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Week 7: Barcotic (2-2) vs. Wanderer (2-2) -WANDERER WINS
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Old chap? Okay kiddo
Steel pipe circling dude, yall already kno what it'll certainly do Belt in this Tyke Wand. Oh and his waist will go from purple to blue When I fire my old rifle at this joke, will help get to wander? Cuz my Enfield will turn this player to a ghost without kevin costner I plan on leaving big tracks for when the pigs flash their lights They'll scrape Wander off a path...and not care bc he did that in life I really don't give a fuck too, I'ma rush dude w some monsters 2 wessons, zoo entrance; pay a price when I come thru w Revolvers I keep a chrome close, ready to leave homo shot to death Have a brush w/ a sig that could bring back photoshop requests English fgt you not a threat, don't get offended if I slap mouth Your idea of a Tea KO is drinking a good blend until you pass out
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05-19-2020, 05:26 AM | #5 |
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Wanderers Verse
Who’s barcotic? A whining faggot who sways coz he’s a wack, unappealing geek That answer took u by surprise.. tho none of us were shocked when we HE killed u last week My boys all equipped with tools that’ll end ur fuckin life Don’t know what kinda company Barkeep... but they never shook cans or put anyone on ice ya’ll childlike when wand slay, fists leave u slow like an off day Bounce u off walls & countless obstacles til ur buried in a pit, shit’s like soft play an unfit blob who can’t even jog. My workout heavy... ur mad man if u flex If u pullin out them Heinies it’s cos I broke beer bottles & jabbed em in ur neck Last thing u see’s the beam thru ur whip. High velocity metal carve thru walls Silencer on.. Everyone hearing a whistle & a crash like lengthy cartoon falls Might wield the battle-axe! dream up a chance against me & It’ll shatter that Russian roulette... Im scrapping’ that. It’s the grey wedge sticking out ur forehead like a trapper hat
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05-19-2020, 01:14 PM | #7 |
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Barc- I get the taekwando or how ever you spell it bar but it was to forced with that wordplay an shit, the enfield bar I get with the field of dreams reference decent not great, wander of a path was nice I fuck with that, gun bars in text not feeling at I get the revolving bar concept at the entrance but it’s a gun bar, the sig gun bar is decent the punch is cool but again a gun bar in text?, tea Ko was meh at best kinda cringe.
- not a bad verse maybe the gun bar shit is the new meta ? But not a fun of it reminds me of Charron acting gangster not a good fit. Can tell you kinda got lazy tho or underestimated opponent which hopefully still works out for you. Wand- answer personal is cool just kind of bland, barkeep is LOTB so far I fuck with that heavy, soft play bar didn’t hit for me unless I’m missing something?, pulling out them heinies wtf like showing ass ? I’m confused on this bar an it’s a pause worthy bar, whistle and crash is ok nothing over the top but cool, closer was ok as well nothing to major tho - you had line of battle but also had a bar or two I didn’t understand the concept so if you can please PM me so I can update my vote accordingly Vote - Wand
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Before I vote, does Heinies = high knees? @Wanderer
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Tyke wand? No idea Zoo entrance was nice Off path Photoshop Closer was nice Overall way too focussed on forcing gun bars but it flowed good Wanderer Opener was clever Barkeep line is dope Soft play line needs better wording Rest of the verse was just average Close battle tough to decide. Barcotic had too many really forced gun bars and wanderer tapered off a bit. I’ll give it to Wanderer just because it was less samey Vote - Wanderer |
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Wander off path & zoo entrance were great from Barc. Some shit was light. Wasn’t feeling that opener at all though. Same with the closer. Wanderer had the bar keep line and lengthy cartoons. Opener was decent, could have used a more creative take. Heinies for me personally was a stretch. It works (high knees) but I’ve never referred to multiple Heinekens as “heinies”. Read this a few times but I’m leaning Wand in a close one.
