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Old 05-18-2020, 12:07 PM   #1
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Old 05-18-2020, 05:14 PM   #2
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Old 05-18-2020, 05:28 PM   #3
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Pic battle? 10lines?
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Old 05-18-2020, 11:10 PM   #4
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Just reg. Pic battles aren’t really my forte
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Old 05-23-2020, 12:39 AM   #5
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@Letterman I only went 10
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Last week showed us your frail....so that tough guy shit? You can save it
Neighbor left you chalked up... his kids are now playing hopscotch on ur pavement
I'll sneak in ya crib when your relaxing, jump out & make things obscene
attack this Mandarin dinner cuz my fat ass loves asian cuisine
I bang them sticks like a drummer. So those fist ain't hurting me
Letter better run before he gets struck biatec like minting celtic currency
Your getting shot on the spot bitch. Fuck punches... I don't fight fair
I'll load up n send bullets inlet, then dump his body off a boat right there
You'll be floating lifeless. it'll look like you were attacked by sharks during a swim
No joke the gunnel rip dude apart & those type of fish will eat whats left of him
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Old 05-23-2020, 03:02 AM   #6
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U being fat is biblical. Seeing proof about ur weight is astounding dude
Cuz I’ve read about Miracle’s, & if he missed a meal we could feed five thousand too
Food has fucked ur life up. It’ll take years to erase those damages
We wont see Miracle whipped into shape, til his fat ass puts down all those mayo sandwiches
Caught him his whip like “u getting slumped today”
Poor bastard tried to get out, but the metal hit his mug & left him sunken place
How to get away with murder: 1) Grab the snub. 2) Clap at him
I held the nose & wet him up.. the description of the crime sounded like a baptism
U live a worthless life, & to your son you’re a fuckin hack
At least you leave an impression every day, when this fat fuck gets off the couch to grab another snack
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Old 05-23-2020, 03:13 AM   #7
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Old 05-23-2020, 03:53 AM   #8
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@Letterman I only went 10
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Last week showed us your frail....so that tough guy shit? You can save it
Neighbor left you chalked up... his kids are now playing hopscotch on ur pavement
I had a hopscotch bar last week.. this was very different tho. Worded well but wasn’t really feeling it
I'll sneak in ya crib when your relaxing, jump out & make things obscene
attack this Mandarin dinner cuz my fat ass loves asian cuisine
Funny & wordplays cool but kinda insulting urself
I bang them sticks like a drummer. So those fist ain't hurting me
Letter better run before he gets struck biatec like minting celtic currency
Nice
Your getting shot on the spot bitch. Fuck punches... I don't fight fair
I'll load up n send bullets inlet, then dump his body off a boat right there
This ok
You'll be floating lifeless. it'll look like you were attacked by sharks during a swim
No joke the gunnel rip dude apart & those type of fish will eat whats left of him
Wordplay’s fine just doesn’t hit too hard
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U being fat is biblical. Seeing proof about ur weight is astounding dude
Cuz I’ve read about Miracle’s, & if he missed a meal we could feed five thousand too
Nice
Food has fucked ur life up. It’ll take years to erase those damages
We wont see Miracle whipped into shape, til his fat ass puts down all those mayo sandwiches
Lol, nice again
Caught him his whip like “u getting slumped today”
Poor bastard tried to get out, but the metal hit his mug & left him sunken place
It’s missing
How to get away with murder: 1) Grab the snub. 2) Clap at him
I held the nose & wet him up.. the description of the crime sounded like a baptism
I did a baptism bar a few months back so this didn’t feel fresh to me but it was executed well
U live a worthless life, & to your son you’re a fuckin hack
At least you leave an impression every day, when this fat fuck gets off the couch to grab another snack
It’s ok

Well, this not the easiest one to call but le me recap.. I’ve got feed the 5,000 as my LOTB followed by miracle whip and then FGR’s biatec line. Aside from that one miss from letter, I was feeling more of his bars overall soooo...

Vote letterman

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Old 05-23-2020, 11:25 AM   #9
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FGR
That Mandarin bar was hilarious caught me off guard
Biatec
Like the carry over punch in the last four but the wording could’ve been better ‘those type of fish’ seemed awkward
Nice verse

Letterman
Feeding 5000 great opener
Miracle whip nice again
Left impression/couch was a nice closer

Overall this was pretty close. Letterman had the best moments but a couple of misses for me. FGR was pretty consistent throughout. I think if his concepts were worded better he may have snuck this but Letterman’s first 4 and closer were good enough to take it.

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Old 05-23-2020, 02:31 PM   #10
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FGR: Biatec, Inlet
Lows: opener, I think the closer flip on was too obv here..

