac; let's see if your peripherals catch it.
Ain't progressed since '08.. loser's slumped over his computer & left for dead.
Buncha long drawn-out lines that connect to nothin, so you should be used to the Vector spread.
Toss C4 in ya living room, then the Sig's in ya mouth for actin brolic:
I'll send a packet thru ya Windows before I let it click.. take a drag & drop it.
Stays jockin Bayou & his obsession w/ Dom's got so gay, it's impeding him.
Ironic, you're dyin to give that Ozymandias.. but still wanna play The Comedian.
You live in a fantasy world.. I'm pullin bitches outta Moulin Rouge.
If turnin Disney Movies into punches made you the GOAT, you'd be the Mulan Rudge.
Last SC, you flew by Knight - should've lost in the votes.
I got a Classic IX under my belt, too; this 1st gen. Glock 17 'bout to be lodged in ya throat.
You're fuckin SPINELESS; poke his chest & he'll be shitting on himself.
Last time you drew a line in the sand, you got pushed off the slide & tried signaling for help.
Doin calculus to breakdown battles, but it's a body bag next.
If Answer got lines jumpin off the charts, he said he wasn't a fag on the polygraph test.
Keep bumpin ya gums & lose a limb from these guns that I'm dumpin.
Fuck the Apollo; after they amputate ya leg, good luck - that's the only stump you'll be rubbin.
See how you deal w/ the Hecklers - these burners get sparkin, then..
Your only stand-up routine involves painkillers & PT while you're learning to walk again.
End up tied in the trunk or lead'll fly from the pump.
Silencer on the 12 gauge; FILA mash up w/ this Big Poppa even Genocide wouldn't want.
You were chomping at the bit, but got killed in the end.
Auger the bayonet, either way you'll get the point once it's drilled in your head.


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Old 05-30-2020, 02:11 AM   #6
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vs. Wavy Crockett aka Mr Gun Bars aka Been Crying about not making the HOF for yearrsss

You WERE the champ
Now it's switching hands; the sig wheezing, clips leaking; u showered til it jams
Monster's Inc.. This kid screaming once he sees how much power's in the can
It's bitch season; creep in ur house; Where's the TEC's you keep speaking about?
Rosie Jetson.. Your whole chest gettin opened up once the sweeper comes out

Quote:
Neighbor makes a crazy amount of I love my fiance posts on Facebook
No reason to lie, neigh; ur breezy is fine; all beefin aside she's STILL hot
Not a HAIR out of place; beam in her eye.. WELLLL lined up for the kill shot
A fuckin Chad since undergrad; U were NC1 sucking BAD when I banged her twice
College ruled; She was on my sheets, wide when u needed more space to write
Poundin her twat.. That bitch Mike Piazza how she mounts in a squat
Juiced As Fuccckk.. threw me a curveball when I put 2 fingers down in her crotch
Deaf boy makin moves, Mr. take ya boo; when I smash she's doing anal, too
Schoolbus; Makes YOU get off in front but opens the back door for a disabled dude
Neigh was a HS Jock; Blue Chip prospect; college wouldn't cost em a cent
Got looks from a LOT of scouts.. AND the troop leader for jerkin off in the tent
This is a loss of respect.. I'm WILD getting the strap
Put a Red Dot on Neighbor.. lookin like YOUR house on a Child Predator App
HOF?! The nerve of this prick; u wack but SOMETIMES your wording is sick
Not gone lie, you got select fire.. & so does the A.R. I'm bout to murder you with
HOF?! They don't GOTTA hype me - I'm beast; clout chasin is not in my scene
Neigh wants on a list w/ AK, Barc, & Cash so bad - HERE'S a list: people bodied by me
HOF?!? You compliment battled Orc & Des talkin bout pounding their asses
How's this for an orientation process.. we just figured out ur a faggot
One hook’ll put you out on the street; you'll get sent to the pavement
If Neighbor puts someone out on the street that's gentrification
I pack straps with the big drums.. get clapped fast when the clips bust
Somethin bout Mary.. Ur whole family gone see a sad sack gettin zipped up
Simply vicious.. 3 a.m. u wake up to 50 clips & the blicky spittin
Still in underwear when I pull the slide on em - Tom Cruise in Risky business
Crockett gets Bullet after bullet.. Drive by, 5 live pistols
Wave gettin hit w/ such a high frequency it'll wipe out the WiFi signal
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Old 05-30-2020, 10:23 AM   #7
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Neighbor:

All my goons in the sprinter; you can Answer to God when they're spammin the shotty.
See a Van Gogh painting ya living room til forensics has to canvas your body.
The deaf reference makes it a little better but the concept is played
It's awfully bad.. you're a try-hard loser; a wanna-be fan.
Only screenshots from Cash you'll see today go thru ya front porch & cost me a band.
LOL. Maybe should've opened with this so I'd get the refernce quicker but still nice.
I PUT YOU HERE; helping you beat @INF was an ugly decision..
This was an obvious set-up followed by an even messier execution (i.e. every punch that you've written.)
alright
Blindside this software geek while I'm grippin the ratchet.
Extended clip.. I'm a virtual machine w/ the Mac; let's see if your peripherals catch it.
I don't fully get it but I get the extent of it.. okay
Ain't progressed since '08.. loser's slumped over his computer & left for dead.
Buncha long drawn-out lines that connect to nothin, so you should be used to the Vector spread.
could've been dope with a covid tie-in
Toss C4 in ya living room, then the Sig's in ya mouth for actin brolic:
I'll send a packet thru ya Windows before I let it click.. take a drag & drop it.
kinda wordy, concept is decent but 3 nerdish bars in a row is a bit much
Stays jockin Bayou & his obsession w/ Dom's got so gay, it's impeding him.
Ironic, you're dyin to give that Ozymandias.. but still wanna play The Comedian.
like the wp .. concept light
You live in a fantasy world.. I'm pullin bitches outta Moulin Rouge.
If turnin Disney Movies into punches made you the GOAT, you'd be the Mulan Rudge.
liked where it went but didn't like the presentation of this
Last SC, you flew by Knight - should've lost in the votes.
I got a Classic IX under my belt, too; this 1st gen. Glock 17 'bout to be lodged in ya throat.
alright
You're fuckin SPINELESS; poke his chest & he'll be shitting on himself.
Last time you drew a line in the sand, you got pushed off the slide & tried signaling for help.
Cool
Doin calculus to breakdown battles, but it's a body bag next.
If Answer got lines jumpin off the charts, he said he wasn't a fag on the polygraph test.
LOL!
Keep bumpin ya gums & lose a limb from these guns that I'm dumpin.
Fuck the Apollo; after they amputate ya leg, good luck - that's the only stump you'll be rubbin.
Nice
See how you deal w/ the Hecklers - these burners get sparkin, then..
Your only stand-up routine involves painkillers & PT while you're learning to walk again.
direction of this was obvious though so it took away some.
End up tied in the trunk or lead'll fly from the pump.
Silencer on the 12 gauge; FILA mash up w/ this Big Poppa even Genocide wouldn't want.
lol nah
You were chomping at the bit, but got killed in the end.
Auger the bayonet, either way you'll get the point once it's drilled in your head.
alright