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Steel pipe circling dude, yall already kno what it'll certainly do
Belt in this Tyke Wand. Oh and his waist will go from purple to blue When I fire my old rifle at this joke, will help get to wander? Cuz my Enfield will turn this player to a ghost without kevin costner I really don't give a fuck too, I'ma rush dude w some monsters 2 wessons, zoo entrance; pay a price when I come thru w Revolvers I keep a chrome close, ready to leave homo shot to death Have a brush w/ a sig that could bring back photoshop requests vs. Who’s barcotic? A whining faggot who sways coz he’s a wack, unappealing geek That answer took u by surprise.. tho none of us were shocked when we HE killed u last week My boys all equipped with tools that’ll end ur fuckin life Don’t know what kinda company Barkeep... but they never shook cans or put anyone on ice an unfit blob who can’t even jog. My workout heavy... ur mad man if u flex If u pullin out them Heinies it’s cos I broke beer bottles & jabbed em in ur neck Last thing u see’s the beam thru ur whip. High velocity metal carve thru walls Silencer on.. Everyone hearing a whistle & a crash like lengthy cartoon falls First off, props to both of you for posting early. Thought you both had decent drops, although I would’ve liked to see you prep a bit more.. each verse seemed a little hurried. I get why some ppl feel like Barc’s opening nameplay came off a bit corny, but the punch more than made up for it, imo. The last 3 I quoted from him were solid punches; not haymakers, but good bars. Wanderer had the best drop I’ve seen him come w/ yet.. “Barkeep” & “cartoon falls” were super solid bars, but I felt like some of his other lines suffered from wording issues which detracted from the impact. I think’s Barc’s verse was more direct & his misses were slightly better than Wand’s, however I could see it going either way. I’m a fan of consistency & how clean the punch rolls off, so I’ve gotta go w/ Barc here. Great read, fellas v/ Barcotic
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05-21-2020, 06:50 PM | #13 |
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Steel pipe circling dude, yall already kno what it'll certainly do
Belt in this Tyke Wand. Oh and his waist will go from purple to blue I know this has been the line a lot of people have harped on but I don't hate it. The wp is obviously a little bit awkward in reality and I don't see any evidence anywhere that blue bruises are worse than purple bruises, but the overall the idea is dope and it's a decent bar When I fire my old rifle at this joke, will help get to wander? Cuz my Enfield will turn this player to a ghost without kevin costner Seems like an obscure reference but this is ok I plan on leaving big tracks for when the pigs flash their lights They'll scrape Wander off a path...and not care bc he did that in life Ok idea, i think the execution could've been better I really don't give a fuck too, I'ma rush dude w some monsters 2 wessons, zoo entrance; pay a price when I come thru w Revolvers I'm not 100% sure that every zoo entrance actually has revolving doors, so this might not land for some people - but I've experienced this and I know what you're talking about. and I think maybe you could've extended this with something about animals to make it hit harder, but its ok I keep a chrome close, ready to leave homo shot to death Have a brush w/ a sig that could bring back photoshop requests I think you could've done a little more with this English fgt you not a threat, don't get offended if I slap mouth Your idea of a Tea KO is drinking a good blend until you pass out I really wasn't feeling this at all, I know you're a much better writer than this Who’s barcotic? A whining faggot who sways coz he’s a wack, unappealing geek That answer took u by surprise.. tho none of us were shocked when we HE killed u last week solid opener My boys all equipped with tools that’ll end ur fuckin life Don’t know what kinda company Barkeep... but they never shook cans or put anyone on ice the barkeep idea is is played but the overall execution here was decent and it was a strong bar ya’ll childlike when wand slay, fists leave u slow like an off day Bounce u off walls & countless obstacles til ur buried in a pit, shit’s like soft play Nah, I'm not feeling this at all sorry. The associations you've got going on are too abstract and "softplay" is kind of an obscure term an unfit blob who can’t even jog. My workout heavy... ur mad man if u flex If u pullin out them Heinies it’s cos I broke beer bottles & jabbed em in ur neck I'm going off the assumption that this is a high knees wp, this is solid Last thing u see’s the beam thru ur whip. High velocity metal carve thru walls Silencer on.. Everyone hearing a whistle & a crash like lengthy cartoon falls Eh not really feeling this, sound effect bars are already a risky endeavor but there's no world where a gun would sustain a whistling sound long enough to replicate a cartoon fall Might wield the battle-axe! dream up a chance against me & It’ll shatter that Russian roulette... Im scrapping’ that. It’s the grey wedge sticking out ur forehead like a trapper hat Nah, not really digging this association with calling it a grey wedge. highlights Steel pipe circling dude, yall already kno what it'll certainly do Belt in this Tyke Wand. Oh and his waist will go from purple to blue I keep a chrome close, ready to leave homo shot to death Have a brush w/ a sig that could bring back photoshop requests vs. Who’s barcotic? A whining faggot who sways coz he’s a wack, unappealing geek That answer took u by surprise.. tho none of us were shocked when we HE killed u last week My boys all equipped with tools that’ll end ur fuckin life Don’t know what kinda company Barkeep... but they never shook cans or put anyone on ice an unfit blob who can’t even jog. My workout heavy... ur mad man if u flex If u pullin out them Heinies it’s cos I broke beer bottles & jabbed em in ur neck Wanderer's verse had highers highs and lower lows, and tbh I think when he missed he reallly missed. I'm not gonna lie, Barc was much more polished overall and a bit more consistent, but if I were to rank all the bars in this battle, I think wanderer has at least 3 out of the top 4 bars of this battle. I think this is just a case where Barc came in and expected an easy win, so he threw together a quick verse and wanderer stepped up his game and landed some decent punches and I don't think Barc had anything strong enough to really control the momentum in this battle. At the end of the day, wanderer is doing what people who elevate do. He's faced with a tough opponent, drops a verse that's better than what people are used to, and ends up pulling off an upset. Hopefully he keeps trying to improve on himself because I think he can be a top competitor with some more consistency. mvgt - Wand Last edited by Answer; 05-21-2020 at 06:53 PM. |