Letterman: Miracle Whip, opener, baptism line was oook
Lows: closer

Pretty cool, short battle here... Although some stuff seems familiar that I read off RB or elsewhere. (Mandarin) - that said it's pretty neck & neck. I liked FGRs angles by a bit. I have Letter here for a bit more overall polish.

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Old 05-23-2020, 02:54 PM   #11
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FGR, I don’t know if you do this every week because this is the first I’ve seen you in a battle, but you force the wordplay too much. One dimensional verse and the wording was off. Couple clever plays but they didn’t amount to much. Sorry my man, just wasn’t feeling it.

Letterman, opener was cool, next bar was solid and I liked the baptism line personally. Your stuff was worded better and the structure was solid. Cool verse.


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Old 05-23-2020, 05:09 PM   #12
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Last week showed us your frail....so that tough guy shit? You can save it
Neighbor left you chalked up... his kids are now playing hopscotch on ur pavement
No harshness to the ending. Also not a fan of the "you lost to ___ last week" bars
I'll sneak in ya crib when your relaxing, jump out & make things obscene
attack this Mandarin dinner cuz my fat ass loves asian cuisine
Not much of a diss
I bang them sticks like a drummer. So those fist ain't hurting me
Letter better run before he gets struck biatec like minting celtic currency
Wp straight, but "he better run...."? Not strong wording
Your getting shot on the spot bitch. Fuck punches... I don't fight fair
I'll load up n send bullets inlet, then dump his body off a boat right there
Not a diss
You'll be floating lifeless. it'll look like you were attacked by sharks during a swim
No joke the gunnel rip dude apart & those type of fish will eat whats left of him
Not a diss

Not feelin much. The last 4 punches were way too statement-ish.

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U being fat is biblical. Seeing proof about ur weight is astounding dude
Cuz I’ve read about Miracle’s, & if he missed a meal we could feed five thousand too
Lol, nice
Food has fucked ur life up. It’ll take years to erase those damages
We wont see Miracle whipped into shape, til his fat ass puts down all those mayo sandwiches
Good, but lessened because it's the second fat joke in a row
Caught him his whip like “u getting slumped today”
Poor bastard tried to get out, but the metal hit his mug & left him sunken place
Not feelin it
How to get away with murder: 1) Grab the snub. 2) Clap at him
I held the nose & wet him up.. the description of the crime sounded like a baptism
Not a diss
U live a worthless life, & to your son you’re a fuckin hack
At least you leave an impression every day, when this fat fuck gets off the couch to grab another snack
Above avg filler

Started strong, fell off. First two bars won the battle.

6/10

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FGR

All of his lines were pretty good, I got the biatec thing because I can read inbetween the lines but it seemed like a really obscure reference.

my favorite line was I'll sneak in ya crib when your relaxing, jump out & make things obscene
attack this Mandarin dinner cuz my fat ass loves asian cuisine


it was witty/funny and I haven't heard the madarin thing before. Overall I thought all of FGR's lines were about as good/potent as all the others... none of the lines were bad but none were mind blowing or anything.

lets see what lettermans got that could be enought to beat him... i'm voting as i'm readinf for the first time...


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How to get away with murder: 1) Grab the snub. 2) Clap at him
I held the nose & wet him up.. the description of the crime sounded like a baptism

that was dope, gun bars are kind of an easy cop out... but basically every line of FGR's was a gun bar.. and to me this one was the best of the battle

U being fat is biblical. Seeing proof about ur weight is astounding dude
Cuz I’ve read about Miracle’s, & if he missed a meal we could feed five thousand too

that was my favorite line of the battle

Overall I just looked at other votes, I try not to so I don't bias mine... but I'd just say Letterman was better, liked the way he worded things and was slightly more fresh. Other than the mayo sandwhich line.. that shit didn't even rhyme. But yeah.. looks like everyone voting against FGR... I think it was a lot closer than a shut out for sure. But yeah...

vote - letterman

and to letterman also your battle against Neighbor whatever, it was last week or week before I voted for you twice and whoever kept deleting my vote... I like Neighbor and I think he's good, didn't read the over all votes on that... but I voted for you and its bullshit niggas can just delete votes for no reason. *edited because I put Trouble instead of Neighbor, got the names mixed up*


anyway good showing boys, neither of you sucked.


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Old 05-23-2020, 09:27 PM   #14
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biatec - bit obscure as wordplay but we've all been there, executed well though
inlet - this was okay again wouldn't know the word/link to tie in straight off the bat though.

Madarin been done a few time and better tbh. Always seen it as man daring as well but accents and all that.

Letter

opener - decent jab got half a nose exhale
mayo sand etcs -not as good as opener but follows well
sunken place - sunken place was a weird phrase even though I know what you mean, okay with all the tie ins still workrd well
baptism- seen similar but you added in the nose detail and it was delivered well so okay

I got let pretty easy here. Fgr was okay here but Letterman put up a pretty solid verse.

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