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You WERE the champ
Now it's switching hands; the sig wheezing, clips leaking; u showered til it jams
Monster's Inc.. This kid screaming once he sees how much power's in the can
cool
It's bitch season; creep in ur house; Where's the TEC's you keep speaking about?
Rosie Jetson.. Your whole chest gettin opened up once the sweeper comes out
another cartoon reference so soon. I hope this doesnt become a cartoon themed verse.. this was okayish
No reason to lie, neigh; ur breezy is fine; all beefin aside she's STILL hot
Not a HAIR out of place; beam in her eye.. WELLLL lined up for the kill shot
nice concept but direction was predictable from HAIR
A fuckin Chad since undergrad; U were NC1 sucking BAD when I banged her twice
College ruled; She was on my sheets, wide when u needed more space to write
LOL
Poundin her twat.. That bitch Mike Piazza how she mounts in a squat
Juiced As Fuccckk.. threw me a curveball when I put 2 fingers down in her crotch
first look its jokes but looking again it's just okay
Deaf boy makin moves, Mr. take ya boo; when I smash she's doing anal, too
Schoolbus; Makes YOU get off in front but opens the back door for a disabled dude
HAHAHAHA!!! Goodness..
Neigh was a HS Jock; Blue Chip prospect; college wouldn't cost em a cent
Got looks from a LOT of scouts.. AND the troop leader for jerkin off in the tent
cute
This is a loss of respect.. I'm WILD getting the strap
Put a Red Dot on Neighbor.. lookin like YOUR house on a Child Predator App
LOL sheesh
HOF?! The nerve of this prick; u wack but SOMETIMES your wording is sick
Not gone lie, you got select fire.. & so does the A.R. I'm bout to murder you with
alright
HOF?! They don't GOTTA hype me - I'm beast; clout chasin is not in my scene
Neigh wants on a list w/ AK, Barc, & Cash so bad - HERE'S a list: people bodied by me
Good personal here
HOF?!? You compliment battled Orc & Des talkin bout pounding their asses
How's this for an orientation process.. we just figured out ur a faggot
hehe
One hook’ll put you out on the street; you'll get sent to the pavement
If Neighbor puts someone out on the street that's gentrification
alright, works better for Cashius
I pack straps with the big drums.. get clapped fast when the clips bust
Somethin bout Mary.. Ur whole family gone see a sad sack gettin zipped up
lol
Simply vicious.. 3 a.m. u wake up to 50 clips & the blicky spittin
Still in underwear when I pull the slide on em - Tom Cruise in Risky business
two movie references in a row? cant lie this was Dope...
Crockett gets Bullet after bullet.. Drive by, 5 live pistols
Wave gettin hit w/ such a high frequency it'll wipe out the WiFi signal
Coolie



Probably my favorite battle so far this year. No real low points from either although both got nerdish Neigh with the computer stuff and Answer with the cartoon references. Answer was more colorful in his approach here. The bars made me go ooo.. The disabled bar was jokes, Screenshots and the polygraph from Neigh were dope. I think Answer had stronger punches that landed and misses were lighter buuuuut Neigh had some hitters.


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It's awfully bad.. you're a try-hard loser; a wanna-be fan.
Only screenshots from Cash you'll see today go thru ya front porch & cost me a band.
Blindside this software geek while I'm grippin the ratchet.
Extended clip.. I'm a virtual machine w/ the Mac; let's see if your peripherals catch it.
Toss C4 in ya living room, then the Sig's in ya mouth for actin brolic:
I'll send a packet thru ya Windows before I let it click.. take a drag & drop it.
Doin calculus to breakdown battles, but it's a body bag next.
If Answer got lines jumpin off the charts, he said he wasn't a fag on the polygraph test.


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It's bitch season; creep in ur house; Where's the TEC's you keep speaking about?
Rosie Jetson.. Your whole chest gettin opened up once the sweeper comes out
A fuckin Chad since undergrad; U were NC1 sucking BAD when I banged her twice
College ruled; She was on my sheets, wide when u needed more space to write
Deaf boy makin moves, Mr. take ya boo; when I smash she's doing anal, too
Schoolbus; Makes YOU get off in front but opens the back door for a disabled dude

This is a loss of respect.. I'm WILD getting the strap
Put a Red Dot on Neighbor.. lookin like YOUR house on a Child Predator App


pretty even battle imo. Answer just had two standout bars that made his verse better.

schoolbus/disabled line was LOTB by far. prob what got my vote



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van goh - aight
screenshots was solid
ie seemed fillerish
peripherals -ok.. ur wording is top class, dunno if i’d like this otherwise
vector spread coulda been nasty with some tie ins
nahhh at windows
ozymandias missed
mulan was hilarious, if he drops a disney line here its gonna hit hard
again wording made the summer IX Line connect
sand is ok
seen polygraph lines, still was well executed
apollo was a solid hit
stand up is too old without a new twist to it
Fila ok
closer was good