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Lmaooo please close this before anyone else shows their retardations
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Steel pipe circling dude, yall already kno what it'll certainly do
Belt in this Tyke Wand. Oh and his waist will go from purple to blue lmao just no When I fire my old rifle at this joke, will help get to wander? Cuz my Enfield will turn this player to a ghost without kevin costner i don’t get it I plan on leaving big tracks for when the pigs flash their lights They'll scrape Wander off a path...and not care bc he did that in life i don’t get this either I really don't give a fuck too, I'ma rush dude w some monsters 2 wessons, zoo entrance; pay a price when I come thru w Revolvers i think this bar is missing a punch I keep a chrome close, ready to leave homo shot to death Have a brush w/ a sig that could bring back photoshop requests nah English fgt you not a threat, don't get offended if I slap mouth Your idea of a Tea KO is drinking a good blend until you pass out this is not ok Vs Who’s barcotic? A whining faggot who sways coz he’s a wack, unappealing geek That answer took u by surprise.. tho none of us were shocked when we HE killed u last week decent, wording hurt it My boys all equipped with tools that’ll end ur fuckin life Don’t know what kinda company Barkeep... but they never shook cans or put anyone on ice alright ya’ll childlike when wand slay, fists leave u slow like an off day Bounce u off walls & countless obstacles til ur buried in a pit, shit’s like soft play the flow was amazing but the punch was just awful an unfit blob who can’t even jog. My workout heavy... ur mad man if u flex If u pullin out them Heinies it’s cos I broke beer bottles & jabbed em in ur neck pretty cool Last thing u see’s the beam thru ur whip. High velocity metal carve thru walls Silencer on.. Everyone hearing a whistle & a crash like lengthy cartoon falls hell yeah Might wield the battle-axe! dream up a chance against me & It’ll shatter that Russian roulette... Im scrapping’ that. It’s the grey wedge sticking out ur forehead like a trapper hat pretty stretched and just not hittin for me Idk I have this pretty one sided. Barcotic came with kiddy punches and wanderer took the surprise W here Vote Wanderer |
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Steel pipe circling dude, yall already kno what it'll certainly do Belt in this Tyke Wand. Oh and his waist will go from purple to blue Not feelin the np, punch was stale When I fire my old rifle at this joke, will help get to wander? Cuz my Enfield will turn this player to a ghost without kevin costner Above avg filler I plan on leaving big tracks for when the pigs flash their lights They'll scrape Wander off a path...and not care bc he did that in life Ok, but the punch is too statement-ish I really don't give a fuck too, I'ma rush dude w some monsters 2 wessons, zoo entrance; pay a price when I come thru w Revolvers Not feelin this for a text battle I keep a chrome close, ready to leave homo shot to death Have a brush w/ a sig that could bring back photoshop requests Cool English fgt you not a threat, don't get offended if I slap mouth Your idea of a Tea KO is drinking a good blend until you pass out Decent 5/10 VS Wanderer Who’s barcotic? A whining faggot who sways coz he’s a wack, unappealing geek That answer took u by surprise.. tho none of us were shocked when we HE killed u last week Not a huge fan of the "you lost to ___" bars. My boys all equipped with tools that’ll end ur fuckin life Don’t know what kinda company Barkeep... but they never shook cans or put anyone on ice Cool ya’ll childlike when wand slay, fists leave u slow like an off day Bounce u off walls & countless obstacles til ur buried in a pit, shit’s like soft play I don't like the wording of the punch. an unfit blob who can’t even jog. My workout heavy... ur mad man if u flex If u pullin out them Heinies it’s cos I broke beer bottles & jabbed em in ur neck Above avg filler Last thing u see’s the beam thru ur whip. High velocity metal carve thru walls Silencer on.. Everyone hearing a whistle & a crash like lengthy cartoon falls Creative, but not really dissing him Might wield the battle-axe! dream up a chance against me & It’ll shatter that Russian roulette... Im scrapping’ that. It’s the grey wedge sticking out ur forehead like a trapper hat A bit stretched. 5/10 I keep a chrome close, ready to leave homo shot to death Have a brush w/ a sig that could bring back photoshop requests VS My boys all equipped with tools that’ll end ur fuckin life Don’t know what kinda company Barkeep... but they never shook cans or put anyone on ice TKO, Enfield, path > Heines, Whistle V Barcotic in a close one |
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Opener was a stretch but creative Enfield was similar Wander off the path dope np coulda been worded better Zoo entrance was again similar Photoshop seemed played didnt like Tea ko was terrible Wand Answer was boring Barkeep is hella played, plus you dont shake cans wtf drinks arent spraypaint Playpit had real potential but had wording problems Heinies was a stretch but not bad Cartoon fall seemed light Trapper hat seemed alrighr if a bit vague Good battle i liked barc more |
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