05-18-2020, 12:19 PM | #1 |
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Week 7: Sharp (0-0) vs. Sinacog (0-5) - SHARP WINS
NBL Season XIV Rules Due Dates: • Verses are due FRIDAY by 11:59 PM PST. • Voting ends MONDAY ideally • Battles that lack votes may close later. • One sided battles may get closed early. • Extensions are 24 hours, anything longer is a DQ and/or Double DQ • To avoid issues, you are encouraged to PM me your verse in advance Line Limit: • Min. = 10 lines • Max. = 20 lines • The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. Voting: • I do not have time to count links, and I know nobody wants to post them because it’s tedious. Do your part and vote or I’m making house calls. General Rules: • 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts. • 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made. • Feeding = DQ. • Recycling = DQ. • Biting = DQ. • No freeposting, swaying or bitching. • Unless a picture battle is agreed upon, linking to your opponent's picture or posting it means you will disqualified. • A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged. • If your opponent doesn't check in, you still have to post a verse. • Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in. • If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post must match the 1st person's line amount, and can’t post more lines. @Sharp @Sinacog
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05-18-2020, 01:50 PM | #2 |
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Sinacog - AJ The Menace
I'm the dark author; the conglomerate pen' dragon; the rain cry I have insane might; you couldn't 'be sharp' with a blade knife I'm the nocturnal demon; the abrasive chain; the chain of pain I'm insane as sane'; you couldn't 'spit fire' spitting' cocaine' with flames I'm the cenobite pen' dragon; a arsenal of weaponry; planet of destiny I'm the granite of revelries; one 'hit from my circle' and it's axis/axe's of energy I'm the cenobite pen' dragon; the duel of destiny; the duel of precipice I'm the duke of revelries; I 'cracked the mirror match' this is a duel of symmetry I'm the maker of destiny; the maker of pen' author; the destiny sheik I'm the embezzling king; you couldn't get 'over the hill' in the spring.. |
05-18-2020, 02:01 PM | #3 |
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05-21-2020, 10:26 PM | #4 |
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@dull boy I found it. and yeah, this bar's kind of stolen...
But your verses are @Aero after a night out. characterized by a semi-colon cuz Aero gets fucked in the butt get it whatever fuck you Sin da GAWD! Think that shit's genuine? You must be dumb or something godamn tho, you're a rare breed... the kind that comes from cousins fucking I really gotta clown the shit you pen though? tragic I'm tHe dRaGoN's fIrE; SatAn's HELL's fuRy... try Asperger's syndrome, faggot you're quantity over quality. a fuckin shill artist youd 'DROP AND GIVE ME 20' at any moment. one of the voices in your head a drill sergeant? My guy... I've been rating bars awhile. You gotta be one of the worst, kid If the bible raped a thesaurus in @sraL playroom, the abortion might resemble one of your verses |
05-21-2020, 10:33 PM | #5 |
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Sharp I could tell you keyed this but I really like your style. The closer was the only bar that was a bust. The rest of your stuff was clever and witty.
SIN-GOD. Your verse was not as good as I had hoped. There was nothing there. I hate to vote against the better half of my crew, but you just didn’t bring it this week brother. Love you. Vote- Sharp |
05-21-2020, 10:34 PM | #6 | |
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05-21-2020, 11:29 PM | #7 |
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Sin just ripped that shit... when he said he was the dark dragon and an author.... that took it for me.. vote sinacog
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05-21-2020, 11:56 PM | #8 |
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I'm the dark author; the conglomerate pen' dragon; the rain cry
I have insane might; you couldn't 'be sharp' with a blade knife played concept I'm the nocturnal demon; the abrasive chain; the chain of pain I'm insane as sane'; you couldn't 'spit fire' spitting' cocaine' with flames nah I'm the cenobite pen' dragon; a arsenal of weaponry; planet of destiny I'm the granite of revelries; one 'hit from my circle' and it's axis/axe's of energy be careful, you almost accidentally wrote a punch I'm the cenobite pen' dragon; the duel of destiny; the duel of precipice I'm the duke of revelries; I 'cracked the mirror match' this is a duel of symmetry nah I'm the maker of destiny; the maker of pen' author; the destiny sheik I'm the embezzling king; you couldn't get 'over the hill' in the spring.. nah @dull boy I found it. and yeah, this bar's kind of stolen... But your verses are @Aero after a night out. characterized by a semi-colon nah not digging it Sin da GAWD! Think that shit's genuine? You must be dumb or something godamn tho, you're a rare breed... the kind that comes from cousins fucking cool I really gotta clown the shit you pen though? tragic I'm tHe dRaGoN's fIrE; SatAn's HELL's fuRy... try Asperger's syndrome, faggot kinda funny but simple you're quantity over quality. a fuckin shill artist youd 'DROP AND GIVE ME 20' at any moment. one of the voices in your head a drill sergeant? think this wouldve hit harder if it was something he said My guy... I've been rating bars awhile. You gotta be one of the worst, kid If the bible raped a thesaurus in @sraL playroom, the abortion might resemble one of your verses kinda funny, these types of lars bars do seem to come up a lot rare breed lotb mvgt sharp |
05-22-2020, 12:05 AM | #9 |
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i'm not trying to sway or anything..
but cog said 'im the duke of revelries'.. I don't know how you could vote against that. If I could vote for Cog twice, I would. I don't mean to downplay sharp here but sicog was clearly the winner here.. I'm the cenobite pen' dragon; a arsenal of weaponry; planet of destiny that is fire how he wrapped the whole world thing, and brought it back to the planet we were on, i'm not saying that shit was deep... but it was deep hate votes against sincog imo
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05-23-2020, 12:58 AM | #11 |
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I'm the dark author; the conglomerate pen' dragon; the rain cry
I have insane might; you couldn't 'be sharp' with a blade knife I'm the cenobite pen' dragon; a arsenal of weaponry; planet of destiny I'm the granite of revelries; one 'hit from my circle' and it's axis/axe's of energy VS I really gotta clown the shit you pen though? tragic I'm tHe dRaGoN's fIrE; SatAn's HELL's fuRy... try Asperger's syndrome, faggot What I quoted from sin wasn't good... But for him it is great... I can see you slightly getting better and trying to be more direct with your attacks.. but you still gotta get more creative n hit harder.. sharp I thought the bar I quoted was funny... Wasn't very good lol but made me laugh...rest of the verse was mild..light jabs..but I'm ur u wrote this quick . VOTE SHARP
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05-23-2020, 11:28 AM | #12 |
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Sinacog your verse wasn’t what I was expecting but it read quite well and flowed. Just needed some disses. Kind of like one of these t shirts with the grim reaper riding a Harley but in the form of a text verse
Sharp I liked the verse. Drill sergeant was nice and the first 4 were also funny. End felt rushed but you did more than enough to win. Vote - Sharp |
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