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monsters inc was fire, it also made his disney line hit harder tho
man jetson woulda been crazy af if i didnt hear 2 variations of it already.. (this and the metal maid/made for).. still fucked with urs
killshot was solid
college rule is ok
curveball nahhh
disabled is funny
scout leader’s a lil corny
red dot hittt
select fire, i wanna like it but i dont
bodied was a lil filler, cant blame u guys for so e here and there with a 30 liner
see above for orientation
grntrifcation is alright
something ab mary was a banger
cruise is aight
closer was decent



this was what a champ match is suppose to look like, top class wording.. i think it came down to concepts for me overall.. and it was 3 misses vs 2.. 4 heavy hits to 2.. answer got it this time around.. solid stuff gentleman, lookin forward to battling yous

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A fuckin Chad since undergrad; U were NC1 sucking BAD when I banged her twice
College ruled; She was on my sheets, wide when u needed more space to write

Deaf boy makin moves, Mr. take ya boo; when I smash she's doing anal, too
Schoolbus; Makes YOU get off in front but opens the back door for a disabled dude

This is a loss of respect.. I'm WILD getting the strap
Put a Red Dot on Neighbor.. lookin like YOUR house on a Child Predator App
I pack straps with the big drums.. get clapped fast when the clips bust
Somethin bout Mary.. Ur whole family gone see a sad sack gettin zipped up

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You're fuckin SPINELESS; poke his chest & he'll be shitting on himself.
Last time you drew a line in the sand, you got pushed off the slide & tried signaling for help.
Doin calculus to breakdown battles, but it's a body bag next.
If Answer got lines jumpin off the charts, he said he wasn't a fag on the polygraph test.
See how you deal w/ the Hecklers - these burners get sparkin, then..
Your only stand-up routine involves painkillers & PT while you're learning to walk again.

v - Answer. This battle was a close one for me, but I saw 4 to 3 that were quotable, with Answer getting LOTB with the disabled dude shit. Neigh spent some of his time going through the phase of gun bars and flex stuff. Some of it was interesting, but most didn't hit too hard for me. It got really interesting in the second half though, where he was berating Answer a bit. Answer had stuff sprinkled throughout his verse, and the lines where he was sort of bagging on himself to hurt Neigh more were very interesting to me. Disabled dude caught me off guard, and I actually laughed out loud, while his other bar I quoted about him fucking Neighbor's chick was impeccable with the wording. I think that's what set the two off in this match-up, as Neigh's wording was great for a few bars, but the main attack was a bit lackluster for most punches. In Answer's bars, we got more flawless wording, while he attempted to go directly after Neighbor, opting to only use a few gun/flex bars sprinkled throughout. All in all, this was a dope read and should be match of the week.
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This is tough.

I don’t mean to be disrespectful at all, because I guess it’s a style issue, but in various places, I thought both verses had lines that were waaay too long. You can’t drop back to back 20+ syllable lines and have any kind of fluency to them... Even in text, there’s no way those flow at all. If you go with a super long line, it needs to be preceded and succeeded by a short line.

That said, both guys had some very cool concepts... and generally stayed away from the weird and awkward wordplay that I’ve seen in various other battles on here In the last couple days. I think Answer had the nod slightly in terms of originality/wittiness. But, both had some really nice lines/ideas. This was one of the better battles I’ve seen on here so far. So, cheers to that. But, Answer won, IMO.
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I liked now Wave started but felt like he lost that energy at the end. Example and peripheral were my fave. Answer was consistent from intro to out to.

Neighs wording also hurt him a bit. Mvgt - Answer
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Van Gogh opener was real nice
Seen a lot of Sig lines recently but the windows tie in saved it kinda. Still a bit ott
Ozymandias was dumb but hilarious so I like it
Mulan rudge was nice
Polygraph was even nicer
FILA thread ref was decent

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Opener was nice
Jetsons was fire
Beam in her eye was good
Curveball was hilarious
Select fire decent
Something about Mary was nice lmao
Closer was ok

This was close I think it was about even until something about Mary line tipped it for Answer. Both had some great stuff though

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Really dope battle guys. Some fire bars and concepts in this

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