Week 7: Forkz (0-0) vs. Adverse (3-2)— ADVERSE WINS

[Blue Bayou]

NBL Season XIV

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@Aura
@Adverse

[Adverse]

Think I had Aura earlier this season? It’s fine we can run it back

Check

[Blue Bayou]

Originally Posted by Adverse

Think I had Aura earlier this season? It’s fine we can run it back

Check

Rankings shake out how they shake out

I don't have the time or the patience to cross reference every single week as the season progresses

[Adverse]

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

Rankings shake out how they shake out

I don't have the time or the patience to cross reference every single week as the season progresses

Oh that’s fine man I understand I wasn’t complaining I appreciate the work you’re putting in sir

[Blue Bayou]

@Adverse ingot you an opponent

Because of the change you get an automatic ext if needed

Thanks

[forkz]

Bet.

[Adverse]

I'll post tomorrow probably go 10. G'luck

[forkz]

@Adverse sup brody

[forkz]

[Dinner Time]

Have you seein' stars widda hands, b. No Astronaut
I'll leave your Views so mixed up that Biden won't know if you're black or not
I'm BROLIC, you 'gon die. You at the gym is just to look at manly chests
I got the Ad vantage point - 'n I ain't talm bout where he can see Chad the best
Shame how your last love ended. She needed me cuz you were a whiny twat
Every time I opened the door to eat, that pussy was waving like the Chinese spot
Daiiiiiily. Best believe she went to make rounds
I wasn't the only one, that box had retarded numbers like Answers battle breakdowns
Now? We know your wifey is a beard. Low tier one. She's rabid, mate
Your wedding kiss was on some GOOBA shit, just a rat on a faggots face

[Adverse]

Have some respect, flappin his gums dudes manners a mess
Watch your pitch, fork before you get one of them stabbed through your chest
Got the hammer on deck, shots to your belly and melon tear the fella to pieces
Gunplay leave fork twisted without me ever touching em - that’s telekinesis
I’ma gut this dude, You dying when the blades out
Wrap fork in a sheet with this knife like I’m dining at a steak house
And it didn’t take much to tell you’re garbage, b
So confident that I’ll win you could have this bar for free
Always been a quick decision maker, so if you’re walking through the ghetto
And I see a fork in the road, I’ll go straight without hesitation, stompin on the pedal!

[UPN Zuch]

Forkz I literally liked nothing in your verse and your name is fucking retarded.

Originally Posted by forkz

[Dinner Time]

Your best bar

Adverse, good stuff here, the second half was sweet and the steakhouse was a clear LOTB. Good stuff.


Vote - Ad

[Wanderer]

Originally Posted by forkz

[Dinner Time]

Have you seein' stars widda hands, b. No Astronaut
I'll leave your Views so mixed up that Biden won't know if you're black or not
Nah
I'm BROLIC, you 'gon die. You at the gym is just to look at manly chests
I got the Ad vantage point - 'n I ain't talm bout where he can see Chad the best
Nah
Shame how your last love ended. She needed me cuz you were a whiny twat
Every time I opened the door to eat, that pussy was waving like the Chinese spot
What the hell?
Daiiiiiily. Best believe she went to make rounds
I wasn't the only one, that box had retarded numbers like Answers battle breakdowns
Nope
Now? We know your wifey is a beard. Low tier one. She's rabid, mate
Your wedding kiss was on some GOOBA shit, just a rat on a faggots face
Miss

Forkz, I get the faintest whiff of a concept from a couple of your lines but they all need a LOT of work to bring ur verse up to standard

Originally Posted by Adverse

Have some respect, flappin his gums dudes manners a mess
Watch your pitch, fork before you get one of them stabbed through your chest
Ok opener
Got the hammer on deck, shots to your belly and melon tear the fella to pieces
Gunplay leave fork twisted without me ever touching em - that’s telekinesis
Yeh nice
I’ma gut this dude, You dying when the blades out
Wrap fork in a sheet with this knife like I’m dining at a steak house
Ok.. 3rd nameplay in a row if we’re being critical but then it doesn’t really matter, considering what u were up against
And it didn’t take much to tell you’re garbage, b
So confident that I’ll win you could have this bar for free
Obviously throwaway & terrible
Always been a quick decision maker, so if you’re walking through the ghetto
And I see a fork in the road, I’ll go straight without hesitation, stompin on the pedal!
He’s toast

Obviously Adverse runs away with the win. Had well worded punches and clever name plays. Even with a massive miss (intentional) he still takes this

Vote Adverse

[Coop]

Forks

Have you seein' stars widda hands, b. No Astronaut
I'll leave your Views so mixed up that Biden won't know if you're black or not
Got a chuckle outta me
I'm BROLIC, you 'gon die. You at the gym is just to look at manly chests
I got the Ad vantage point - 'n I ain't talm bout where he can see Chad the best
Not a fan of the "... and i aint talkin bout ___" bars. You had something here, just needed a lot of rewording
Shame how your last love ended. She needed me cuz you were a whiny twat
Every time I opened the door to eat, that pussy was waving like the Chinese spot
Not feelin it
Daiiiiiily. Best believe she went to make rounds
I wasn't the only one, that box had retarded numbers like Answers battle breakdowns
Filler
Now? We know your wifey is a beard. Low tier one. She's rabid, mate
Your wedding kiss was on some GOOBA shit, just a rat on a faggots face
Not terrible

3/10

VS

Have some respect, flappin his gums dudes manners a mess
Watch your pitch, fork before you get one of them stabbed through your chest
Nice
Got the hammer on deck, shots to your belly and melon tear the fella to pieces
Gunplay leave fork twisted without me ever touching em - that’s telekinesis
Might be the only gun bar I've ever liked
I’ma gut this dude, You dying when the blades out
Wrap fork in a sheet with this knife like I’m dining at a steak house
Not bad
And it didn’t take much to tell you’re garbage, b
So confident that I’ll win you could have this bar for free
Filler
Always been a quick decision maker, so if you’re walking through the ghetto
And I see a fork in the road, I’ll go straight without hesitation, stompin on the pedal!
Ok

Not bad. One of the few people here who actually use setups properly. 3 straight, and 4/5 NPs ain't great but they were all quality.

8/10




Pretty comfortable win here.

Vote: Adverse

[Victor.]

Not gonna lie adverse has this on his first bar



Fork had some cool ideas tho the 69 line and the battle breakdowns bars had good potential




I think adverse was on a slightly higher level here


Good read

[Resin M-I-C]

ad vantage point and closer were solid ideas, just needed better execution

vs

first 6 lines i fucked with

alot of nameplays but it worked, i mean what else are u gonna do against someone named Forkz lol.. good shit

vote Adverse

[FGR]

Have you seein' stars widda hands, b. No Astronaut
I'll leave your Views so mixed up that Biden won't know if you're black or not
Daiiiiiily. Best believe she went to make rounds
I wasn't the only one, that box had retarded numbers like Answers battle breakdowns
VS
Have some respect, flappin his gums dudes manners a mess
Watch your pitch, fork before you get one of them stabbed through your chest
Got the hammer on deck, shots to your belly and melon tear the fella to pieces
Gunplay leave fork twisted without me ever touching em - that’s telekinesis

Fork needs some work.. you got the idea u just need to get more aggressive n creative..attack ur opponent..the bars I quoted didn't necessarily hit but they had potential.. keep working on your writtens bro.. adverse came cool.. better then the last verse I seen from him.. def burned out on the nameplays.. got boring do something else.. I did like the fork in the road line tho but so many fork plays dulled it..

Vote adverse